Reviews by Icrodriguez7
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028963
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

I love your current format. Though if I have to choose a pov, it's ALWAYS Edward's! Woo-hoo!

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 221: Chapter 221

You meant for it to read EMPOV at the top right? NOT EPOV?

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94306
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot

So thrilled to see this will be completed!

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Confessions

I think Edward's explanation for why he didn't bite her wrist was not complete. He explained that he stopped because it wasn't the way he wanted it to happen, without her agreement to do it together. In fact, he didn't buy her wrist because Jasper stopped him from doing it, urging Edward that Bella was about to wake or was coming around. How Edward explained it to Bella made it sound like he stopped because it wasn't the way he had hoped it would  would happen. I think knowing how Bella is, she will pursue this even further. At least I hope she does. :-) 



Author's Response:

I agree. Edward's explanation is not the complete reason, as Jasper's interference did prevent him from changing her right at that moment. Edward is grateful to Jasper though because he doesn't want the choice to be made of desperation (even though the end result is what they both want). Even though Bella will suffer a great deal more pain with the change happening down the road, he does want Bella to have a voice in when that change happens. He wants her to be able to say goodbye to her dad, and anyone else. He wants her to be a full partner with him in the decision, and honestly, that will mean more to Bella in the long run. Between you and me though - I think he should have just changed her. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Martyr

"Any hesitancy he’d been feeling about changing her was gone now that he was faced with her death. And as the beeps became even more far apart he prepared himself to change her. This wasn’t how he wanted it to happen, but he wasn’t going to let her go." Woo-hoo! That's what I meant!!!

 

Yes, Edward hesitated in Twilight. But Bella wasn't dying, she was just changing because of James' bite. It's not as if Edward stopping the change would mean death for her. Plus that was pre-NM, and I think that experience of being apart made Edward not hesitate at all when it came to life and death for Bella in BD. But perhaps your take is that since this Edward never had to confront the idea of Bella being dead, as he did in canon NM, that his hesitation would be more present? Hmmm, maybe. But I still think he would be more panicked at the thought of her dying and his hesitation being the reason why he will have failed her again. I just thought that the moment Edward had any inkling from Carlisle that she could die, that any doubt about changing her would be gone for good. Guess I just had to wait for one more chapter! Lol!!!

Can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

I love reading the way your mind dissects the chapter. :)  I'm glad you see that Edward really wouldn't hesitate when faced with her actual death. He was just over analyzing as usual. And trust me, Bella will call him on that hesitation. 

Much love,

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Revelations

I was expecting this. And even though he didn't hesitate when it truly came down to the idea of losing her, he is still in a lot of trouble with Bella when she learns how long it took him to settle the doubt within him and no longer flinch at the hesitation. I hope Bella really lays into him for at least a little while and a little bit. After all, had she had an aneurysm, there is no way Edward could've saved her even by changing her. And that the risk was present at all is what I'm sure Bella will find difficult to fathom.

I pray that you also have peaceful times ahead, Darlin', for you truly deserve them. All my love.

 



Author's Response:

Stuck on that aneurysm aren't you. ;) She is pissed to say the least, however, just because she's awake does not mean she's out of danger yet. Thank you for the prayers. We're doing the best we can right now. Some moments are of course more difficult than others but we do have moments where we are smiling and laughing and of course relieved that he's at peace.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: This is My Hell

While I know that E would prefer that changing B was done under ideal circumstances (though for him they'd never be ideal enough), I always find it upsetting when he hesitates with even the thought of doing it in a critical situation such as this. With these kind of injuries, B can die instantly at any moment and E would be too late to do anything. Even in canon, E never hesitated a single second in changing B when she was dying. And yet here he's still debating what to do. One aneurism and it's all over in the blink of an eye. E should know that. I'm looking forward to seeing his epiphany on this. Thanks for the update!!! 



Author's Response:

Okay Isa!!! I see you! If you remember he DID hesitate in Twilight when the venom from James was at risk of changing her and she was bleeding out from her leg. Carlisle forced him to decide to either suck the venom out of her or let the change happen. Even Alice said "Edward, I've seen it!" He sucked the venom out refusing to let her be changed in that moment when she was already bitten. Then in Breaking Dawn - he also never wanted to change her until the moment Nessie bit her and he could see Bella slipping away - in his panic at that moment, after going through all they had and being married - only then did he change her and if you remember he didn't even think he had done it time. So I believe that it's very possible that even in these circumstances he would hesitate.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Unleashing the Lioness

This was a fantastic and powerful chapter. I was riveted the entire time with the details you gave us. And how original and surprising that it was Esme that killed Victoria in the end! I was most definitely not expecting that, and yet I was truly impressed with the surprising twist. Excellent chapter! But now my heart breaks for poor Charlie. Can't wait to see what you do with this now. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the twist with Esme being the one to kill her. It seemed fitting to me. ;) And yes, my poor heart breaks for Charlie over what is to come, but perhaps there will be some kind of silver lining. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124603
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is taking a turn I wasn't expecting. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178668
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting!!!