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Bio:
I am a wife and working mother of three. And I am a rabid Twilight fan. I also love good wine, good friends and skin art. Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me. Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele. But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.
I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since. My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)
Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own.
I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010. He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell! I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!! Check out the link if you are so inclined.
http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/awesome-fan-encounter-with-peter-facinelli/
I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011. What an absolutely amazing group of guys. If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them. I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again. And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day. Check out the link to read the whole story.
Use Somebody A/N:
I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.
Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men. Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position. Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?
Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series. Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries
Gold star to Edward for best first date ever!!! What a fantastic idea to have dinner and a private showing at a drive-in. I also love that he took her to race her car. It was so obvious that she needed that before an actual race. I love how Edward watches out for her.;)
The end was so cute how they couldn't sleep but were out cold once they were back in each other's arms. Sweet!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen
Ahhh, I can totally see these two sneaking across their back lawns to sleep together because they won't be able to sleep alone.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor
Oh hell no! Bella is not going to take too kindly to Tanya being in her house (which it basically is now). Please tell me this is the he Volturi brothers way of drumming up more publicity?!?
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Shame on me, I was one of those that had forgotten about Edward's past with Tanya. I'm glad she isn't a heinous bitch and actually helped them before Bella left.
They said they love each other!!!!! And then they get cockblocked by the gay ex and frozen pizza...not too many people can say that is the reason behind their sexual frustration. And even though they will be alone together in Bella's trailer, I just don't see Edward taking her in a rocking trailer heading down Route 66. That is just too white trashy (at least for their first time). ;)
Author's Response:
LMAO! so very true on many counts! Thanks so much for the laugh!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus
And the cock blocks just keep on coming! I feel bad for these two. The way things are going, they are going to be celebrating their golden anniversary before they get any action.
Love the scene in the mall where the girls discover Iz's product line.
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event
Well it is about damned time!!! That was so hot and so romantic all at the same time. I almost cried when the condom chat killed the mood earlier. I was very happy to see when things picked up where they had left off. ;)
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion
These two are too cute together. But I have to agree with Bella because if Edward doesn't get back into the game, he won't be there to protect Bella at all.
I'm glad Edward took Bella's rejection about moving in together well. Granted I think she is crazy and personally would have had my shoes in his closet and Cherry Garcia in the freezer before he could say house key. ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers
I love Bella's form of motivation. Edward is such a typical guy. He is motivated by either his hunger or his 'hunger'.
Loved it.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation
The conversation between the girls had me giggling...she likes hardwood...funny.
This outfit of Bella's must be something for Edward to even consider having his entire house unpacked in three days. I can't wait to see if he gets it done.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...
The Volturi brothers are a bunch of ass wipes! I really hope Bella and Edward are able to find another race team that will take them both.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards
Hot, Hot, Hot! That chapter was amazing!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents
Well, that was much less painful than Bella expected. Can I just say that I LOVE Esme!! Carlisle leaves a little to be desired in his attitude towards his family.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding
I totally loved Bella sweetly telling Carlisle off at dinner! That was the best!!!
The end was pretty cool too where Carlisle finally gained a respect for what his son does for a living.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money
Carlisle to the rescue!!!! I am so glad he and Esme are backing E&B up with their business venture. That is just too awesome.
I loved Edward's reaction to the ringing phone that morning. I could totally picture him sitting there frozen just staring at it.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them
Wow, that is pretty underhanded for someone to sabotage Bella's car. I'll bet anything it was the Volturri assholes. It just seems like something they would do.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal
Drama, drama, drama. I still think Volturi brothers are behind the sabotage.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch
Another excellent chapter. I wonder what the deal is with jackass and Cosma???
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge
Normally I don't like flip flopping time in a story, but you did it really well. I felt myself holding my breath at several points in this story, but I am so glad he is going to be ok. I hope he is going to be able to race again. That will break him if he has to be in the pits watching Bella out there alone. I love the proposal. It was very sweet. And I thought it was cool that he gave her a neclace to wear her ring on until they were ready to go public. I also thought it was awesome when Bella kicked the shit out of jackass.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle
You are such a smart cookie posting in the A/N!
Normally I can't stand lawyers on principle alone, but I think I love Jenks! He totally handed Aro his ass and it was too sweet for words.
I love that Esme and Carlisle are helping Edward and Bella. It is nice to see Carlisle being the awesome guy we know he can be.
Excellent A/N! ;)
Author's Response:
LOLOL...thanks. It seemed like the natural thing to do when the chapter didn't show. LOL! I"m just glad it worked
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing
What a difference a year makes! So, they are having a little speed demon of their own?!? That is too sweet!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue
Awesome ending!!!! I love Kyla's name. Very pretty!!! I have really enjoyed this story and the ending was perfect. Very natural.
What happens when Edward allows a bit more before the wedding? Call it a practice run... Call it desire... I call it Lustful Temptations.
Originally written for the Fun With Your Clothes On Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2929 Read Count: 1397
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was incredibly hot non-sex!!! And the bet was hillarious! I was wondering why Jasper had never tried that before. LOL
A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.
WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11468
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: You Just Might Get It
Holy hell, these sure aren't SM's vampires! That was fucking hot!
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Revelations and Invitations
I think I am the one grinning like a fool. This has the promise of being a very good story. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Everything I Wanted
It was nice to read the history of how Carlisle was changed and how Edwards was there to help him, but I thought it was a touch slow.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Careful What You Ask For
OMG! I can't believe Carlisle was that viscious towards her. No wonder she left. But will she come back?
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Hyde
That was so sad reading through Edward's pain. I thought it was awesome the way he healed her with his venome. I'm glad she didn't turn him away when he came to her room.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: An Eye for an Eye
I think it is one thing for Bella to let him physically mark her, but it is another thing for him to emotionally hit her like he did when he called her a slut. I hope she sets some boundaries with him about this because I don't think any good can come of this if he does that again.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Like Father, Like Son
That was an intense fight between Carlisle and Edward. I like that you make them vulnerable. I think it gives them more depth than SM's vamps.
I can't believe that Carlisle had a trunk of SMBD accessories. That is some kinky fuckery of a whole new level.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Confrontations and Evasions
It is about damned time that these two talked.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: If You Give an Inch
I think a cold shower is a good idea for everyone involved. LOL.
This was beyond intense and I don't think I was breathing much as I read it.
In my humble opinion, I think the biggest problem that E&B have is lack of communication and trust. I think this lifestyle fits them but neither of them are in a good place to expierience this together without one or both of them getting hurt.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Three of a Kind
Holy crap! Carlisle bit her and changed her?!? I didn't expect that. She took to the change really well. I almost expected her to be bitter.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Gifts
Finally, Edward and Bella seemed to be on the same sexual page. I am so glad. And I am very glad that Carlisle and Esme have reconnected. Maybe now he won't be so dark and hateful.
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Out of the Past
I can't believe what a self rightous bitch Esme has turned into.
What the hell is Jacob doing there?!? I can see Edward taking one of two routes. Either he is going to believe what Esme was saying and break things off with Bella or he is going to flip shit and beat the hell out of Bella for being a slut and maybe eat Jacob in the process.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Jacob
Holy crap!!! That was seriously fucked up! So, did Esme kill Jacob for sport, dinner or because she felt he was coming between Bella and Edward? I wonder what hand Edward played in all this and if Bella will stay with him. As much as I am all for E&B pairings, this does not seem to be a healthy environment for Bella to be in.
This story tella the tale of Edward and Bella's honeymoon on Isle Esme and the ensuing events of the pregnancy, and Bella's transformation into her new life.
Contains various pov's through the stories and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110415 Read Count: 10324
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Excellent begining. I loved reading Edward's POV for this part of the story.
Author's Response:
I tried to fill in what was missing.
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
LOL, Edward has a kinky side, doesn't he? Having his way with Bella while she slept was hot.
Author's Response:
You can thank my husband for that, he tells me that I act out in my sleep, so I thought I would help him get Bella to act out too.
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
It is hard to read Edward's reaction that first morning.
Author's Response:
I was hard to write it, but I just tried to imagine how i would feel if I hurt someone I loved like that, even if it was an accident.
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Edward can be so frustrating some times.
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I think Bella has created a sexual monster. ;)
Author's Response:
Hey she opened up a hundred yearold sexually frustrated boy...can't say I blame him
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Very hot sex and very sweet goodnights, loved it!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love how you interpreted this part of the story from EPOV.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
The conversation between Kaure and Edward was great. I loved how you used SM's story and filled in the blanks.
Author's Response:
I had such a hard time, trying to stay to true to the books, it made it so time consuming, almost every spoken word from the characters was right from the book, I had to work carefully with what she had written.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Loved the add in of the interaction with Christine. I also enjoyed the voluntary kidnapping of Bella and how Edward and Carlisle were stunned into inaction.
Author's Response:
I thought it might be nice to allow Bella a more human moment before the supernatural set in. thanks
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Poor Rose. She can be a real bitch but it is almost impossible not to feel something for her when you remember what she has been though and what she has lost. I wonder if part of the reason she chose Emmett is because he is so big and strong that she knew that he would always protect her even though as a Vampire, she wouldn't really need it?
Author's Response:
I agree...i think Rose is a complex woman, who is much deeper than she seems. sometimes people find it easier to act the way others expect then to. i think she loves Emmett ecause even though he loves her beauty, he knows there is so much more to her, and he doesn't take her nasty side seriously/
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
So the battle lines have been drawn.
Author's Response:
they have been drawn in concrete..lol
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Poor Edward, he can't do anything without feeling guilty about it.
Author's Response:
he's guilty if he's sad, and guilty if he's happy..he needs a good kick in the pants.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I think it was kida selfish of Bella to want to call Charlie when she was planning on 'dying' anyways. Actually, I think Bella is very selfish in this part of the story. Can't she see the pain she is causing Edward? All because SHE wants the baby. Don't take this the wrong way because as a mom, I agree with her. But Edward was thrown under the bus for making decisions without Bella's input, how is what she is doing any better?
Author's Response:
It should have been a joint choice, I agree. but I think she got defensive since Edward approached it the wrong way. As A mom also I agree with you.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I love Rose's mental threats towards Jacob. And why does everyone feel they can claim what is Edward's. First Rose wants the baby and Jacob keeps referring to Bella as his. I don't know how he doesn't completely lose it.
Author's Response:
He is really trying not to, I think he is accepting it as his penance for putting Bella's life at risk.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
It was hard enough to read Edward's pain through Jacob's eyes in BD, but to be inside his head throughout this is ten times worse.
Author's Response:
It was hard to write it, since his pain was so intense. But I think seeing it from his pov helped you see why he behaved the way that he did in the book.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Poor Edward. He is killing himself with guilt and now he is torturing himself with the images that Jacob has running like a porno through his mind.
Author's Response:
I myself would hate to be a mind reader, you would see so many things that you would wish you never knew...Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I feel so bad for everything this is putting him through. But I like that he is starting to think about how to save Bella. I think it is good that he is focusing on something positive. I also love the explaination of why he used a metal syringe for the venom.
Author's Response:
I tried to answer the questions that I had when I read breaking dawn. I am so glad you feel as if it is filling in the blanks.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I really hated Rose at this point in the story only because she was always in the way of Edward spending any time with Bella.
Author's Response:
She did always seem to be in the way. As much as it irritated me, I loved the back and forth between her and Jacob.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I enjoyed reading Carlisle's POV. He is definately one of my favorite vamps!
Author's Response:
I thought it would be nice to see it from his analytical side.Thanks for reviewing
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I love how you wrote Edward's first expierience hearing the baby.
Author's Response:
I really wanted everyone to see how special it was for him, even if he was terrified of losing Bella.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
That was a very nice chapter. I liked hearing Jasper's POV.
For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.
Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble. At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.
With no information on her how can he find her again?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3156
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting
That was hot and dirty and all kinds of sexy!!! You could so make this into more than a one-shot. But even as a one-shot, it was fuck awesome!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you and I probably will continue it sometime in the future.
In Breaking Dawn we read the following:
"...the most absolute of all the pack's laws was that no wolf ever kill the object of another wolf's imprinting. The pain of such a thing woud be intolerable for the whole pack. The fault, whether intended or accidental, could not be forgiven; the wolves involved would fight to the death--there was no other option. It had happened long ago, Seth told me, but only accidentally. No wolf ever intentionally destroyed a brother that way."
This is the legend of what happened long ago.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1930 Read Count: 189
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very sad. But I liked how it played along with the stories that SM told.
The Free Verse poem that appears in the Epilogue of the story Shadowed Abyss, as wrote in Bella's perspective. You are not required to read the story to enjoy the poem.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Poetry
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Poetic Twilight, Twilight Fanfic Poetry
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30 Read Count: 73
The poem found on Chapter 30 - Grief And Rage of Forbidden, Forgotten, and Unforgiven. It was said originally by my made up character Marsha. You do not have to read Forbidden, Forgotten, And Unforgiven to enjoy the poem.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Poetry
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Poetic Twilight, Twilight Fanfic Poetry
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61 Read Count: 60
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very nice poem, but very sad.
Edward and Bella are happily married. Edward has shared many fantasies he would like to play out with Bella, but there is one he is sure she will never agree to. How will Edward react when Bella surprises him making his fantasy a reality. There's an airplane, a bendy straw, and champagne. Originally written for a Ninapolitan's Special Day Surprise using the three aforementioned prompts. Rated NC-17 for Language & Lemon
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2106 Read Count: 921
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was very, very hot!!! I think I need a glass of wine...and a bendy straw. ;)
Author's Response:
Hehehehe....bendy straws will always have a new meaning in my life. I'm sooooo glad you thought this was very, very hot. That definitely makes me all tingly inside. Thank you for taking the time to tell me, it means the world. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this and was super nervous, because it was my first attempt at Bella and Edward, and I NEED to do them justice. So, I'm elated that you enjoyed it.
xo
Sherry
The poem that appears in Chapter 9 - Hate You of Death Burn. In the story it was wrote by an anonymous author (that would be me), so there is no perspective. You do not need to read Death Burn to enjoy the poem.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Poetry
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Poetic Twilight, Twilight Fanfic Poetry
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53 Read Count: 64
An acrostic poem for the words New Moon.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Poetry
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Poetic Twilight, The Twilight Saga Acrostic Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 80
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting. I wonder what you could do with the other three titles.
Author's Response:
Twilight Acrostic has been done for awhile if you look at my list of stories you'll find it.
Some morning fun with the major and the doctor. Slash AU/AH.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2426 Read Count: 740
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, that was pretty impressive for your first try. The beginning was incredibly hot. But my heart breaks for all of them. Unfortunetly, no happiness can be found when someone is living a lie. :(
Author's Response:
There are a lot of realationship like this. Being in the closet about who you are doesn't help at all.
I hope I can write more slash but less angst
And thank you for your kind words.
Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind
Ooooh, I am loving this beginning!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....
I like how you are writing this Bella. She is not all weepy and falling all over Edward. And it appears she has been busy in their time apart...who's the guy?
Author's Response: All will be revealed soon. Thx. I don't care for. Bella or edward that is still crying after many years.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian
I know this isn't going to be the last time they see each other obviously, but that must have killed Edward to walk away. I like how Julian says 'call us anytime'. He is pretty confident isn't he?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate
WTF?!? So was he attacking her or were they just getting their freak on?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?
Oh Edward, he knows so little about the sexual world. I think he might fall over when he finally realizes that Bella likes things a bit less vanilla than the average girl.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults
I really love Emmett. Everyone always underestimates him, but he always seems to understand the situation pretty damned quickly.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here
I wonder what it is going to take for Edward to understand that he no longer calls the shots where Bella is concerned. Maybe if he had realized that he truly never had that power then he wouldn't be in this position at all. For a smart guy, he is kinda stupid.
Author's Response: I thing when it comes to Bella, edward repeatedly fails to act rationale and s/times that can be funny
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good
Careful Edward, she might bite back now. lol
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?
I loved the part where Jasper shows Edward that he can give Bella everything that Julian can including a family. And the part about Edward's sexual hang ups was kinda funny.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-The Plan
Ok, the books were awesome. I can totally picture Edward's face as he was reading the titles.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell
Bella took that better than I expected. I wonder if she really wants Edward back?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens
Holy shit, I thought Edward was going to kill Julian right in front of Bella. Good thing Emmett was there to get him away. I hope Bella isn't considering signing that contract. It just doesn't seem to fit her new personality. She basically let Edward rule their relationship. I can't see her allowing Julian or anyone else have that kind of control again.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body
I really love Emmett! He calls it like he sees it.
Damn, Edward is a slow learner. It has taken him this whole time to finally realize that Bella is no angel. Well, at least he is making progress.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Em. He makes a lot of appearances in this story. Don't give up on Edward yet....lol.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....
That was kind of sad. Does anyone else want to take Edward out back and smack him around? She is basically saying she will be his if only he will change her. But he won't. Idiot.
I can't believe she still wants to be a vampire now that she has a chance at a life with Julian. Does she even love him?
Author's Response:
Nic: If you really want to know what Bella is thinking, there is an outtake in her POV that covers some of these early chapters. It is the first chapter of HOW TO WIN BACK OUTTAKES, a separate story posted here.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys
LMAO! Bella showed him her nipples and he actually remained standing? I am shocked! Oh and Esme is too funny for words! This was an excellent chapter.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research
Emmett's own sex shop? No one could do it better!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Fall
Oh My God! The whole CFM conversation was awesome. Esme and Carlisle are a couple of little minx aren't they???
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Poor Bella. I don't envy her having to choose between a man she knows loves her and the one who left.
Please tell me Tanya is not going to be an issue? Tanya is always a medling bitch in so many of these stories.
Author's Response:
Hopefully you will be pleasantly surprised with Tanya in this one! Let me know what you think. I'm really enjoying all ofyour reviews.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-Wicked Games
So, Bella doesn't want Edward (or at least wants Julian more for the time being), but she doesn't want him with anyone else? Seems like the jealosy cuts both ways. I wonder how she will deal with it.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires
LMAO! Everyone's thoughts were hilarious!!! I love how Edward jumped in to offer to take Bella on the trip and Julian instantly said No. Someone may not be as sure of his position after all.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus
OMG! I am dying! This chapter was fucking fantastic! I have to agree with the family, this is a serious short coming on Julian's part and a perfect window for Edward to jump through...mouth first of course. ;)
Author's Response:
Mouth first...lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter. And I, along with most women, would agree!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?
I think Emmett should offer lessons to every man in the world!!! That was a pretty hot chapter considering no one was getting any. ;)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections
OMG! Edward is never going to live down that little incident in the bathroom, is he?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24-Testing Boundaries
My favorite part was the banter between Rose and Edward.
"Bend over wench."
"Bite me virgin."
Perfect lines!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-Place Your Bets
Taking bets on Edward's sex life is just wrong. Fucking hilarious, but wrong.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances
You know, him smelling her should be really creapy, but when Edward does it, it's just hot!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27-Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!
I loved when he was singing to her. That song is an oldie but a goodie and was perfect for that moment!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last
Damn, Edward has some skills!!! I am sure he is thanking Emmett for all his teaching.
Author's Response:
He's a fast learner!!!!!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I"m really enjoying reading them.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...
He is so busted!
I don't get where Bella gets the nerve to be upset with Edward if he had been practicing on Tanya. To be jealous is one thing, but to be angry about it is another. E&B had no committment to each other then. But the peach was pretty funny and creative.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-To Spank or Not To Spank
I love the idea of the nipple ring charm. Very sweet and very hot. I love Bella pushing him with the 'dirty talk'.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Bella's Real Fantasy
I wonder if Edward will ever give in to Bella's ultimate fantasy? It is pretty hot! I am glad Bella has the balls to stand up and speak her mind on the whole biting and changing thing.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights
Holy shit! He actually spanked her!!! That was totally hot. Bad Bella is a lot of fun. She may not test him anymore, but that doesn't mean she can't tease him a little.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33-Fear No More
That was outstanding! I love the part where Edward realizes that the instincts that might kill Bella are actually the same ones that would not allow him to hurt her. Perfect!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the smut! LOL.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-The Morning After
The shower sex was hot! I am really liking this new Edward!