Penname: nickeyd26 [Real name: Nicole
Member Since: 16 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

stories/7939/images/3023603255_16b3a638ed.jpgI am a wife and working mother of three.  And I am a rabid Twilight fan.  I also love good wine, good friends and skin art.  Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me.  Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele.  But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.


I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since.  My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)


Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own. 


I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010.  He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell!  I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!!  Check out the link if you are so inclined.


http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/awesome-fan-encounter-with-peter-facinelli/


 I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011.  What an absolutely amazing group of guys.  If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them.  I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again.  And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day.  Check out the link to read the whole story.


http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/fan-encounter-with-jackson-rathbone-at-100-monkeys-concert-in-toronto/


Use Somebody A/N:


I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91322
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn it!  I was hoping for a Mrs. White vs. Bella smack down!  Damn!  Oh well, there is always hope for that to come up later when she doesn't change her attitude.  I like the addition of Phil as the principal.



Author's Response:

LOL, I have a plan for Mrs. White:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy hell!  Edward can play that game any fucking time he wants!!!  That was fucking hot!!!  And the fact that Alice and Jasper were just watching them...even fucking hotter!I am so glad I read 'Living Through the Pain' first cause I just knew you would have a juicy little pick me up in here. ;)

Sooooo Seth and Tanya and Angela and Ben, hmmmm?  Very interesting.  I wonder where they are going to live when they finally get their foursome settled?

Need to go have my wicked way with my husband now. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks ;) I needed the pick me up too!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think an outtake would be suffice.  But that is just my opinion.

Ok, I need to work in the building where office sex is that easy to get away with.  And throw in a Jasper for good measure please?  LOL.  Loved the hot office action.  Very nice. ;)

Mrs White is still a narrow minded bitch, but Bella needs to remember that the kids are most important and as long as she is being decent to them, she needs to let sleeping bitches lie.

Ahh, James.  Edward is going to pull a Hoffa and put him into the cement of the foundation of his porn store.  I can see it happening. ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I need to find an office like that, too!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Endless Awakenings

I cried and smiled and held my breath so much I feel like I need some oxygen.  Beautiful chapter!!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love when these four get all hot and sexy in bed.  Being together and parents has not dimmed the flames and I love it!

So Seth and Tanya are leaving LA?  Sorta saw that coming.  But as fun as they have been in this part of the story, they need to be in Forks with Angela and Ben.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I love writing their lemons:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella.  At least she has the most amazing support system that anyone could ask for.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ahhh, I have missed them.  Such a simple but sweet gesture, but sometimes those are the most important.

I loved that Bella and Carlisle were betting over Seth and Tanya moving.  That whole group needs to go to a gambling support group.  They bet on anything!



Author's Response:

I seriously, think they all have a problem:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Jasper is awesome!!!  What a fantastic idea for them to get away from the stress and madness in their lives if only for an evening.  Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG!  I hope your daughter is ok!  Our kids always come first, so never apologize for being the mom you are. ;)

Excellent chapter!  I love these four and can not wait to see what the boys have up their sleeves next.

You gotta love Bella.  She never shows her weaknesses in front of others.  She reacts with anger first...love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you. She's ok, just working through a tough situation right now. Childhood diabetes is no fun:(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Happy fucking new year!  Damn!  Way to go out with a bang!  A double strip tease (emphasis on tease) by our two favorite men!  That was damn hot and very creative you naughty girl you!  LOVED IT!!!!



Author's Response:

lol, I have been holding onto this little gem for a few chapters now. IT seemed like a good time to use it. BTW, I pimped your story, Use Somebody, out on a twilight group over on Facebook. I hope it brings you bunches of new readers. They were looking for a good tattward and I thought of yours;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Office sex is fucking hot!!! 

I don't like the idea of James following them home.  It creeps me out big time thinking that he could hurt the kids to get bback at Bella for dropping him.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I never said it was James in the car;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh shit, James has gone a little psycho.  I know you are going to say that you didn't mention James, but we all know he is koo koo for cocoa puffs.



Author's Response:

lol, you know me too well!! Yeah, he is a little crazy but maybe he's not the only one.....

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Damn straight that was intense.  I liked the scene in the art studio where Jasper got all angry and protective.  He is really hot like that.  Sorry.  Can't help it.



Author's Response:

lol, it was good for me, too!! Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ok, so you are definately keeping the Puffs Plus company in the black.  And if you wonder if you did this chapter justice, the answer is a resounding YES.  I really hope Carlisle and Bella can start to move past the pain and trust their spouses.

 

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok seriously, how much more is she expected to endure?  I don't think I could handle that on top of the sleep deprivation and fear for her children's safety. I really hope they find out who it is soon and nail his ass to the wall.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What an incredibly emotional chapter.  My heart is breaking for them.  To know that the sick fuck was in their house, near their children, is almost too much for any person.  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yeah, she is over dramatic, but she has every right.  I can't imagine I would feel any differently if I were in her shoes.  I thought she kicked ass at the conference.  That took serious balls to go up  in front of everyone like that.

It broke my heart when she was talking to Charlie and I love this last part between her and Alice.  Very well written. ;)

Can someone please kick James' ass very very soon PLEASE.  And don't try and tell me it isn't James.  You and I both know it is that SOB.



Author's Response:

You want to bet on whether or not it's James????

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You are killing me with this cliffy!!!  Please tell me that Carlisle saw who took her?



Author's Response:

Of Course Carlisle saw who took her. The better question might have been, did they take him, too???????

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Alright evil one, a little warning would have been nice!  Damn girl...you are asking alot for us to have faith.  That was freakin harsh.  I mean it is bad enough for that skanky whore to rape Carlisle, but to have Demitri rape Bella?!?  Really, how much more are you going to put this poor girl through before she eats a bullet?  The human soul can only take so much and I think she has suffered not only her share, but enough for Alice, Jasper AND E,dward.

I am officially putting your instincts in a time-out.  Bad instincts, bad!  I really hope you are writing as we speak to make this right.

But as completely emotionally frazzled as I am by this chapter...it was really good. ;)



Author's Response:

This is one of the hardest things I've ever had to write, and this was the mild verison. I can't promise that it won't get worse, either, and I felel like the biggest scum right now for doing this to them!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG!  I am so afraid you are going to kill off Carlisle!  I was holding my breath through the whole last section of this chapter. :(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ugh, that was so emotional.  I hate to see Carlisle and Bella so raw and volitile.  I wonder how they will ever recover?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

My heart is breaking for Esme.  How horrible it must be for her to have Carlisle scream at her that way.  How does someone get past being so broken to allow themselves to be intimate with the people that they love again?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think the families need a huge group therapy session and your readers might need to sit in on it too.  I feel so raw after reading these last few chapters.  I don't know how you write it, but you do it so well.  I know it won't come for a while, but I can't wait for them all to get to a happy place.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good chapter.

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Very emotional.  And so very sad. :(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Congrats on publishing and I am so glad that you have not abandoned my favorite foursome!!! I am so glad to see things taking on a sense of 'normalcy' again, but holy shit! Bella is prego again?!? Now forgive me, but I need a refresher on the time frame here. How long has it been since Felix? PLEASE tell me that there is no way he can be the father. You might as well dump a bottle of pills down Bella's throat and put a loaded gun in her hand.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Holy sexing and emotional roller coaster Batman!!!!! Excellent ending to a wild day!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh out foursome is back and better than ever!!!! That is one of the hottest scenes with them EVER!!!

I am also glad to see both Bella and Carlisle back at the office. Life is finally starting to make sense for them all again! Yeah!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I think it will be a girl. But the parentage is still a little scetchy. 

I am so glad that Bella seems to have made it past this major hurdle. I loved the quickie with her and jasper. Such a true to life moment. ;)

Summary:

 

After getting lost in a foreign city, and with a very peculiar guide, Edward's life is completely altered after an unexpected encounter surrounded with blossoming cherry trees, staring at a pair of stunning blue eyes and a mysterious handsome man. After a passionate stolen kiss, Edward realizes something has changed in him and wants his mystery man back.

Will Edward be able to cast aside social conventions and family expectations, to be with the one he loves? There is more than meets the eye about Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Will Edward be able to make him open up and given them a chance?

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Slash, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31842 Read Count: 3214
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 24 Nov 2016
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Intriguing start.  I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow!  I have to admit the first chapter had me questioning how this would proceed, but I absolutely loved this chapter.  I can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I absolutely love, love, love Esme and Carlisle.  They are the coolest parents ever!!!  I am very curious to see what happens when Carlisle and Edward are under the same roof.

I have to wonder why Carlisle is in the closet.  Especially since he can obviously see how well they have adjusted to Edward being gay.



Author's Response:

Edward's parents are Elizabeth and Ted, not Esme and Carlisle.

Esme was Carlisle's sister. Carlisle is Ted's best friend.

Hope you don't get confused again.

Liz and Ted accept Edward as he is because they love him, and being part of the Hollywood social circle, they are quite liberal in their opinion.

Edward thinks Carlisle is in the closet because Liz didn't know Carlisle was gay.

Carlisle is a very private person, he isn't in the closet, he just doesn't advertise his preferences. (this info is just for you, I'll explain in a future chapter.)

Hope this clears up your confusion.

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Love & Secrets

I am so sorry to hear of your loss.  It is never easy to lose a family memeber especially one who has meant so much to you.

All my best

Nickey

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I love the relationship Edward has with his parents.  It is so easy and natural.  Elizabeth's threat to Ed Senior was freakin hilarious!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Ahhh, you gotta feel so bad for him having Carlisle reject him like that.   I'm glad he has Bella to turn to.  She seems like such a good friend.

I can't wait to see what he got for Emmett in that store.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Hmmm, I think Edward is a little too kind to Riley and it will come back to burn him.  I love how he relates to Sayuri.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135063
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am so glad that Bella got to kick those slime-balls' asses all by herself.  I just wish she had done a little more damage like breaking Mike's wrist for grabbing her (I know I am a vendictive bitch).  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Talk about repaying a huge favor.  How sad that as strong as Garrett is that he can be broken down so small by the people in this world who are supposed to protect him from all of that.



Author's Response:

Yep, Poor Garrett.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Cat and Will are not the people I expected.  I can understand their need to protect their kids, but then to basically disown them...talk about bi-polar parenting.



Author's Response:

Very bi-polar parenting.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Seriously, I know this story is not all fluffy clouds and rainbows, but can't we have a little happiness.  I don't know how you write this.  I find it emotionally draining just to read it!



Author's Response:

I wrote this like three years ago but even now that I am redoing it, cleaning it up and all, I am finding it quite exhausting. I promise the next chapter or two have some lighter, not complete fluff, but lighter times.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My heart is already breaking for her.  This was a great chapter because it lets us see through Bella's eyes as she takes everything in.  I am glad that Emmett can offer her some kind of comfort.  By the way, how old was Bella when she was taken?  Will we get the back story of how she was taken?

Ps.  I accidentally posted ch 28 for Use Somebody twice and then deleted the one with your review.  Oops!  Thanks for the review!  Hope you enjoyed your cold shower. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Bella was almost twelve when she was taken. Yes, the backstory will be coming.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward seems to be putting out emotional fires all over the place.  It seems to be on his and Emmett's shoulders to keep everyone stable while Bella heals. :(



Author's Response:

Right now they are the only ones who know. She will trust the others.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa.  That was one hell of a start.  So, taking a walk on the dark side?  Excellent beginning.  I can already feel my stomach churning over what is to come.



Author's Response:

Yep, my inner darkness is calling:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ugh, that was brutal.  How can someone survive something so horrible for so long?  And now wven though she is home and safe, she will continued to be attacked by the flashbacks.

The one part I thought was sweet was how she felt comfortable in Edward's arms.  You might think that after being abused by a man that Edward would make her feel uneasy.  I'm glad that's not the case.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Edward is her safe place and the one part of her that the man couldn't take from her.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is it redundant for me to say 'poor Bella'?  If it is, I can't help it.  How does someone even try to recover from something so horrific?



Author's Response:

No, it isn't redundant. I have a feeling that you will be saying that alot during this story:(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ugh.  I can't help but wonder how many chapters of bad we will read before we get to some good.

I love that Angela stood up against Jessica and Lauren for Bella.  But for some reason I can't imagine those two bobble heads are going to take Emmett's warning seriously.



Author's Response:

Alot of bad. I do mean alot!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella is so lucky to have the very best friends surrounding her now.  She has mentioned  (or thought) that the man who took her had watched for his chance and took it.  Will we find out why he focused in on her and not someone else?



Author's Response:

Yes, we will.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ugh, I don't know how a soul survives that much damage.

It was nice to see her trying to include Renee after her shopping trip and with the plans for the bedroom.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What kind of monster does that to a girl?  It is so sad to think he picked her out of a crowd and no one was the wiser until after it was too late.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I don't even want to think about those three steps.  I love that she is reaching out to Charlie and Renee.  And I thought it was really cool when she stood up to Jessica and Lauren.  Granted it didn't deter them, but it is still better than going inside herself.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Bella made huge strides in just a couple of days. But what happens when she's outside of her bubble?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved this chapter.  It was nice to see Bella living in the moment and not the past.  I know it won't last, but it was a nice repreive.  I really hope Edward can handle hearing the whole story and not react badly.



Author's Response:

She, as well as the rest of us, needed a lighter chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I don't think it was too soon.  Edward loved her before she was taken and his love grew over the years as he hoped he would find her.  He was her light, her safe place while she was gone.  Of course she loves him, if for no other reason than that.

This chapter was equally sad and happy.  Her story is so heart breaking, but it is nice to see her being more comfortable with Edward and with everyone else.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't think this first day is going to go to well for Bella.  It really seems too early since she isn't talking to a therapist and anything could send her into a panic attack.



Author's Response:

Exactly:( thanks

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well, no one said it was going to be all sunshine and daisies.  I am glad to see the principal and teachers are bing so accomidating.  I hope Peter plays a decent roll in this.  I already like him.



Author's Response:

No, it most certainly is not going to be all sunshine and daises:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This day must be exhausting for Bella.  She has been on an emotional rollar coaster from class to class.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh the drama.  I need to go to MY happy place after reading back to back chapters of this.  Your story should come with an additional warning,  DO NOT READ MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER AT A TIME.  But all juking aside, this was a very good chapter.  I am wondering if Bella and Garrett will be strong enough to get through this?



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Those bitches!!!  I really hope that Bella decides to press charges.  It was no accident.  There actions were totally malicious and they deserve to pay.

I am glad that Bella is ready to tell the rest of the family (which is what they are) her story.  I just hope they can all handle hearing it.

That is so sad what happened to Eleazar's daughter.  But it explains so much of why he is so willing to accomidate to Bella's needs.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I promise that they will be delt with, eventually:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jasper and Rose are going to have a royal fit on theor parents' asses if they try and keep them away from Bella.  And how exactly to they think that is going to happen?  Especially with Rose and Emmett being a couple.  Are they going to move out of town?  They would have to move across the ocean to keep them apart and even then I wouldn't bet against the kids.

As much as each of their perspectives were sad, I think Carlisle's broke my heart.



Author's Response:

Mine too. Carlisle's always does.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ugh!  That is so sad and so hard to read.  I need to go read domething happy to counteract this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hmmm, I noticed that Catherine and William were unusually quiet as everyone else was making a 'game plan' of how to help Bella.  I don't think they are going to like the reactions from anyone when their intentions become known.

I think Bella is doing so much better now that she is telling her story to more people.  It is kind of like when you are sick.  Throwing up is unpleasant, but you need to get the poison out of your system before you can get better.



Author's Response:

Noticed they were quiet, too, eh? Yes, they aren't in too many people's good book right now:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

No!  How are these two not rotting away some where?  And where the hell did They find these other ass hats to help them?  Very sad chapter. :(



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Seriously?!?  I am surprised Renee and Charlie didn't go psychi on those other parents.  I mean how heartless can you be?



Author's Response:

Very heartless but at the same time, they are scared, too!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'll bring the red hot poker.  That SOB deserves nothing less than at least twenty four hours of painful torture.

This chapter was actually harder to read then the onese where Bella explained what happened to her because she is giving up.  That may be sadder than anything else.



Author's Response:

I agree!! It was much harder to write!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WTF!?!?  Brazil???  Couldn't find a further place to send her???  Sorry, but...seriously?  I am more worried about Edward than Bella at this point.  He is going to lose it when Bella begs him to let her stay and I am sure she is going to call him a liar for not keeping his word. 

I am afraid to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Have some trust in me. Have I ever let you down before?????

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Bit of an understatement, don't ya think?  Her moods flipped so fast I am surprised no one got whiplash. 

And I do have faith in you...that doesn't mean that I didn't read this chapter with one eye closed.  I am sure it will get worse before it gets better.  I just hope it gets better for her.



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Such sad and tragic stories.  I wonder if Bella will really allow herself to heal.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow, I bet Garrett didn't see that one coming.  You would have thought he did his homework on Bella before taking her to the island.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Okay, I think I am warming up to Garrett a little bit...but just a little. ;)

Are we going to get Edward's POV while Bella is away?



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I don't have an EPOV planned but I mgith add one. I'm still thinking about it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I really liked this chapter, and I loved that Garrett called Edward to meet them.

To answer your question..hell no she won't be okay, but I think she will be able to leave that room under her own power which iswhat she really needs.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I think you are right:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I felt mixed feelings about Edward taking things that far with Bella so soon.  But I think it represents how much she has healed in order to be able to allow Edward to do that and not be pulled into a flashback or a panic attack.  It was incredibly brave of her to expose herself to him that way and I think Edward handled it perfectly.  I was a little surprised that Bella did not address the fact that it was the first orgasm that she had where she was allowed to enjoy it and claim it as her own and that it wasn't forced on her.

I thought the scene in Bella's prison was incredibly powerful, especially when Edward claimed Bella as his.  Very good chapter.



Author's Response:

See, that was my dilemna with that chapter. I wasn't sure if it was too soon or not but in the end, I decided to follow my instincts and left it in there. IF I have learned anything with my writing is that I should follow my instincts. As for Bella claiming the orgasm, I honestly never even thought about it. You bring up a good point:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Me too!  That part where Garrett forced the others to make statements against Phil was very emotionally raw.



Author's Response:

Very emotionally raw but needed.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I don't blame her for being pissed.  Garrett should have at least told her about Peter when they headed back to town.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh please, oh please let Bella kick those bitches' asses..PLEASE????



Author's Response:

lol, I'll think about it:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Damn it, I don't want to have faith!  I want to see those bitches get their asses kicked severly!!!  It is one thing not to say anything when she was taken.  It's a whole other thing not to say a word for six years.  Bella could have avoided so much pain and torture.  She could still be able to give Edward a child if either of those two soulless whores just spoke up!  There is a certain circle of hell for people like that. 

Okay, I feel a little better now.



Author's Response:

Glad you got your rant down ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I loved the end where she was just sitting and reading with Carlisle.  She is finally getting some of her old self back.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Good chapter.  You can see how far Bella has come wven with a major set back like this.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

It was a very emo inducing chapter.  I like the idea of Bella working at the island, but what about Edward and the rest of the gang?  I can't imagine Bella being ok with being away from them all the time.

I hope Bella kicks Tia's ass.  She will probably feel a little better to focus on someone else's issues instead of her own.



Author's Response:

I got it all covered.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Bella handled Tia really well.  I can see her fitting in with the staff on the island.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That was really beautiful.  Edward was perfect with her.  You just gotta love him.

It was a nice dose of light before we dive back into the dark. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Ok, the end was hard to read.  But the pancakes were fucking hilarious!!! 

I feel so bad for Rose and Jasper.  Thank God they have everyone else to love and support them since their parents are useless.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Bella is making huge strides to get better.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is:) Makes me so proud of her!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

With each chapter Bella gets stronger and stronger.  The island really is the perfect place for her to work after college.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

She really is stronger than she ever knew.



Author's Response:

Yes, she is:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I loved the father/daughter day together.  It is so nice to see them so normal.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

That was such a sweet date and proposal.  I was hoping that is what Edward was planning!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

So Bella has literally come full circle...that was a good way to end it.  I like how all the friends found their nitch on the island.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Covet by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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What do you do when you meet the love of your existence a year after you marry the saviour of your soul?  Edward and Jasper thought they were doomed to a life of longing and regret until they meet someone who holds the key to unlock their future.

Vamp Slash

Jasper POV


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14714 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

I love that everyone is getting their HEA but there was so much saddness with them needing to keep their distance all those years.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.   Yes, if only the boy's didn't have to wait to so long to be together.....  Very happy that you enjoyed.

Suzanne

Summary:

Here is the companion story to Endless Awakenings, the story of Seth, Tanya, Ben, and Angela. NC-17 for the usual.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15719 Read Count: 6337
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is hard for me to think about sweet Ben Chenney fucking Angela from behind after ripping her clothes off.  But I am willing to go with it if you are willing to write it. ;)  I am eager to see where you take these four (especially Seth and Ben). {Giggling like a little school girl}



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LMAO!  I love this Tanya!  But I can't believe she finally got up the nerve to say that!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right? She's my hero right now!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LMAO!  Ya think?  I loved it when they walked in the HIE with no luggage.  That was classic.  As for how to make this work...doesn't the Cullen company have an office in Forks that Carlisle was going to run before they all moved to LA?  Couldn't Seth work there?



Author's Response:

Yes, they do have a firm there:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Intense...that is definatly a good word. LOL.  That  was really, really hot!!!  And I love that Seth's verbal/mental filter seems to be broken. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I should not have read this chapter before going to work.  Now I have to wait till tonight to see my hubby!  Damn, that was hot and sweet and just fucking awesome!!!!

I think the move is the right thing to do.  Angela and Ben's parents are there and it is important for Caleb to have them in his life.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) And I hope the day isn't too miserable for you~!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can I tell you that I love Caleb?  His reaction was the best!  And the fact that he wants Seth and Tanya as his extra mom and dad just rocks.  I wish T&S were there to hear it.  I am sure it would take so much stress off of Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Summary:

 

What happens when you think the man you love is in love with someone else? An Edward/Jasper slash fic.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70706 Read Count: 4444
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2011
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Seth.  At least he has people around him who love him.

All I have to say about the punishment sex...fucking hot!!!  I love when Edward tops Jasper.  I get all excited just thinking about it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a very emotional first chapter.  I felt so bad for him when he left Jasper; leaving the key and picture.  It seemed so final and heart breaking.  I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh, reading Jasper's POV was more painful than Edward's.  It is so sad to think that this could ahve been avoided if they had just talked.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmmm, I wonder how this conversation is going to play out.  At least it is a good sign that Jasper made the effort to track Edward down.

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was so hard to read through their pain but so beautiful at the same time.  I love what Jasper said to Edward at the end.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Make up sex is the best sex!!!  I'm glad to see them back together but I worry where things will go from here.

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mmmm, this has promise. ;)

That is so sad what Seth went through.  I am guessing that Bella and Jacob are the bad guys in that particular story, right?  No matter what, it is sad that he went through all that and basically lost his entire family over it.