Reviews by momof2jcs
Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
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A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

Well it wouldn't be a story if it ended right there between the two of them so I imagine that you are going to bring them back together again somehow. I am a sucker for lover reigning over everything so I want this Edward to realize he is an ass and change and of course Bella will love him in spite of it.

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The doctors at this busy, New York hospital all have the same goals; saving lives, setting the on-call rooms on fire, and maybe, falling in love? Grey's Anatomy concept with Twilight character twist. Canon Couples. Rated: M - Romance/Humor - Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199786 Read Count: 177642
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I never watched Grey's Anatomy but going through you tube one day I found the video of this scene - you re-wrote it into your story nicely.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Take a Chance on Me

Just want to say I thanks - your story is great. I just found it and finished this chapter and I will continue until I am up to date. Thank you also for your recommendations - looking forward to checking those out.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Executioner's Song

Ok finishhed reading up to this point. Love it!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delayed reply - thanks so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying the story. :) 

Sandra

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WOW-that was intense!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yes he is. He needs to get over himself and his hang ups about their relationship. They'd be great together if he would just get his head out of his *ss. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Gonna be greedy and say I'm more anxious for the meeting.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 295: Chapter 295

Naughty Noc....you like making us beg for it don't you!!! Please, please, can we have another chapter?

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Ok - so I hope eventually that this leads to Edward (even though he is a vampire)have sex with Bella. Is he ever going to make face to face contact??

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Please don't let nothing happen between Tonya and Edward right now. Although it wouldn't be wrong since he hasn't actually met Bella in person - it just wouldn't feel right.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Mmmmm...maybe he will whisper "butterfly" in her ear at the end of the meeting and she will finally know who her sir is....one can hope. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Hot!! When are they going to have their first encounter in the playroom - hopefully soon???

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Instant hard on when he smells her - of course. Will he be able to handle it or will he cave and tell her he's her sir - maybe they can have a little office romp.....

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Woo hoo - finally!! Can't wait.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Still here - I know he's a vamp and she's human but you have to allow him to touch her, taste her, f*ck her...it would make it so much better...please and thank you.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Ok again why??? It seems Edwards has pretty good control of himself. He should be able to touch her and have sex without her without the use of toys.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Getting to the good stuff now - thank you!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Intense - he's not as in control as I thought - but it has to work - I need intimacy between my Edward and Bella.
BTW - I like your notes at the end as much as the story....

Author's Response:

if you read Involuntary Rapture, my author notes have almost morphed into their own fic.. a drabble of sorts with about ten characters, three of which are my three personalities :)

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

At least 10.....can't believe Edward didn't need to relieve himself after all that.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Hotness! Enjoying the visuals. Still holding out for the intimacy cuz I'm a sucker for it....thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

You're awesome - thanks. Getting closer to the intimacy I want - thank you, thank you, thank you. BTW - Bella of course will make an awesome vamp when he changes her.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Oh goodness, did he break her wrist?? And now she's crying, Edward is going to be beside himself. Loving it....

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Oh pooey...I was hoping this would lead to a revealing somehow but he was able to use her disobeying as an excuse. Darn...I guess I will have to wait. I'm really impatient - this is too good!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 253: Chapter 253

Could this mean a big reveal soon?? Really hope so!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

Goodness...the anticipation of Bella seeing Edward is killing me!!! I can't wait for the big revelation!!! It's going to be so good!!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Oh so sweet! But I hope he realized that she is unsure that he does not have other submissives or that she thinks he's not exclusive to her - he needs to tell her she's the only one - his mate. I can't wait.....I'm dying for the revelation.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

Almost there - I'm dying....

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289

Yes...it's time!!!! In tomorrow's update, maybe, possibly, please!!
Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok we are on the edge of our seats....you have us in the palm of your hand....please share....soon

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Oooh so close.....the blindfold is off!!!!! I can't wait!!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

Thank you!!!! Now onto the intamacy....let's make love!!

Love is the Master by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
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When Levi Daniels comes to speak to Ember Collins' roommate about a case.  Sparks fly instantly and they waste no time getting to know each other.  Levi is looking for more than a sub and Ember seems to be exactly what he wants.  She is new to being submissive and wants to learn as much as she can from the sexy older Dom. 

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When feelings start to emerge can they hold it together?  Will Levi be able to balance his love for Ember with the Dom that she needs?  Can Ember understand that love and submission can go hand in hand?  What happens when another Dom shows an interest in the couple? 

 

Follow these two through their adventures and see where they will take it.  How long will it take for them to learn that Love is the Master?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101977 Read Count: 24754
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2016
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake For Christmas!

I enjoy reading your story. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I hope you are still reading!

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

The plot thickens.....very good. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

WOW! Twist and turns and all my favorite characters are back together as one big happy family....haha...Alec needs to be tortured to death slowly and painfully.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

Please let Edward rip Alec and James a new one before he finishes them off. Love it!!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

Oh no...not Angela!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

As long as you keep Brawler and Bella safe - no more beatings from Alec and his idiots, I'll be happy. Thank you.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: You Own Me

Just found your story and read up to this point. Great story..really enjoying it and looking foward to updates. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: You Own Me

Oh why did she have to hear that!! I know Edward can straighten it out with her as long as he doesn't keep too much distance the next few weeks while fixing the East District. Love it - thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: You Own Me

Oh yay....alone time coming up.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: You Own Me

Hope they are honest and tell each other how they feel about each other. I can't see running from the Mafia a choice and I'm not sure Aro would let them go without a fight - he seems to like them too much. But things would be much simpler with Alec out of the way. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

Why do I get the feeling that Mary and Lily are undercover agents (Alice and Rose)?? Please tell me they are going to hook up with Jasper and Emmett - I do so like my happy couples!!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: You Own Me

Missed the last few chapters and just got caught up....Loved It!!! Would have liked to see Edward save Bella from Alec and kill him right there and then instead of Marcus coming in but I can wait a little longer for Edward to serve his justice on Alec. I love how your Edward and Bella love each other with such intensity - totally hot!!

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94848
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Cafe

I enjoyed it - I hope they are both relaxing a bit but keeping their guard up. I really want to fast forward to her graduating and getting a job in Jasper's dept so they can take their relationship public. Hopefully there won't be too much drama between now and then. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  And yes, they are finding the right balance between relaxing, but being careful at work.  The next few chapters will skip forward in time some.  There will only be a couple of chapters between Halloween and Thanksgiving.  There will be some drama, but a lot of good will come from it.  Just be patient! :) 


Thanks for the great review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Pioneer Place Mall

Glad to see Maggie is trying to be civil and understanding. Now you just have to bring Charlie's way of thinking around. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Yep, Magge is really trying, and I think she did pretty well.  Charlie will come around, too, that's just a few more chapters away.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - The Market

Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Aww, so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 161044
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like what I have read so far. I can see where this is going and I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Love it - it won't be long now before they act on their feelings, huh? Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yay!!!! but oh man - too short a chapter - you're making me anxiously await the next chapter...not fair...don't take too long please.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

OK so that wasn't a long wait...thank you...keep going...and oh no been there done that - pulling out no fun at all!!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awww...cute!

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Oh sweet happy endings. Loved it.

Summary:

Flighty Bunny obsessed writer Bella and IT business owner Edward have a crash encounter, leaving them stuck together, literally. The first of many interesting encounters. A tale of plot bunnies, fate, flashlights, and lol. Short chapters and laughs.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10748 Read Count: 5243
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 10 Dec 2012
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Swing Set

Too funny - love it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Starbucks Around the Corner

Finally did the deed! Thanks for the fun reading!

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Six years ago he tore her apart, broke her. Bella's a new, take charge woman now. What will happen when Edward walks into her conference room, and back into her life, as her new client? Drabble fic, short chapter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12906 Read Count: 146101
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Read this whole story today. WOW - it was really wonderful. Short but poignant. I cried. Thanks for sharing.

In Case of Emergency by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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Bella's getting over a bad break-up and her friends know just how to help. Especially Edward - he's all too happy to help her forget her ex. A story of mistakes, Mary Jane, and maybe a miracle. All human.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7938 Read Count: 1517
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it....thanks for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Their voices once sang in harmony, but a misunderstanding pulled them apart. Can two broken hearts be healed and sing a new song? AH M for future lemons. E/B A/J Em/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51857 Read Count: 32104
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 21 Jul 2013
Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

OK just read it all up to this point. I really enjoyed it. Please get Bella and Edward back together soon.