Reviews by The Mith
My Italian Saviour by adele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A very educated but lonely and plain professor entangles her life with a rough, explosive Italian chef.  Being opposites in so many ways add a dimension to their relationship that neither have seen before.  In Katrina's case, she's overcome by the powerful feelings that this man brings out in her.  In Antonio's mind, he can hardly believe his life has turned to protecting this woman whose lush body and brilliant mind has taken him hit him with such a wallop.  Both are so crazy for each other everyone they don't seem to know what to do next. 


Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25671 Read Count: 639
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2012 Updated: 22 Feb 2012
Reviewer: The Mith Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

segregate the chapters and format the contents. NOONE likes to read continually. it requires breaking the story down and wanting to be read by others will come from it.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18805 Read Count: 11314
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: The Mith Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The Long Ride Home

I know its difficult, but you should re-read the script after you have submitted it. There are a few obvious problems with the translation. I also find it better to actually use some hard core words, just to surprise the reader and to remind them it is adult fiction.cool though.

Reviewer: The Mith Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: May I Take Your Order?

Now that's a drive through.

Reviewer: The Mith Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Heat of the South

They say a writers work is eighty five percent fact. i'd love to read your diary.