Reviews by PJAustin
Macabre by LolaRose Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight; when the two worlds of good and evil began to co-mingle in the glowing hues of the ever fading sun. The onyx tendrils of night slowly fill Edward's soul. Black of night, crimson blood, light of day; what will be his decision? Cannon darkward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8539 Read Count: 640
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Metanoia

WOW! This was very artfully done and has wrung a myriad of emotions from my heart. Well done and I hope to see more of your writings in the future.

Summary:

Esme Platt was a brand new mother, happy and in love with her son. What would she do when tragedy struck? What did a kind stranger from her past, have to do with her future? Cannon Pre-Twilight O/S


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1484 Read Count: 77
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, I did cry. Masterfully done. You have a gift with words. I've added you to my favorite authors, I hope I'll see more gifts of words from you. Well done, well done indeed.

Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's right fucker, she wants out!



Author's Response:

lmao! 

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dayum bb. I really like your writing style!



Author's Response:

thanks hun! :-)

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Honey, if you think about it, you've never stopped loving him.



Author's Response:

no she didn't

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG! I haven't laughed that hard in ages! Great job kiddo!



Author's Response:

lol thanks!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Jake MUST die. If not, I'll find the bastard and kill him MYSELF! lmao



Author's Response:

oh, he gets his in the end

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love the fact that 'The Princess Bride' is woven all throughout your story. Priceless!



Author's Response:

It's in all of my stories at least once lol

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Damn. I hate a journey's end. Especially one that is as beautiful, witty, smexy, and wacky as this one is. Well done, kiddo. Well and truly done.

Hugz,
Pam



Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking the time to read my off the wall tale, I hope I didn't disappoint

Summary:

Winner of the Bella's Lullaby of Broadway contest. All Human. Bella and Edward are cast opposite one another in the New York premiere of Phantom of the Opera. As romance grows behind the scenes can Bella and Edward keep things professional on stage and off? 

 

 

Blinky made by A Cullen Wannabe

Banner Below was part of the prize for winning the BLoB contest 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10804 Read Count: 2392
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Point of No Return

Absolutely beautiful, my dear. You've captured the electric chemistry that is all Bell and Edward.

Summary:

This is an AU/AH one shot. Bella is a thirty year old stay at home mom of two young children. She’s happily married to Edward and her life is happy and complete…but when a certain song begins to play on the radio while she cleans her happy home, the memories of her painful childhood come back to haunt her. Based on the song THE RED by Chevelle. 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4868 Read Count: 2808
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Red

I was a wife of an OTR driver too. I myself went through the stages. Everything was fine for the first few years. Then, after the kids were in high school, it seemed like nothing they ever did was good enough for him. In a fit of rage, he even withheld ANY kind of family vacation, for three years. I took it on myself, even knowing that the abuse would be rained down on me, to take the kids for at least a three day vacation with just us three. I was right, it got abusive... REALLY abusive to me. At least he didn't beat the kids. I just wish that I'd known then what I know now. I just wish that I'd grown a backbone before I did. I just wish that my children's high school years were better for them. I'm sorry that I didn't leave MUCH sooner than I did. Things are better now without him. The kids are now grown. Hell, I'VE grown a lot since then. I'm just glad that they don't blame me for the hell that I, and them, were put through. If they were not so loving and forgiving by nature, I don't know what would have become of us. Yes, it took a few years of therapy, both individual and family, but at least we all know how to really live now. People, take this story to heart, it still happens all around us. It could still happen to you or someone you hold dear. Watch for the signs, because they WILL be signs if there is trouble. Just please, help those that can't seem to help themselves.

Thank you, for writing this sweetie.

Pam



Author's Response:

Oh wow...thank you for sharing.  :D  I'm glad you've found peace now...my Mom has too.  

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Awesome start sweetheart!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

Jake is such a jackass. Edward's turning into a sweetie.

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

Hell yeah! It's about time he figured it out. Now, how will SHE react?

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

And Edward surely will be walking through that hole, eh? ;)

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

She WILL be getting over that fear of driving again, right?

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

My favorite line: “If a kiss on the cheek would affect him so much, how the hell was he going to handle a full on kiss?” Bow chicka wow wow!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

I'd love to be his neighbor too! lol

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

I swear that that was the most perfect first date EVER! Especially being able to keep those evil Paps away.

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

I didn't realise that there was such a difference in between racing series! Wow, learn something new every day, huh? lmao

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

You are one evil bitch for leaving this chapter right here! You DO know that, right? LMAO

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

Wow, Edward better start communicating with Bella a lot better, and quickly!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

Let me introduce you to Dave the Driver, cockblocker extrodinaire! ;)

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

Sigh... ;) Beautiful, just... beautiful!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

Yeah, Cullen had better watch what he's doing if he wants to be able to be on the same team as Swan!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

Oh fuck! Well, now. I'm beginning to really like this Tanya! lmao

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

No sex for three days? That's just mean! lol

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

That's just bullshit! It should be all about the racing, NOT the PR!~!~!~!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

I absolutely loved the lemonade!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

I'm holding onto my opinion of Carlisle for a bit. So far, it's not a very high one. We shall see if this changes as the story continues. Hopefully, I'm dead wrong about him!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

I'm so fucking glad that I was wrong! I love how this Carlisle turned his thinking around about his son's occupation. Turned it around to the nth degree, I might add! Lol

 

I love this story!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

Holy shit! Oh, to have parents that are that loaded! Lol I'm so glad that they did that for 'the kids'! :D

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

Awww... that's great of Bella. I bet you it was James Daniels that did it!

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

I kinda knew that Ben and Angela would be staying at Bella's place for awhile. And OMG – he already has a ring!~!~!

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

What's up with Cosma and Daniels? James is up to no good again, and I just KNOW that he was behind the whole Ben fiasco!

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

Somebody PLEASE do something to Daniels! Arrgh!

 

Pam

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Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

What a riot! The Volturi Brothers got bit in the ass! And the funny part of all of this clusterfuck? They did it to themselves! lmao

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

You've got to be fucking kidding me! Cosma?!?!?

 

AND a baby? lmao

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Favorite line through this whole story “First Mom in NASCAR wins Sprint Cup.”

Wonderful story darling! I'll be looking out for more of them.

 

xoxo

Pam

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Warm and beautiful. A wonderful story filled with life lessons that we can all live by.

Thank you dear (again) for all of the lovely words you send our way.

Pam

Summary:

 

New York 1892: Bella and her fiancé, Edward, move to America only to discover that the city they chose as their new home is governed by someone from her past. He needs Bella's help and he won't take 'no' for an answer. Sequel to Bella Voce.

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 220207 Read Count: 2385
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2011 Updated: 01 Dec 2011
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue: C'est la pomme de terre

You and your wife are a fuckawesome team!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A few broken rules, a few too many times left alone with everyone's favorite Hogwarts Champion, a few choices that change everything. What could have happened behind the scenes during Harry's 4th year at Hogwarts.

AU storyline that is meant to overlay the existing canon storyline of Goblet of Fire and not replace it. Starts between the first and second Triwizard tasks in the prefect's bathroom, and ends during the third task in the graveyard, with an epilogue set 14 years later. Rumors about Dumbledore's sexual proclivity are active around Hogwarts, but it isn't safe to be openly homosexual.  Harry and Cedric (assisted by Neville) invent the Trevor Project to protect fellow Hogwart students, naming it after Neville's toad familiar. Lots of dialogue and character development, with mild to medium sexual content. Told exclusively in third person limited omniscient point of view, i.e. Harry's point of view. Personalities are generally canonical, except for some artistic license with Cedric and his backstory.

General Warnings:  Angst, hurt/comfort, slash and yaoi. Under-age sex, under-age drinking. Both peer and partner violence.  And Cedric dies protecting Harry, who lives to be happy again. Just so you know, up front.  

Please do not read if homosexuality offends you. I am not gay, nor male, nor even British, but I dearly love both of these characters. So this story is about more than just sex. It's about figuring out who you are and what you are willing to do for those you love. And I firmly believe those themes are universal, no matter who you are.

Many Thanks: To my beta Talipatra, to my bannermaker Ima Twi Tard, and to TWCS for the following honor. SQUEE(x3)! 

 

The Wordsmith Awards


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Other Male Character
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37120 Read Count: 1689
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: David and Jonathan

This is a strange little fic. But I'm really liking it non-the-less.

Restless by RandomCran Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Bella's monochrome existence has left her feeling apprehensive. When the circumstances of tragedy introduce her to Edward, she feels emboldened. What will happen when her life begins to intensify?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47859 Read Count: 1163
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Edward's Friday (A Restless Outtake)

I love you and your husband's stories. You're a fuckhawt team!



Author's Response:

Hello PJAustin,

Thank you so much for this message. I wasn't sure anyone would see the stories posted here and I was pleasantly surprised to find your review this evening.

I'm glad you enjoyed the stories. We'll keep updating EXPOSURE here as soon as each chapter is ready.

Take Care,

Jenn

 

Summary:

Roses are red. Violets are blue. That's what they tell me because I'm blind.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26057 Read Count: 941
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Road Cone

Awww... I can really understand how he sees the world. That's how I see it too!

Great job (again),

Pam



Author's Response:

Hello Pam,

Thank you for this and all your reviews.  My iPad has issues with this site so I neglect looking for reviews and have been utterly delighted to see that you have also found Bella Voce/Brutte Parole and EXPOSURE.

 

Your encouragement is appriciated.

 

Morgan

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Air Show

This is too funny!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Show Must Go On

These all really happened? Wow. Now that makes this REALLY funny! lmao

 

Pam

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Who Is Tennessee Ernie Ford

Do you find it monumentally coincidental that I am reading the hardback of 'The Princess Bride' at the time that I read this chapter? Curiouser and curiouser. lol

 

Pam

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Happy Together

This was lovely!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Tilting At Windmills

That would be super scary to me, even as old as I am now. To lose my glasses is bad enough. But to lose them in the forest... at night... *shiver* No thanks! lol

 

Pam

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nickel's Worth Of Free Advice

You have such a unique way of thinking about things. It must make it either very fun, or very challenging to live with you! Or sometimes even both? lol

 

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Vegas Was A Blur

These views are amazing! And I'm not talking about the ones through the windows.

Beach Bum by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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*DRABBLE* Bella is stuck in a loveless marriage, nothing more than a Stepford wife, when her world is turned upside down by the appearance of a certain beach bum and his dog. E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6805 Read Count: 32287
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2012 Updated: 18 Aug 2012
Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like it's gonna be good!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Even better!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

This was absolutely WONDERFUL!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, so glad you enjoyed it!

xoxo

tb