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I am 24 years old and I love reading and writing fiction so keep writing and I'll keep reading. :)
Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135502
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
aww that poor girl. :( I can't believe this, they all suck. :D I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
thanks:)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
God Bella is a whiny bitch and she really doesn't know what she wants. She told Edward he has to prove he doesn't mind working with her so he did what he thought best and instead of telling him that what he did was wrong in her eyes she snaps. God I hope she gets over herself soon. I love where this is going though. i can't wait till the real relationship between the two of them starts getting better. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Perhaps, but what she was really wanting was just for him to treat her like an equal not to make a fool of himself in front of the rest of the team. But I agree that she may have gone a little ape shit on him. Thanks for reading and leaving me a review:)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Edward is definately right though, the boys have no say in what happens between Bella and her sisters and its so sad that they hated Bella for being smart. poor thing. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
WOW!!! I was not expecting them to fall in love but the lemon was hotter than hell. :D keep up the great work. i can't wait till THAT'S real. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:0) I think Bella was shocked by her feeling for Edward. The question is will she tell him??
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I was going to say because that part about him being an alcholic from the James's case was confusing as hell. lol keep up the great work. I love it. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, I am all about the surprises with this story!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
wow bella really put them in their place didn't she? lol but they are right, she is wrong. I hope she starts opening up to Edward as much as she opened up to Jasper and Emmett. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
YES YES YES!!! hot hot hot sex. I love it. I can't wait for more. The morning after? Please please PLEASE don't have it be awkward and her be a bitch. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I promise no bitchyBella:)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
awww Bella is tooo adorable! I love that whole relationship even if they did both have problems. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
God I love how EVERYONE is concerning themselves with Bella and Edward's lives. How the heck is it any of their business? lol I love where this is going and the shower scene was very hot. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I know, right?
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
uh oh the ex boyfriend! I love it and then the creepy pictures all over someone else's apartment? what a freaking weirdo. I love this story. Its like a fictional tale of Criminal Minds mixed with Law and Order: SVU. love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
wow okay interesting. lol I love that they are now in hiding in the little town of Forks Washington. LOVE IT! lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
god James is a monster! I hope those guys get fired. I can't wait for more. keep up the greatness and bring on more edward/bella lemonness. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Poor Carlisle. :( I wonder how Edward feels about him and Bella being so close though? I mean there has to be SOME jealousy there. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
what? should that mean something to us? ooh now I'm on suspense. I can't wait to find out how she knows him. I'm so excited. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Go back to chapter 19. Brandon Philips was the boy that Bella helped Charlie save from an abusive father ;)
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Yea they're all getting along or starting to at least. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
damn the plot just gets thicker and thicker. I love it. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
wow hot sex and they didn't even have time for after glow. lol I loved it. this is going great. I can't believe he got into the house and he probably watched them, that sicko. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Lovely ending there, bella yelling NOOOOOO!!!. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thanks:)
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Yes they got to her in time. I'm so happy. :D that guy is a sick freak but I love the tattoo. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
aww poor Carlisle and even though Charlie sort of sucks, poor guy. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Esme is awesome! I love her. keep up the good work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
yeah she's awake! I for one am ecstatic. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
aww Edward and Bella are too cute. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
wow, charlie is the bad guy but he totally deserved being punched. First I don't like how close Carlisle and Bella are. that's strange when she should be with Edward with that closeness. Second how she's treating her parents is weird too but I'll get over all that. this story is amazing and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
aww I loved that ending between the two of them. that was sweet. and yes it does serve Charlie and Renee right for doing what they did. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I liked their reunion but I liked Edward and Bella's more. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Phase one complete, Phase two? talk to charlie and Renee. lol good luck. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
god her parents are evil in this story and accesories to an almost rape and murder and they get off scott free? what a load of bullhooey. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
god those people suck for parents. lol I can't wait for more keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
ohh you cockblocker. :( No I understand bella needs time, poor thing. If I had something looking like that......well you get the picture. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I know, I'm so mean ;)
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
first steps are always the hardest. :) i'm glad that's out of the way. Now lets work on getting bella back in the sack with Edward. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
yeah sequel! :) I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
wow the ending was just that, an ending. lol I loved it and I can't wait for the sequel and more LEMONS WITH EDWARD. lol thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
awww freaking awww! I loved the end but the whole thing with Kate is getting on my nerves. that woman is all sorts of freaking. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
AWW!!!! I love where this story is going. I love Emma the best but Edward and Bella's relationship (even if it is based on fuck buddies lol) for right now is sweet mixed with hotter than hell. :) keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
one day at a time indeed. :D i guess I wasn't paying attention but I had no idea he was what 27? where she is only 19. wow, that is not a problem though. keep up the lemons and smutty goodness and Emma too. I love Emma. thanks again bye
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Yes what was Kate doing there and what did she want? lol don't leave us hanging and while I'm there, WTF is up with Miss Bella? is she out of her freaking skull? and what is with her and Jake? their fuck buddies, sorry but buddies? Priceless :D this is going great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
God you suck you know that? lol no I'm kidding but that does suck about Kate coming back just right when they are getting things going. :( Please update again soon. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
wow! I can't wait for more. I hope there will be a reunion soon between them. :) keep up the great work and I WILL be looking for wicked Angel. thanks again bye
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
yes yes yes they were reunited. I'm so happy. :D I can't wait till the friendliness is thrown out the windonw. lol thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Freaking Kate. that woman needs to be hit upside her head with a baseball bat. I can't wait till tonight. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
not going to kill you honestly! this is getting good. I love it. I was almost crying right along with Edward when I found out Kate took Emma and then for Bella to just drop everything and go to him was awesome. I love it. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
that poor little girl. she had me crying. :( I love Emma. she is too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
well damn, both daddy and daughter are happy in entirely different ways. lol I loved it. Emma is such a brat but understandable. poor thing. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
oh that girl is such a spoiled brat. poor thing. and it isn't even her fault. :( that's so sad. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
that girl needs a reality check, poor thing. :) I love that Edward is so sweet to her and is Bree going to be a problem? if she is we might have to kill her. lol Keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Aww that's exactly what Bella needed for Edward to forgive her. now she needs to forgive herself. poor thing. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye P.S. if you read Total Eclipse of the Heart, don't know if you have or not, that has Daddyward as a father and Bella the actress's bodyguard. Plus Tattoos. Very awesome. :D Also My Mistakes were made for you, that one is good too. I can't remember if that's the sequel or the very first one but reading both is good. :D thanks again
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
aww Edward is one nice guy. He's awesome to put up with not only Bella's post partum depression but his snotty spoiled brat too. :D I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
WOW! that letter from Kate was just wow and then Emma finally accepted Bella, again a loss for words. I can tell you that because of the disclaimer at the end I think this might be the only chapter I am waiting for the epilogue to come. bring on the kinky fuckery. lol thanks again so much. bye
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
aww Bella fell asleep? poor Edward. lol I love that Edward is so protective of his kids even the ones not his. :D I don't know about the Elvis one but the older Edward sounds good. I'll read that one. lol thanks again bye
Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan? Maybe his online friend can help...
AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge. Now expanded into a story. :-)
Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
AWW!! exchanging of promise rings? too freaking sweet! I loved it as usual. can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
aww nerd love is freaking cute as hell. I love this story and I am so glad you decided to continue on. thanks again so much. bye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! Even nerds need some love right? I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I hope to add another chapter soon. Thanks again! :-)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
aww too cute. I loved the whole Gambit and Rogue scene and then the fighting in the club. YES!!! that was great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! Gambit is my second favorite superhero, and I thought Edward could totally pull it off. :-) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I figured it was something different. Glad you liked Edward defending Bella too! Hope to have another one soon.
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ouch poor Bella. you'd think she'd talk to Edward first before jumping to conclusions but it looks like Bella is as insecure as Edward is. keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out how she takes it. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! I think Bella react...interestingly. :-) thanks again!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
(STANDING ROUND OF APPLAUSE) that was brillant. the whole announcement but I liked the chapter too. What Edward did was great and I'm with you 100% all the way. keep up the great work and HELL TO THE YEAH on NC-17 rating. can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & revieiwng! LOL, everyone seems quite excited about the rating change. And I'm glad you liked the chapter and the announcement. Thanks again and I hope to have another one out soon. :-)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
YES YES YES on the rating change. I can't wait. I mean they were getting hot and heavy on the couch in the other chapter and that was T so i can't wait to see where you go from there. :D I love that they survived their first fight. he's so cute with you have no faith in me. proving that he may have changed on the outside but he's still a lovable dork with insecurities on the inside. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! Edward might be gaining confidence and what not, but I'll try to keep him a little dorky. :-) Thanks again!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
lol I love Carlisle and him being proud. what a dork but as far as Jake goes, I can't believe he did that the douche. and I usually love Jake but in this story he's the bad guy so he's a douche. lol keep up the great work and a Happy Thanksgiving to you too. thanks again :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! LOL, I promise I have an explanation for Carlisle. Well, every story needs a bad guy, and this time around, it's Jacob. I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving too. :-) Thanks again!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Yes! things are really heating up now! I'm so excited and can't wait to see Bella's reaction. Just one thing: WAY TO GO LEAH!! he deserved everything he got and more. I can't wait till Charlie finds out. there's no way he won't know now. :D ooh I can't wait! thanks again so much bye for now
Author's Response:
thank you for reading & reviewing! I hope you enjoy chapter 9 :-)
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
lol Edward is too cute. I can't wait till he figures out how to give Bella an orgasm. I love that he's going to google it. lol The one thing I love more than anything though is him talking to himself and answering. that is too funny. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & reviewing! Glad you're enjoying things. :-)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
well some parts were corny! lol No I'm kidding. that whole chapter was sweet. I love the Carlisle and Edward talk. very grown up. :D I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
lol that whole chapter was both hot and awkward all at the same time. lol I loved it. I can't wait for another chapter. this is just getting too good. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
LOL...glad you liked the hotness AND the awkwardness. :-) Thanks again!
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow hot stuff! I liked them all chilling at the house & then some lovin after. :) soo good! Keep up the great work, thanks again, bye for now.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it :-)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
aww that was hot and sweet all rolled into one. I loved it. keep up the great work and that was one hot lemon so don't doubt yourself. in fact, keep em coming. lol no pun intended. thanks again bye
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
aww the morning after, awkward talk with dads lol and shower sex? yes please! what a chapter. I cant wait to see how they sneak around to get some time to each other. :D thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading & reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
ooh Seth's Gay! that's a big step in the La Push therapy session but that's great that Edward didn't "out" him. :D I can't wait for more sexy times between him and bella tho. mostly bc I'm a giant perv. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
thank you for reading & reviewing! LOL, I think you'll like the next chapter :-)
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
lol poor Edward. He's not only drunk but he can't get it up either. poor thing. I'm sad you won't be updating but hopefully when you get back you'll bring more lemons with you. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
lol I liked that chapter. Edward and Bella's hot little moment was sweet. can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now
Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men. Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position. Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?
Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series. Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway
I love that Bella has Alice and Rose on her team. she needs some girls to back up her tail especially when all the guys suck. lol i'm sad that this is going to be a short one but I have read many a short stories that were fabulous so I can only hope this one is too. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections
I love the whole lying to the press thing, very Rob and Kristen. lol I also love that Edward is slowly changing and Jake is a douche. I don't love that Jake is a douche just that in general he is. lol. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls
YES go get her Edward. About dang time. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole
aww Edward is too sweet. that boy is soo in love its not even funny. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings
can you all say aww? that was too sweet. I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents
God Carlisle seems like a real jerk but I totally get it. He's upset about Edward's career choice but at least he likes Bella. that's great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
aww those two are sweet as hell and just like they said, like 6th graders. lol I loved it. thanks again bye
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
aww things are progressing smoothly. :) I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries
aww first date, first kiss too cute. I loved that date. thus proving if guys actually think they can be romantic. lol thanks again bye
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen
well Bella showed him. lol I'm glad you updated and I can't wait for more. keep up the awesome work. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor
for Edward's sake, she better be like a Publicity representative or a cousin. lol that poor girl. she put herself out there on the line and this happens. also the first time edward sees her in a towel and then this. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
well at least everything's under control now and its official, bella is a cock tease. lol I cant' wait for more. this is going great. thanks again bye
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event
aww that was sweet and Bella is a vixen. lol she totally got him to sleep with her without a condom. that girl is on fire. lol Nah but I really did like this chapter. it was sweet and we got information on how much of an immature boy Jacob was. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion
Horny horny HORNY couple. I LOVE IT! lol I like that he went all caveman on her and lost his position to put Daniels in his place. that was sweet. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers
lol Bella is getting checked out by a girl. that's too funny. I loved that chapter and as for RL, don't ever quit. Not just writing, everything. That's my personal advice to you. When the going gets tough, take a breather and try to figure it out no matter how long it takes. don't give up. :) thanks for the great job. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation
poor guy. i hope they are going to make it hell on both of them. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye p.s. don't worry about this, deal with RL things and then get back to us when you can. :D
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...
well Aro like always is a dick. lol. I love it. he's suppose to be the villain so that's okay. :D I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards
oooh time to meet the parentals. lol good luck Bella! :D lol nah like always I have faith Esme and Carlisle will love her. thanks again bye.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding
aww you had me crying like a baby on that one. :) too sweet. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money
YEAH they got their loan! I'm so happy. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them
first off, I'm so glad they got the situation figured out. that's great and I know Volturi's behind it, I just know it! Second: Cockblocker. how could you just leave us like that meanie? lol thanks so much for the update. i love it even if you did leave us hanging. lol thanks again bye
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal
aww no lemon loving but that's okay, i like the 'love' bella gave Angela and Ben even though Ben tried to hurt her. I love it. thanks again bye
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch
well Cosma is a new guy we need to watch out for even if he is calm cool and collected. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge
OH THANK GOD!!! I'm so relieved. I thought you were going to kill him off, I would have had to smack someone lol. No I'm kidding but I LOVED the bitch attack Bella put on James. that was awesome. keep up the great work and thanks again for the really soon update. :) thanks bye
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle
wow a lot of legal mumbo jumbo, I don't understand but I did get the gist of it. lol Aro is SCREWED!!! lol thanks again for the update.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing
Wow and there's still the epi? well I can't wait to see what happens there. I'm sorry to see this go but the ending so far is good. :) thanks again bye
Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38483
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: New York City
aww I love the sequel and Im SOOOO glad they caught Omega which EWWW by the way Victoria? Gross. :D I loved it though. totally threw me off guard. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Philadelphia
yeah up next, Garrett's back. I'm so happy. I can't wait for more. this is going great. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Washington DC
aww Melanie's the good guy. I'm so happy. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Raliegh
lol Charlie is awesome and so is the lesbian orgy. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)