Reviews by Southernpur-rica
8 Seconds to Win by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

8 seconds

 

Running from a past that nearly killed her, Isabella found herself in the boons of Texas where it finally caught up with her in the least likely of places. Was it coincidence or fate when she ran into the local riding legend armed with a rifle and a killer southern drawl? AU/AH All my normal disclaimers apply. *REPOST* 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 9041
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Naw, they're making great strides and being truthful.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Naw, thes two are too cute!!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, they said their sorrys and he's already putting his hands on her.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hopefully they'll keep talking and working through it.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I do so love her Uncle Marsh 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Woohoo!!! At least he's truly straight forward with her. I just hope he'll be able to show patience and she'll be able to trust him.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Her aunt and uncle are gems and just the protection she needs. 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She's stronger than she realizes and Edward will pay.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Cocky brothers indeed. I like Hoss though 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad Charlie likes Peter!!! And being born in the south, but raised military and living all over, it is possible for your accent to change, a lot.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well.... I guess Charlie changed his mind... I did thoroughly enjoy them being at the hotel. Hopefully Charlie will apologize 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank goodness she's not pregnant! 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I like Al! 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I like the guys!!! I'm surprised that they haven't been a little Gaga over Bella yet though, even if they are his boys.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Seems Al has boundary issues 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It's a baby!!!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 17: *Chapter 17*: Epilogue

Naw, I really liked this story, I feel that the last few chapters were a little rushed and didn't really go into what all happened with everyone like the rest of the story. But I loved it nonetheless.

Summary: Past Featured Story

waffle

 

Category: Twilight AU

Summary: Life is full of funny twists and turns. Who would have guessed a stop for breakfast would impact so many lives? Whether you like yours scattered, smothered, covered, chunked, or topped, you just might find your destiny at Waffle House. PBJ. Collaboration with happyghost. 1st Pl Public Vote WINNER, and Best Non-Canon in the 2018 For the Love of Jasper Redux Contest.

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Title: She Wasn’t on the Menu at Waffle House

Author: collaboration with happyghost!  

Characters / Pairing: PBJ, Peter/Bella/Jasper

Genre: action, humor   

Rating: MA

Beta/Pre-Reader

Banner by: GeezerWench

Words: total 12,852

Prompt/inspiration: happyghost, Waffle House, and the 2018 For the Love of Jasper Redux Contest

Complete. 8 chapters

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.

A/N: It was a fun contest, and even better working with happyghost! 1st Place Winner in the Public Vote, and voted Best Non-Canon! Thanks to everyone who voted!

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4747010/happyghost

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12947 Read Count: 7227
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2018 Updated: 07 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Waffle House chapter 5

I can’t wait for Bella to wake up and hopefully have both Jasper and Peter as mates!!



Author's Response:

both Jasper and Peter as mates!!

 

It would be a dream come true! *swoon*

Had some internet issues—9 month old puppy thought the cable was delicious.

 

Happyghost and I thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

dont

 

The Bella who arrives to live with Charlie is nothing like people expected. She's anything but shy, she's graceful, stylish and outgoing. Her looks could stop traffic. How will the Cullens react to being last week's news?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Garrett
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53333 Read Count: 12690
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2018 Updated: 05 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Wolf Power

Loved this!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Got love us some Garrett, it's one of my favourites too xx

Alexis

Summary:

With Charlie killed in a robbery gone bad, the townspeople of Forks dropping off like flies under mysterious circumstances or disappearing altogether, Bella decides to far away in hopes of luring trouble away from her childhood home, knowing its the work of the scorned lover of a dead mate. Little did Bella know that her tribulations were about to start when she accidentally moves into the territory of the wrong vampire.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10238 Read Count: 1313
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2018 Updated: 11 Jan 2019
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So far has been great, hope this continues.

Summary:

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When Victoria sends Bella back in time, she's recruited into Maria's newborn army. There she meets the Major, who's never encountered a newborn quite like her. In the absence of everything familiar, Bella glues herself to his side. So what's the Major to do when a determined newborn decides to claim him as family? Peter hasn't got a clue, but tries to help him figure it out anyway.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35039 Read Count: 2480
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2019 Updated: 27 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Silent Soldier

Even though Carlos sent her back, I kinda like him. Funny how Peter was already steering him in Bella's direction.



Author's Response:

Oh, Peter is definitely a puppet master, pulling the strings behind the scenes. ;) He wanted Bella sent back for a reason.

I'm glad you like Carlos- I like him too. Lol. I wasn't planning to include him in the rest of the story, but now I like him too much to leave him out. He'll meet Bella again.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Army Brats

Absolutely love Peter!!!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Eye Opener

Bella is awesome! I hate that she still has moments of doubt, but I cannot wait to see her in all her glory. Jasper better catch on quick or he'll have his ass handed to him. I love Peter. Can't wait for more! I do so hope your health is doing better.



Author's Response:

Lol, glad you're enjoying her! I like my Bella with a bite.

Yes, turbulent times are ahead for Jasper. Change is never easy, especially for a vampire.

Summary:

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What if Bella had always been a secret adrenaline junky? When Bella discovers Jasper's been manipulating her emotions for months, it brings out a side of her the Cullens aren't expecting. Like the tipping of a domino, it starts a chain reaction that begins with a breakup and ends with Bella embracing a whole new lifestyle. Turns out there's nothing quite like a good rush...

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32868 Read Count: 2024
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2019 Updated: 10 Jun 2021
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Freedom Calls

Love this story! Just found you and your wriand can't wait for more!!

Summary:

TCHBTE

 

: My father says a new family are moving here to the quiet town of Forks, poor them. I hope they can cope with the Supernatural because it's the norm around here.  Bella/Jasper Twilight AU

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45843 Read Count: 5003
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2020 Updated: 21 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 7: The Power Of Love

Love this story!!! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you're enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 2: He Feels The Feels, But Why?

I wonder if Jasper will figure out they're witches and all the more



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Oh he will, he's on the ball and enjoying it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Veritable Who's Who

Really like this so far, very different from anything else that I've read.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah, It's different from anything I've written before lol xx

Alexis