Ok, I hope I won't get burned for saying this. I read Here we go Again and I liked the storyline very much, the pace was good, the chapters well written, building just enough tension to keep you reading but not too much too make you just close the browser and never be bothered with it again. All in all a great story with great possibility to envolve into more as you showed with Flightless bird. The one thing that bothered me however, and the only thing that makes me stop reading, is the relationship between Bella, Carlisle and Esme. I understand the way you bonded those three but I don't think the level in which the 'love' each other is healthy and to tell you the truth, the whole time I was reading the story I was ignoring that small but still very important aspect of the characters. In Here we go again Edward, even though he had his moments, was pushed entirely into the background and besides the few dates, he and Bella had no time to build their relationship and help it grow into what is from one to into the other a strong love. Carlisle was always there to do what Edward should be doing for her. I understand it to a point, since they've been through so much together. But I started reading this story as a romance between Edward and Bella, not Bella and everyone else. This chapter, Bella and Edward's wedding, was just too much. Bella's dance with Carlisle, though I'm not saying they shouldn't dance together, was too much.