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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must.
Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story.
Doctorward is there too, just like the first story.
It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children.
Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one.
Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore
Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467467
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
The Cullen house is a mad-house - all the hormonal teenagers. EJ is such a mommie-boy, great idea to take off the door. She and Edward have their hands full with their offspring.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Party like a Rock star
Michael is just too adorable! EJ is always putting up this hot-jock-front but he's always looking out for his family, gotta love him. His reaction upon seeing his mother and aunt from behind was priceless. You have a great way of getting into the muddled minds of the teenagers - makes me glad I left that behind.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: That's Amore
Debbie seems a lot different than the other girls who are throwing themselves at EJ. Despite all Dina said I think we didn't see the last of her, she was thrilled that EJ was interested in spending time with her and he showed her how great sex can be. Sal can go fluff himself, I hate double standards so the beating was well deserved.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Choices
EJ and Debbie act like kindergarteners :D. Either EJ or CC let their emotions get the better of him. Edward's sex-talk with Michael was so much fun, I just love the kid. Too bad the day ended in a fight, EJ and Edward just don't know when to stop.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Unchained Melody
I'm glad Bella and Edward are good again, your explanation why she couldn't get to normal immediately after forgiving him makes sense. Didn't like Rose and especially Alice's relationship advice, they took it too far. Maybe going to the dojo isn't such a bad idea after all, those two can work off some frustrations - theway they reacted to Seth was so embarrassing. Leave it to EJ to score a date with Grace in the wink of an eye. Feel sorry for him, he didn't deserve being beaten up. What if Emmett had called the police? Sal is such a dumb punk.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Peanut
not a dull day in the Cullen household
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Big Poppa
Aww, how sweet, Edward's trying so hard to give Bella everything she wants.
Seth is gay, hitting on Edward - do Rose and Alice know ;D
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Asshole
Drama, drama, drama - will we see the day when both Cullen boys are happy in ther relationships? What's Sheila's problem? At leat EJ and Debbie'sdatewent really well.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Kill Bill
I don't like violence but CC needessome sense smacked into his thick emo skull.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
The kids are looking all grown up and the 'rents are placing bets - what a crazy bunch.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Robin is really something else: first CC, then Edward Sr., then she tries to see Debbie's boobs .... good for CC to ditch her and try to get with Sheila again.
The limo saw a lot of action that night.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Half moon
Bella thoroughly surprised me, didn't expect her to give in to CC's insane request. It worked out well, surprisingly. So much fun to read and imagine ninja-mom behind that tree.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Wild Thing
Carlisle is incorrigible, he passed his womanizing ways on to his grandsons, just like Robin got the evil from her daddy what a douche.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake
I must apologize for not reviewing more but your story got me so captivated I just had to read on. I LOVE this story, it's entertaining, moving, you really get into the head of your characters and despite the hair-raising things they're sometimes up to they are always believable and true to themselves. I could read about the razy bunch forever. Thank you for writing and sharing.