Reviews by bluegirl27262
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: New Chapter up next.

this is a great story... I hope to read more in the future and im sorry about the hard patch in ur life... 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Well it looks like Bella is pregnant... I hope that they get off this horrible island before worse things happen which I fear will be happening soon. I love the chapter and hope to read more soon.

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I like this chapter... Im so glad that Jasper is on the right side. Im also glad that he love Alice and would do anything for her. I hope to read more because u left us at a cliffy.

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

well this was a very interesting chapter.... I hope to read more very soon... 

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh my god.... That was so pay back on Edwards place. I hope that things get better for everyone... I hope to read more shortly.

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Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Awe bella is getting some time off... I hate to see what Victoria goes through everyday... love the chapter.

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Okay this is a very sad chapter... I would never let James anywhere near me.... I would probably kill myself first... At least it would be fast and not so much pain. I can't believe they didn't listen to Jasper and take her some where or get some one else to help... I wonder what Peter will say that jack ass. I hope to read more of this story soon... love the chapter though it was very sad.

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Well this chapter wasn't that bad... I'm glad that Edward help Bree for a bit. I hope to read more in the near future but I completely understand that you have a lot going. This is one of my favorite stories ever....

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Need more....

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

This was a great chapter.... i hope to read more.

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't believe that Fanfiction is taking stories off without telling anyone. It's pissing me off. It took me a while but I finally found you on this site. I have aready read this and was wondering when you will be getting the new chapters. I hope to hear from you soon.....



Author's Response:

lol.. putting them up asap

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Well this was a great chapter but I really think that Jasper, Alice, Bella, Edward, and Tanya better find away to get the hell out of the house. I love how you showed a side of Jasper that we rarely ever see and it was sweet. I hope to read more in the near future...



Author's Response:

I'm about 1500 words into the next chapter. It's all ExB, day after the wedding :P

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter and I wish the rest were up... 

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I really want to read more....

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i LOVE THIS STORY... PLEASE WRITE MORE.

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh sweet pay back. I love this chapter.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a great story when do I get more like chapter 36..... I'm sorry I really like this story.

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was crappy what James did to Dementie and what he wanted to do to Bella. He is the most horrible person in this story... I hope something bigger happens to him. I hope things get better for bella... Great chapter. I hope to read more soon.

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Great chapter I hope to read more soon....



Author's Response:

Tuesday :)

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Your story is always the best and I hate waiting for the next chapter but you alway surprise me. I love this chapter. I hope to read more soon.

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ok well I like this chapter and its great to hear that it was Edward and not anyone else trying to help Bella out... I hope to read more... Wedding day??? I know Im warped but I want to know what happens to Bella and Edward... Hell I want to know if they ever get off that crazy island.....

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

This is a relly gret chapter and a nice one at that but the part with Aro... I can't believe that he could penetrate her with something that is broke. I hope to read more soon....

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I love this chapter... I feel bad for both Jasper and Edward since neither of them get that the girls are just as in love with them as much as they do.... I hope to read more and poor Jasper and Edward getting off in there pants...LOL

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Great Chapter... I hope to read more in the future. I like the idea that Bella and Jasper have with the her being a virgin. I hope Edward goes for it.

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

This is a very sweet chapter with a tempary wedding... Hopefully when Bella and Edward look back they will remember it and not the horrible one that is coming up.... I hate to say this but I feel that everyone on the island besides these 5 people should go to hell... I also feel bad for Tayna, she knows whats going to happen to her and yet she doesn't want to hurt anyone elses feeling or make aanyone upset. She truely is a stronger woman then myself because I would be completely upset.



Author's Response:

When the dust settles from the fics im writing, im very likely to write a fic about a serial killer... a woman who goes after each and every person on this island... giggle

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

This is a nice sweet chapter... I hope to read more soon....

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Awe this chapter is so cute... I can't believe they liked each other so long and didn't tell or anything. Well I hope to read more in the future.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

This was a very juicy chapter... It was great and I hope to read more soon... Happy New Years.

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Love this chapter and I hope the next chapter comes out soon... 

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Well I read the top part because I thought I could handle it but honestly that is horrible to do to any woman... I mean I heard that some people like blood play but I think that it is dangerous and for a person who never done it before in her life it could make her want to die. I feel horrible for Tanya because the next day she will have to do it all over again and on top of that she has no one really who thinks of her first... I know that she has Edward, Jasper, Bella, and Alice but honestly they don't think of her first. I hope they get out soon. This is a horrible situation to raise a child in and I can see why all the males in the enviroment are crazy.... there use to it. I feel bad for Giana because she has to live in this torment pretty much her whole life and that fucks with people to.... I hope to read the next chapter but I hope something good happens in the near future.

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Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

This chapter isn't as bad as I thought it would be but I honestly think that this isn't the last of James though... I hope to read more in the near future.

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Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

This was a great mushy chapter. I hate that Bella fears for her life most of the time. I hope to read more soon.

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Well I guess James is bi and he didn't get his way so he takes it out on the girls his with... On top of that now I understand why he doesn't care so much for Victoria. I guess in the end people get the worst of things... I hope to read more soon.

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Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

This is so horrible... but at least Edward got to Bella in time. It's good to know that James (if he doesn't die) will never have proper use of his dick. I hope to read more... What happen to Aro???? Are the police doing something about all the other people who are taking people for this life?

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

Awe Bella and Edward are so cute.... Well I guess that James is pretty much a done deal. I hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

Great story... 

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

OMG this story is one of my favorites... I hope to read more.

Breaking Free by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

What happens when you cage something wild, feral and beyond dangerous? It eventually breaks free and brings Hell with it. Twilight Non-Canon AU Vampire/Human Major Whitlock/Bella Adult Themes/Content

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18152 Read Count: 15102
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2014 Updated: 29 Dec 2014
Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love this story...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

~Spudz

Summary:


 

Set after Italy when Bella asks the family to vote, Alice see’s something she never thought could happen. When Edward attacks in a rage Bella is hurt and is forced to be changed. But nothing goes as expected, going to sleep in one time and waking in another.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39999 Read Count: 30426
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2016
Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love this story... It is so unique.