I just reread this story with hopes that more chapters had been posted. Please Please finish this story. You have done an amazing job with this story and we are desperate to know the outcome. :(

Love this fic. Bella has come a long way and I'm ready for Aro to be thrown under the jail. I do have to say that Esme disappointed me. When she told Edward several chapters back if Bella pushed him away 1 more time to walk away and play the field. After raising Edward who had similar issues that Bella is dealing with now.  Would that have been her answer when he pushed her away when she was raising him. Bella went through an unreal amount of abuse that couldn't be healed overnight and I think after what she dealt with she did what anyone in her position would do. Of course she would be hot and cold. As I remember Edward was a little that way in the beginning. Just my thoughts but love your fic. I guess I just expected Esme over anyone to understand Bella after raising Edward who handled his own demons the same way. Again great story.

How sad for Bella that while she's being drugged and assaulted in the worse way her husband is watching his new stripper. My heart breaks for her. I hope she tells Edward and he realizes what he was doing at the time of his wifes rape or attempted rape. I have a feeling Charlotte is there for Peter or Charlie. Even if he doesn't cheat AGAIN she will never believe him and no one could blame her. Poor Bella should run far far away and never look back. I read this chapter 1st on ff and you received some nasty reviews where you was personally attacked. I'm sorry you have to deal with that when your not being paid to do this. I'll check back after a few more chapters are posted and see if this awful situation with Edward's dad is resolved. Please let Bella finally have someone in her corner that will love and protect her even in this case if its not Edward. After what she witnessed in his club I don't know how she can ever trust him. I know she can trust him with her safety but I doubt she can with her heart. This poor girl makes me want to cry and I don't know anyone who deserves love and acceptance more than Bella. 

As far as the nasty reviews try to remember in order for someone to feel that strongly they lash out at you that they are so into your story that they take it personally. A good book is never all sunshine and roses. But PLEASE let Bella start having some happiness she's had enough grief for all the characters in this story. I look forward to see how you resolve this. As for myself I will certainly not tear you down personally when I'm not brave enough to write my own story. 

I'm a huge fan of Carano and Sexilexi's mob stories but go through and read her a/n she also had people saying they wouldn't read anymore because they thought Edward was wanting to hook up with a stripper when all his friends was partying or others thinking Bella was in love with Aro. I'm sure they didn't leave the story after they saw they were predicting an outcome that didn't happen. 

I can't wait for the sequel. I really liked this story. I love Damon and Bella together in this story. It was nice to see Bella with a backbone. I'll keep checking back for the sequel. This was the 1st crossover I've read and you did a great job!!

Great ending and looking forward to the sequel. 

Once again great chapter!!

Please update soon. I love this and want to know if he finds her.

Oh my....please update soon. You can't leave us hanging?!? Lol great chapter. I'm ready for Shane to be gone. What an a**. Let's see what Darrell and Charlie think of Shanes punch to her stomach.

I was happy to see an update. I liked Charlie helping Darrell with burying Meryl. I hope they will start to get along. I thought Bella was a little hard on Charlie but I guess under the circumstances anyone would be but hopefully they will all work together and be a strong team. Anxiously waiting for more.

Thanks for the update!! I have missed them and can't wait for more. It was worth the wait.

So glad to see an update. I love this fic and had missed your updates. Great chapter!! I hope their group makes it out of this. What's Carol up to? I'm thinking she's hiding somewhere waiting to help save the day. I have a feeling her zip line will come into play. Please update soon.

Loved it! 

More please!! 

Great update. I can't wait to see what's goijg on with Juice.

Great chapter. I have missed your updates and hope to see another one soon.

Oh no!! I wasn't exspecting that. Poor Bella will think Edward is dead after she's taken. I imagine Sean and Edward will make this guy suffer. I hope we see the third installment soon.

I love that Edward and Bella are getting closer. However, I think it would be better if his family gave them some privacy over this issue as long as he hasn't "bed" anyone else. I think it was a bitchy move on Esme to run and tell that to Carlisle. Bella seems to be trying hard to be who she should be but at every turn something happens and now her own sister is out to kill her. I'm guessing until the marriage is consummated it's not legal as far as Edward having New York. Poor Edward has really put up with a lot of crap with Bella but again if anyone would explain to her what's going on perhaps she will handle it better. She has started to see that Edward is the only one she can depend on. I would laugh if she asked Carlisle if he'd like to come witness the event so he can report such events back to the men and I hope she let's Esme know had she told her what was expected of her rather than run and tattle to her husband it would be appreciated. This poor girl has no one she can trust other than Edward so start giving the wife a little info. I love your fic so please keep the updates coming. Kind of wondering if Charlie had his own suspicions on Kate and why he arranged Edward and Bella's marriage so she would have someone protecting her. I can't wait for more!!

I'm ready for the torture to begin on those responsible for her suffering. I can't wait for her to be turned and equal to Eric. I'm hoping she will be turned in time to dish out her own revenge towards the Cullen's. She deserves that. Anxiously awaiting more.

No. I wanted more. Looking forward to Eric and Bella finally united.

I have missed this fix and happy to see an update. I say let Eric turn her. That way there is no worry for her health. What did Charlie expect with her mating a vampire. He had to know she wouldn't want to continue to age and Eric stay the same. Plus hes not losing her she will still be there but if not changed she could die and he never see her again. I'm a little confused and maybe it's just me but did they not kill Edward? Just wondering why he would have left him or Alice alive after what they did along with Carlisle. I read where he challenged Edward but not a battle. I'm going to read the last chapter again. Love it and hope you post again soon but understand real life must come first.

Loved this chapter. It answers several questions I have. Wow the Denalis along with Benjamin are with Victoria! I can't wait to see what Bella is capable of. Poor Edward is just trying to take the side that will keep Bella alive. I will go back to read the earlier chapter as well. As I have said before this story is amazing and so different. I look forward to more.

Wow I didn't expect that!! Great update and I can't wait for more!! I'm curious about something in the last chapter that Tanya said to Carlisle. Why would Bella join Victoria?

Oh I was so excited thinking this was a new chapter but I had already read this one on ff. Love your story and looking forward to another update.

Lol I just read your update on fanfic and left a guest review.  I was excited because I saw this was on chapter 23 and fanfic was 22 but the fic is still behind on here. I'm the one that always leaves you the long reviews full of questions. Thank you for the answer regarding Edward not being able to hide thoughts from Aro. Love your writing!! You always leave me wanting more.

Loved it!! What will Edward do once he realizes Bella is in La Push? I think he's going to be one crazy vampire. Poor Sulpicia I hope she wil make it but I wonder if this is her last fight. She knows shes losing her mind so could she be sacrificing herself to save the ones she loves. You always amaze me and I can never predict what will happen next which is great!! Jessica should be close by so I hope she can be of help and Carlisle is still holding his weapon. Maybe he can have the element of surprise against Benjamin. As always I can't wait for more!! 

Its Charlie. I hope he can make sure they have a safe place to settle down. Maybe even somehow clear their name.

Loved it. So glad they got their happily ever after 

I agree with him. He did this by ignoring her when she needed him most. Sure she didn't listen to what he said but he has to realize she needed to be the one to end them. They took away her family and she was raised by the Don of New York. He was so quick to dsregard her needs and focus on his own. But I know being married and in love is new to him too but if he can't  keep his home running smoothly how will he run the New York family. They have got to be thrre for each other and talk about their issues. I think after everything she's been through she needs to know he's there to share the burden and know that he too makes mistakes.

They are getting closer to bringing the girls home. Im anxious to see them home. I can't see Edward being left behind. I look forward to another update.

So glad she is back where she belongs. Happy that Sean gets to be a daddy too. He was looking forward to that. I can't wait to hear Edward's reaction to Bella 's news.

Loving it so far. I'm ready for the family to get out of the way. 

Loved this chapter. It seems they both calmed down enough to have a much needed conversation. I can't wait to see these two together. I think she's going to surprise him with how ruthless she can be but I wonder if they both will end up with soft spots for each other. I look forward to more!!