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Bio:
Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?
Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?
Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Someone Like Me
He was married?!?! I don't like that he tried to replace her without trying to find her. For him to say that he would steal her away from a boyfriend and be a step-father to her kids, or even consider some way to break her marriage doesn't seem like someone that would marry a replacement.
I like that they are being honest with each other and actually sharing their feelings from the last 10 years.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom
Oh wow! Chapter 4 is shocking. I didn't expect Sebastian to be that rough and...vulgar? Even though I think he's yummy, his actions and words killed the mood for me. I expected their first time to be fast and frantic, but the gaging and choking made me grimace.
I understand that he is a dominant lover and she may be naturally submissive, but I just didn't find scene realistic. I would expect her to at least pull back a bit and adjust herself, but she just takes it.
Anyways, I like the premise of the story. Long, lost love and they're bestfriends, love it! I think this has a lot of potential. If you make it to next week, I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Good Luck
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - My Boys
I'm so glad that Sebastian apologized. I'm a bit weirded out by Sam opening Olivia's bedroom door when he knew Sebastian was there. Also, her walking around almost naked in front of Sam threw me off guard as well. Didn't Sam have feelings for Olivia? Are those feelings gone now that Sebastian is back and now that he has Kate? Love how they are getting to know each other all over again. Nice to see Olivia get emotional. Good Job!