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Bio:
I am a wife and working mother of three. And I am a rabid Twilight fan. I also love good wine, good friends and skin art. Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me. Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele. But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.
I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since. My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)
Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own.
I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010. He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell! I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!! Check out the link if you are so inclined.
http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/awesome-fan-encounter-with-peter-facinelli/
I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011. What an absolutely amazing group of guys. If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them. I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again. And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day. Check out the link to read the whole story.
Use Somebody A/N:
I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.
Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17
Banner by rpattz1990
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Poor Bella to have lost 4 very important years of her life. I feel bad for Edward and Jasper because they can't even touch her. It must be killing them after 6 months of her in a coma.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Ah, I feel so bad for E&J. They miss their wives. I am glad that Bella is letting Alice stay close through all of this. At least she has someone she can connect with.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love these four together even if they are just talking. I am glad that Bella is at least listening to what they are telling her and not just shutting them out.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love that she is starting to trust Edward and allow both boys to get closer to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hell yes that would be an awesome way to try and get my memory back! I'd fack amnesia just for the chance to have a roll with Edward and Jasper (ok, and Alice too). Excellent chapter. I am so glad that she came home with them and is starting to find some familiarity in her life.
Author's Response:
lol, me too!! I would let them try to trigger my memory all night long!!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
First off, excellent chapter! I love that Bella is remembering more and more of her life and I love Edward and Jasper's reactions everytime she has memories of them.
To answer your question, yes I think they should tell her about Alex and how it all came to be. But I don't think they should tell her at the office. She needs to be somewhere safe with them so it doesn't hit her too hard since in her mind Jacob had just attacked her. It is all too fresh.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Holy shit! I am sure that wasn't the reaction they were expecting. But if you think about it, it would make sense since they all gave her and Alice shit about their relationship for years.
Author's Response:
Exactly!! Thanks:)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I loved this chapter! It has been my favorite of SA. I thought Bella's reaction to her parents was very realistic.
I absolutely love how she declared her love for Alice, Jasper and Edward and how she explained that she may not remember loving them, but knows that she does now. Perfect!
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Okay, addressing the elephant in the room first...WTF?!?!? What the hell is up with Jessica? Is she trying to get a raise or something? I didn't realize she batted for both teams. Alice is going to give her a serious bitch slapping!
Baby names...hmmm, that is a tough one. I am very curious to see what you come up with. But please, for the love of God do not give that poor baby a blended name. Of all the things that SM did with Twilight, that is the one thing I really hated was naming Renesemee.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I can assure you that the baby will not have a blended name. I agree with you on Reneseme;(
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Ok, so sex in the kitchen is not allowed, but oral in the office is? I just want to make sure I have my sex rules memorized. LOL
Another excellent chapter. I'm glad to see Bella is getting her balls back.
Author's Response:
lol, Sex in the kitchen is fine, just not near the food ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I love all the combinations you come up with for these four..always sexy..always hot!!!
I am so glad she got her memories back of Jasper, but what was in the bag that triggered it and what about Edward?
Author's Response:
Thank you. I promise that everything will be explained in the next chapter:)
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Yeah!!! I am so glad that she remembers them!!! I thought the fact that she had sex with Jasper in Edward's old room at Christmas with the WHOLE family downstairs was a little odd, but I can roll with it. I wonder why she didn't drag Edward and Alice up with them?
Author's Response:
You have to remember that she remembered Alice and had quite a few flashes of her time with Edward but Jasper was pretty much nothing. I think that Bella and Jasper needed to reconnect one on one becasue it had been so hard on Jasper that Bella didn't remember them ever making love.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Very sweet. Loved the heart to heart with Kate.
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Uh oh, Bella shouldn't be keeping secrets from the others. This has the potential to either blow up in her face or bite her in the ass.
Author's Response:
Yep, it does:(
Author's Response:
Yep, it does:(
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
That was a sad chapter. I can't believe they thought that Bella wanted to leave them. I don't understand why she blames herself for missing all that time with them when she was in a coma. It's not like she was choosing not to wake up.
Author's Response:
Fear can do amazing things to a person:(
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Poor Bella. I really hope the three of them can help her see the positive of the situation and not focus on all she lost.
I love how she totally gave it to that bitch in the restaurant and how Mike kicked her ass out...sweet!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Sex wake up calls are the BEST wake up calls ever!!!! Very hot! I loved every hot sticky word of it! LOL!
Esme and Renee rock!!! What they gave Bella was absolutely perfect! Only a mom would know how important those moments would be to Bella.
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Holy crap! Did not see Angela showing up on their doorstep with her baby coming! Their bed is full, she is going to have to sleep somewhere else. ;)
I liked the confrontation Bella and the family had with the driver. It was emotional, but not out of control with anger. Well done.
Author's Response:
LOL, Angela will not be joining our foursome in bed ;p Thank you for the review:)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I am glad that Ben is not a cheating bastard, but now we have a crazy-husband stealing-skank with a gun? Not good!
Author's Response:
Not good at all:)
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Whoa, Bella was very brave but very foolish as well. I am glad none of them were seriously hurt. Alice is going to rip her a new one when she hears what happened.
Author's Response:
Yes, she was:( Thanks.
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Bella really does attract the crazies, doesn't she?
By the way, very nice jealousy sex in the hotel..hot! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
We need some happy times. I am tired of seeing Bella so sad and blaming herself for everything that has happened. I hope she does find a therapist that helps her work through her anger and issues.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
OMG!!! Best Chapter Yet!!! Love the name and the fact that Bella is pregnant now is just awesome. So Edward is the bio-daddy of Whitley...will he be two for two or will Jasper get in the mix? LOL! I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Ahhh, poor Rose. That must hsve been so hard not to share the news (good and bad) with the family. I was a little worried when she pushed Bella by the stairs. I thought she was going to fall.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Domestic bliss..love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Well there was no surprise there, Edward is the DNA daddy. But how can you not love the way their family functions? They are so full of love and generosity of spirit.
Edward and Jasper in the living room was seriously hot!!! I can think of one sexual combo that you have put any of these four in that I have not throughly enjoyed. Keep up the lemony goodness!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I really want to show that they are more than just a sexual group but that they are a true family.
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
It is amazing how far Bella and Rose have come since the beginning of LA. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Momma Alice rocks!!! I love how she totally laid into Edward and Jasper. She took charge and made them feel like the asses they were acting like. Perfect!
Oh, and the morning sex was HOT as hell!!! I can only imagine what it will be like once Alice is able to rejoin them. I see furniture destruction in their future.
Author's Response:
lol, It's pretty explosive ;)
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
That dream was 100% crazy, but not too far off from what hormones and a craving will do to you.
You gotta love Seth. He is so awesome how he stood up for Bella's honor. I can not wait to see how Bella handles this situation. Her normal ballsy self mixed in with hormones...the Johnson's won't know what hit them. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
All pregnant women should come with a warning sign: PROCEED WITH CAUTION. HORMONES ON BOARD!!!
Poor Jazz. Bella will have Alice with her at work, but Jazz isn't going to have Edward with him anymore. :(
Author's Response:
lol, about the warning sign.
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I am so glad Bella broke that SOB's nose. He deserved much worse.
Ok, so I was thinking about Bella's hip problem and the pregnancy. If she doesn't heal properly and fast the extra weight of the baby could do some serious damage not to mention the delivery might be hindered if she isn't 100% recovered by then. I know they are just fictional characters that you write a fun and fantastic story about, but I worry about them. LOL ;)
Author's Response:
lol, I know, me too. I cover that very issue in a few chapters:) Her hip will be an issue during the pregnancy and birth.
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Ahhhh, it's not what you know, but WHO you know. LOL!
The helicopter moms (they hover) are too funny. It is bad enought having a mom and a MIL, but having four in total must be a serious pain.
Author's Response:
lol, could you imagine!! Oh my...
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Holy shit! Edward wants to be a stay at home daddy? That is awesome!!! But honestly, I see Jasper as more of the stay at home type. LOL ;)
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks:)
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Oh My Carlisle!!! He had me crakcing up with those damed phone calls. I think this is one of the funniest chapters in this story so far.
Author's Response:
lol, I laughed so hard while writing this one!! Thank you for the review:)
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Is it just me or is Bella in the wrong business? She should have been a match maker. First Garrett and Kate, then Jessica and Eric and now Seth and Tanya. The girl is on a roll.
I love the way you write Tanya's character. She is always seen as the evil whore trying to steal Bella's man. In this case she has a bit of a bitchy attitude, but she wears it well and she adds a nice little touch to the story. Good job! ;)
Author's Response:
lol, thank:) I don't usually like a mean Tanya. I have one story where she is a trouble maker but I don't usually see her like that.
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
ROFLMAO!!! Oh, this is going to be good!!!!
Bella is like the love goddess. Everyone around her seems to find love, case in point-Tanya and Seth (so cute).
Loved the conversation about how many babies they were all going to have.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Domestic tranquility and fuck hot lemons...the best of both worlds! Loved it!!!
Author's Response: lol, thank you:)
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
That was an excellent depiction of a mommy's first day back to work. I have been through it three times and each time I had the urge to call home every half hour. LOL.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Oh crap! I hope Rose doesn't lose the baby..
I love Embry. He is going to be fun to have around the office.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I am soooo glad Rose and the baby are ok. That has to be the scariest thing to have happen while you are pregnant especially after one miscarriage.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
I liked the impromptu conversation between Embry and Bella. :)
Poor Bella and her raging hormones. Or should I say poor Edward, Alice and Jasper?
Author's Response:
lol, pregnant women....enough said:)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Mmmm, this was a yummy chapter. It has been a while since we have enjoyed our nymphos at their finest! I love how Alice, Edward and Jasper all helped undress and worship Bella's body before it became a free for all. The whole damn thing was fucking hot!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. They needed a night of fun, didn't they?
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I've missed out little nymphos!!! Poor Bella. It ain't easy feeling like you are the size of a house. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I love a little J&E time! They are so hot together.
Ben and Seth were too funny at the club! They are brave guys being the only straight ones there. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
I found myself smiling throughout this entire chapter. The wedding was absolutely perfect!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Ahhh, another girl?!? Charlie is right, E&J are going to need lots of guns and locks. Maybe an attack dog wouldn't hurt either.
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
This was such a sad and happy chapter all in one. Poor Claire. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Ahhhh, It's a boy! Love it! The name is very cool.
Excellent chapter! I loved Bella's hormonal meltdown and the bet is too damn funny for words. I can't wait to see the end result of that. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I enjoyed this chapter alot:)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Woo hoo! A new baby for the grandparents to attack! I think it is going to be Emmett's baby and it is going to be a boy. Just guessing.
I have started posting my own story on here called "Use Somebody". If you get a chance, give it a read. I would love to hear what you think. Thanks. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I'll go check out your story:)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
LMAO!!! Poor Seth! That is just killing me. ;)
I loved the wake up call our favorite foursome enjoyed. They are always so hot together!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
OMG! Yes please continue this story!!! I love the combo of kinky fuckery and domestic bliss. You mix the two so well together that I have loved every chapter since the beginning of LA.
As for a title, how about Rude Awakenings? I am just thinking about what they will have to deal with when the kids are in school. I wonder how many kids they will have by then.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Rude Awakings is on the list but I'm not sure yet.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Poor Bella. Being pregnant, bigger than usual, stuck in a wheel chair and hormonal as all hell and now a c-section and she has to stop working? My heart breaks for her. I know that in the long run it is her and the baby's health that is the most important thing, but right now, all she can see are the negatives. I hope the surprise shower doesn't throw her into an emotional tail spin.
Great chapter, as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Wow, they are all good ideas. If I could only pick one, I would have to choose 'Beautiful Awakenings'. I just like the way it sounds.
Poor, poor emo Bella. That girl cries when she should laugh and laugh when she should cry. Pregnancy hormones suck ass!!! Another excellent chapter and woo hoo! Another baby is joining the crowd. Bella is going to need to open a day care in the office (not everyone has an Edward at home [don't we wish!]). ;)
Author's Response: lol, thanks:)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
What a fantastic chapter!!! My favorite part had to be when Carlisle called the nurse a skanky bitch! And to have her turn to face off with Esme...that was the bomb!!! Loved the whole thing from start to finish. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
A clean house? What's that??? I totally hear ya my sista. I have 3 kids, work full time and a house that is only truly clean before parties. LOL. You update when you can, we will be waiting. ;)
I loved this chapter. It had a little of all the things I love. A little family bonding time (the visual of Edward singing to Whitley is damn near orgasm inducing, it is so hot). And a little bit of lovin time with E&B.
Excellent chapter, as always.
Author's Response:
You clean your house before parties?? lol, I have three kids to so I understand completely! Thank you for reviewing, and being patient with me. I agree Edward singing to Whitley...Yeah..
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
That was AWESOME!!! Way to go out with a bang! Well, several bangs actually. I am sad this is ending, but only for a second because I am so looking forward to EA!!!
All in all, great story woman! Well done!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I think they all needed one last....get together:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
I couldn't guess the new baby's name even if I tried (the F is really throwing me off). Congrats on catching the cat nap. They are so rare, so I am glad you got to enjoy it. ;)
Another fantastic chapter. Kate might be prego? Love it! They are going to have so many kids running around between these familes, they won't know what to do.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I have missed the sex fest that these four enjoy together! They are my favorite poly-amorous grouping out there!!! Always so hot, six weeks will feel like forever. ;)
Poor Bella having her mini breakdown. I have been there and totally get it. You wrote that scene in the office so well. Very real to life.
Can't wait to meet baby Cullen!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I've been in Bella's shoes. All three of mine were born via c-section and I can remember feeling so scared that something was going to happen to me or my baby.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Ahhh, love the name, but I guess I am a bit slow and don't see the connection as to why they chose that name.
Excellent chapter. I totally understood Bella's feelings ( I had 3 c/s myself and each time the stress and worry always hit me the morning of. You wrote that whole experience really well!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:) I've had three c-sections, too. I totally understand what you mean.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
I loved it!!! I am so glad that Jasper is the baby daddy, it keeps everything in balance. Thanks for the explaination for her name. I got the Whitlock reference with Whitley, but I honestly forgot about Alice's maiden name.
Can't wait for the next chapter! You write the best four way lemons ever!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I had alot of people who didn't get the Mackenzie/McCarty connection.
Carlisle is a divorved father of one. When he meets Edward, a previous fling, his whole world changes, but is it for the better? Tattoed Carlisle, pierced Edward. Slash, lemons, strong language. OOC. AH. Entry for the Slash Backslash competition.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8877 Read Count: 912
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, I think I could grow to love a tattooed Carlisle! This was a very hot chapter!!! How ironic after a one night stand years prior that two gay men would reconnect at their kids' pre-school. If you decide to continue this, I can only imagine where you could take them.
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thanks for reviewing! UNF, I love me some tattoed men...I just had to do it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! At the moment, I have no plans to continue it, as I have a number of stories on the go right now, but it may happen in the future!
xoxo
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123448
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master
OMG!!! That was intense ane unbelievably hot! If you decided to continue this story, I can only imagine what you could do with these two.
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months
Damn, that Bella is a smart cookie. I wouldn't want her conspiring against me!
Those are some tasty lemons you included in here. I can't wait to read about the playroom. And I loved how he set her up to fail while he fucked her on his desk so that he could "punish" her...very hot!!!
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break
OME! I am so glad you decided to make this story more than a one-shot! The scene in the playroom was unbelievably hot!!! I am really enjoying this story and I love how you have written this E&B. They are a perfect match.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months
That chapter was amazing!!!! I loved how Edward protected her from James at the party. And the sex afterwards was fuck hot!!!
After reading the SF sexcapades, I need to go spend a little one on one time with the hubby!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months
I love this story. I love the fact that even though we kinda know how it ends up from the first chapter, there are so many details that you give us from the middle.
The scene at the cabin was incredible!!! Edward is getting to be a very creative Dom. Love it!!! ;)
I also like that Bella is the first person Emily calls when she needs a female to talk to. She will probably jump for joy when Edward finally tells her the truth.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Bella is one smart cookie. And I love how the kids 'want to keep her'. They may not know the extent of the relationship, but I'll bet those kids are guessing that their dad has a crush on Bella.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Holy hot sex in the movies AND in the shower AND on the boat! The things you make these two do...I am jealous of your dirty mind! ;)
I am gald things worked out with the custody and now hopefully the divorce will be finalized and Tanya will drop off the face of the earth.
Loved the conversation with Charlie. He plays a small but important role in this story.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months
Oh my word there was a whole lotta happenings in that six months. My favorite part had to be in the beginning when Edward told the kids about Bella. I loved their reaction especially when Evan wanted to get rid of the mystery girlfriend cause he wanted him with Bella. I also loved the scene in the park when Edward realized that Bella was what their family was missing.
I feel bad that Alice and Rose are behaving so terribly towards her. I thought it was awesome how Edward ripped into them at the dinner party.
I love this story! It is not only amazingly hot, but you are so creative with the ideas you put in here. I love every word!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Oh crap! Christmas was so nice and now we have to worry about Bella having a stalker? I wonder if it was James. I am glad that Edward pulled the Dom card in regards to the new locks and security system. You know, for a man who never even considered the lifestyle, he is a fantastic Dom to Bella.
The scene in his parents house was unbelievably kinky and hot! And I love his tattoo!!! That is too cool. I think it was awesome that he admited that he couldn't get the thought of marrying her out of his head. And I also thought it was awesome how he told Esme off. I understand her need to protect her son, but he is of an age that she should be able to trust his good judgement (prior marriage aside).
Author's Response:
Bella was very right inher first assessment of him - that he already had most of the important traits that make a good Dom - especially wanting her safe.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months
I love that Edward has put his foot down with his mother. She really needs a serious kick in the ass.
The cruise was a really cute idea. I love that Evan wants Bella to be his mom.
The play party was very hot and Edward has admitted that he wants to marry her and have a baby with her...love it.
I am a little concerened about the stalker that Bella seems fairly oblivious about. I hope someone stops him before it goes too far.
As always, excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Some of the most open and honest things I have heard have some from children - who don't know to censor their feelings.
thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months
If I haven't said it before, I will say it now...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
Your writing is amazing. You tell such a fantastic story with just enough detail to keep me informed without boring the snot out of me (as most professional writers do). The lemons are beyond hot and the character developement is outstanding!
I loved when Bella came into the school board meeting with her posse. It was awesome and I swear I could visualize the whole thing go down. Yes, she is the submissive in this story, but she has such a powerful presence that she really blows me away. I want to be this Bella, you know?
The scene in his home office was unbelievably hot and I think I may need to read that part again just so I know I didn't miss any details (that's my story and I'm sticking to it).
The way they care for each other, both as D&s as well as their vanilla relationship is amazing to read. Their love and devotion to each other is breath taking. With each chapter, I fall more and more in love with these two.
Author's Response:
thank you and thanks for reading
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year
What a fantastic chapter!!! I loved the surprise trip to England and all surprises Edward included. The sex on the lamborghini was un believably mind blowing!!! That is mental candy that I will be holding onto for a while.
The proposal was beautiful and the wedding was perfect. I loved every word of it.
Excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and love reading Use Somebody.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
As always, another amazing chapter!!!
I really kind of hate Esme. The bitch needs to mind her business and stay out of E&B's. I love that Edward layed down the law with her, and I think it was awesome that the kids sided with Bella over Esme.
I always figured James was the creepy stalker. I am glad Bella kicked his ass!
That was totally hot the way Bella showed up at the school and they had SEX IN HIS OFFICE!!! That was hot and dirty and all sorts of fuck-awesomness!!!
I can't wait to see what fun the going away party and the move to Chicago brings!
Author's Response:
Gotta love office sex - thanks for reading.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
Holy shit! Esme finally stopped holding her breath and stomping her foot like a toddler and actually called Bella?!? I am so shocked, you could knock me over with a riding crop!
Speaking of toys...FUCK ME SIDEWAYS! THAT PARTY WAS HOTTER THAN HADES!!! OMG! I loved the whole fucking thing! I don't know where you come up with this stuff, but I would love to tap into your brain sometimes (I'll bet it is a god damned party up there).
Excellent chapter from start to finish!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you - I was actually a little worried about the party part because B &E won't get into the public play part of BDSM very much so I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
Another excellent chapter! I have to say your description of the playroom does strange things to my girlie parts. God, Edward is the perfect Dom. He could spank me any day.
Loved the snowball war. It was such a fantastic family moment that shows how much fun they all have together. And I love how the kids are so protective of Bella.
I can't believe Esme was so dillusional that she invited Tanya and her mother to that lunch. I really think if she doesn't show huge improvements that they really should cut ties.
Author's Response:
Thank you - Esme is in for an eye-opener
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
I always do a little happy dance when you update this story. And this chapter did not disappoint. Ugh, where to start? Aro is a creapy bastard. I loved how Edward put him in his place and inferred that maybe his mentor should be contacted...nice! I also loved how he put the asshats in their place at the ball. They weren't the brightest bulbs in the box. LOL.
Seriously, what the hell is up Esme's ass? Even after learning everything she did in that last disasterous lunch, she still wants Edward to go with Tanya?!? Why, cause she can control Tanya with money and she can't control Bella? I agree that this story is best with Edward's POV, but I can't wait to see the outtake and find out what is ticking in that brain of hers and what was in the envelope and who she called. She is gonna have a coronary when she finds out Bella is prego!
Speaking of, I loved how Bella buttered Edward up to tell him her change of heart about the baby. To hell with the stomach; the way to a man's heart is about a foot lower. ;)
Ahh, the kink. God I love the dirty things you do with these two. The fucking machine with the vibrating butt plug...fucking classic! And the scene in the bedroom with the wax...let's just say that a dirty mind is a terrible thing to waste and I plan to use all the impure thoughts you have just given me and put them to good use!
As always, excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much - I know how I want Esme's story to go but I don't know that it will make anyone have sympathy for her.
You know how to write the kink also - I love Use Somebody.
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Oh snap! The shit has really hit the fan in Esme's life hasn't it? I love Carlisle and the fact that he refuses to even consider forgiving her until she has made things right with E&B. It shows what kind of man he is.
I don't blame Esme for trying to hide her past, but Carlisle is right. she should have told him as soon as Carmen reared her ugly head in her direction before the wedding.
As much as I LOVE Edward's POV, I am so glad you wrote this chapter because it explains so much!
Author's Response:
So many reviewers wanted to know what was in the envelope and why Esme was doing things I was worried I would running for cover if it wasn't explained. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I think Edward is being very understanding and open to Esme and I really hope she appreciates it and has learned her lesson. Bella is most definately his rock. She is so incredible to even attempt to encourage him to make peace with his mom after all that she did to her.
Triplettes?!? It has been so long since I read the 1st chapter of this that I can't remember if they were mentioned or not. That is just too cool for words. I love how involved Edward is with the pregnancy. It is sad to think that he never had any of those experiences before.
Ahhh, pregnancy sex. I loved when Bella attacked him in the middle of the night. That was awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks - the babies are not mentioned in the one-shot - I loved the pregnancy sex with all three of my kids - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
OMG! That was so sweet! I love the visual of the three older kids holding the babies!!! I think the names are super cute, but they are going to regret making them all sound similar when they have to yell at them when they are older. LOL ;)
Bella sending the kids as interference for Edward's party was very funny. And I love Bella's reaction to Heidi hitting on him. I am surprised she didn't smack her with those wicked hormones corsing through her.
I am glad they are standing their ground with Esme. I like the explanation that Edward gave Bella over why he didn't want Esme in their home. It makes a lot of sense and it shows how protective he is over what is his. He is the best husband and father. How can you not love this Edward?
As always...excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
My kids names all start with "S" and it has gotten very confusing - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months
I think I have missed the playroom almost as much as E&B! That was an incredible way to get back to playtime!!!
Esme is certifiable! WTF?!? I am glad they have her on drugs cause obviously the therapy isn't enough.
Hopefully in the next chapter she will be a better, more stable Esme. Oh! With the ten year jump, maybe we will get to see Emily getting married?!? That would be too cool!
Excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later
Oh girl, you have a true gift for smut and story all wrapped up in one. There are some fan fics that are great stories and others that have lemons that would make you do dirty deeds. You, my friend have incorporated both so well that it kills me to know this is near the end.
I love how you have given us a visual of how their lives have grown and flourished in such a beautiful way. And even after being together for all this time, they are still so into each other.
The scene in his office was so freakin dirty...I loved it! And even though I have read several scenes on motorcycles, yours was so unique and fucking hot...damn! There are just not enough words.
I have loved every chapter of this story and I am going to miss it so much when it is through.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later
OMG! When I saw the 'Completed: Yes' I felt a huge wave of sadness take over and then to find Bella was gone did me in. I cried so hard throughout this entire chapter. The only time I smiled was when Bella and Edward talked about their kids. Edward's pain and desolation was so real it was palpable. I swear I could feel his heartbreak at losing the center of his existence. And then for him to force himself to live after her for three whole years was just awful. Yes it was easier for the kids to not lose them both together, but in all reality, they did. Edward died the day Bella was killed; his body just didn't get the message from his heart.
It was a beautiful and tragic end to a story that I have looked forward to every time I got an email alert.
This has been such an incredibly amazing story! I have loved every word, every emotion and every character. I really cannot put into words how much I have enjoyed reading this. This story had so much depth and love and hot spanking sex. It was perfect (and I do not use that word lightly). I feel like I have just lost two dear friends. I know I will reread this at some point just to go back to happier times and visit this wonderful world you have given us. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this with us.
All my best,
Nickey
PS. I wish there was a higher rating than 10, because 10 seems completely inadequate for this chapter and this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. For some reason I didn't feel like I could leave this story until they had a definite conclusion and tohave Edward die just struck me as cliche - way too expected. I loved writing this story and I feel as if they did get a HEA in a way. Thanks for reading - Beth
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like how you started this off. I am curious how these two will come face to face again. Will he seek her out or will it be another random incounter?
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter. I love the awkward interaction between them (well, awkward on Bella's part). I can just see what is coming..Edward will order a delivery for every day but Wednesday, right? LOL. Hmmm, I can only imagine how that will sit with Bella.
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am waiting to deliver an opinion on this Edward. I am not sure I like the side he has shown thus far. He is lusting after a girl who he imagines as a sub when he already has a sub in Tanya? I can't wait to see who is outsire the door screaming and why.
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I feel like with every chapter you dangle the carrot just an inch closer. I am giddy with anticipation.
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am very curious what Edward has up his sleave and how he plans to make Bella his sub. That is his plan, yes?
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I think Edward has a bit of a crush. LOL. So, hhow is he going to break his contract with Tanya?
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wow, that Peter is a slime ball! I am glad Bella got away from him, but what the hell is she going to do now?
I'd bet that at the door we will find one Edward Cullen standing there looking like sex on a stick. ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I don't know who creeps me out more, Tanya or Edward.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Ok Mr Cullen. How are you going to explain all that to Bella? I seriously can not wait to see how he tries to talk his way out of that one.
Please, please give us Bella's POV for that moment she walked in the door???
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I am so glad you wrote this chapter from Edward's POV. It cleared up a lot of what happened last chapter and exactly what his intentions were with Tanya and Bella together in the house.
I can tell that he really likes Bella, but I don't see him being satisfied with Bella only as his submissive.
And to answer your question, I think she went home. I don't think she is comfortable with being in his home. She is an independant soul and wants to remain that way.
Author's Response:
I was second guessing myself when i started writing it in EPOV, but honestly I could NOT write it. Edward was blocking any other ideas. (:
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I feel bad for Bella. She really is alone. Charlie is just a manipulative check book and a means to an end for Bella to stay in school. Edward is a borderline stalker and Mrs Cope is a peeping tom. She needs to surround herself with some better people.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
OMG!!! Please tell me that was Edward she just hit?!? LMAO!!! Either way, that is too funny for words.
While we are on the subject of Edward...I don't think that stalking Bella at home and school is going to win her over. Any D/s relationship is based on a deep level of trust and I have to say that if I were Bella, I wouldn't trust Edward as far as I could throw him.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't trust Edward either. And i doubt Bella does right now. Hopefully, Edward can stop his stalkerish ways and fix things! (:
Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men. Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position. Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?
Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series. Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls
Ahhh, he loves her!!! I think Charlie's call to Edward from the hospital was great.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway
Very promising start. I can tell you from personal expierience, there is nothing hotter than a man who can handle that much horse power. Edward in a jumpsuit behind the wheel of a stock car...fucking yummy!!!!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole
Excellent chapter. Glad to see Izzy is ok and will be able to race. Loved the interactions between Edward and Charlie. Charlie may be a quiet man, but what he says always counts.
The end was excellent. I loved it when Izzy heard Edward refusing to leave her to get to the next race. Very sweet.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings
Who doesn't love Monty Python? That shit is classic!
Excellent chapter. I think it is awesome how they seem to gravitate towards each other and they are more aware of the other's pain rather than their own.
Charlie is a good dad. I love the inner strugle to want to protect his little girl from getting her heart broken but also wants her to be open to find love.
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
LOL! I love that Edward is holding this normal, run of the mill conversation with Bella while he is still in the race. And the hand holding is sweet. Personally, I love the heat, but I am enjoying this slow burn you are writing for these two. ;)