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Capture by Dinia Steel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Capture

Alice, Bella, and Rosalie have been picked up in a scoop of humans by the Volturi to be used as slaves and for various businesses they have in their dealings with humans. Bella and Rose are chosen as sex slaves, while Alice is chosen to be eventually changed for the bureaucracy due to her potential for see the future. What will happen to them?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: MrsPapatastic Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hello, I really like the story and I would appreciate it if you would keep writing it. Bt the thing is , sometimes whilst I was reading it, these weird symbols and things popped up. I don't think it was my computer, but you should check it to see what it is. Idk! I really like the plot too! I think that it's a great one, but can you give some more history in the upcoming chapters? I'm confused about Ed, Em and Jas and why they're there and Aro's hovering and stuff. But overall I think this is a really great story! I apologize if I seem like a critic, I'm just an avid reader!!!



Author's Response:

He.  Sorry to take so long to get back to from TWCS.  I have no idea where or how those weird symbols got into the text.  If it bothers you and you'd like to read it in pfd - which I have - I'd be happy to send it to you.  PM me thru FF or Face Book.

xo

Dinia