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Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
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The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

The whole story Carlisle told was just... wow. I was starting to suspect that Carlisle was Edward's father. This chapter held a wealth of information, by far my favorite one yet. Edward deserves to take his birthright, beside his godfather, to be groomed for the up and coming boss.

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Em's a jerk!

Ut-oh... they didn't use protection... can't wait to see if anything comes fromt that little slip.

Glad Edward loves her unconditionally.

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

I agree with Edward, a strange group of people to have in one place, given their backgrounds with each other.

Is Elizabeth stoned? She's acting a little fried.

Can't wait for Esme to join the party and see her reaction to Elizabeth.

 

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

I expect there to be fireworks between Elizabeth and Esme. At least Esme tried to be pleasant, as to Elizabeth being a bitch to her. Esme had to good grace to overlook her though, wonder how long that will last before it blows.

I like that Elizabeth realizes she can't be Edward's mother, but hopes they can be friends... that's good but fucked up on so many levels.

Isn't one of the 12 Steps in AA to make a mends with those you've wronged in the past, shouldn't she be trying to make amends with Esme?

This dinner is about to get interesting, as well as the coming weekend.

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 32027
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
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Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ashllynn is so happy right now, but she's gonna be very upset when they tell her the truth.

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Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved seeing Ashlynn all grown-up.

 

What happened to the story Everyone Has A Story?

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After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814525
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
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Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 317: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Thanks for another awesome fic.

Sherry

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Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This one has been on my TBR list a while.

Sherry

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
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Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130203
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Edward is always making sure Bella is looked after, even by loaning out his mom. Gotta love Esme.

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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

One question from the defense attorney... hmm... something doesn't feel right about that.

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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

I'm looking forward to the cross examination.

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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

I'm hoping Aro isn't going to try and ask for another trail since his attorney doesn't know what she's doing. Aro just keeps digging himself in deeper and deeper.

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Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Glad they're on their way back.

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Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

Is this the beginning of a reconcillaiton?

Anxious about what the deal is about Randall being free.

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Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

Good for Esme. A little inconsiderate of Emmett to call Edward wanting help after the way Bella treated him, especially when he just had surgery, even if they didn't know he did at the time.

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Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

I adode how supportive Edward is to Bella.

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Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Bella needs some girly time.

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

A birthday kiss sounds like a good place to start.

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

That verdict reading was even emotional for me. Hopefully it allows Bella to move forward. Having Charlie there for support was one of the best things anyone could have done for her.

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Love how tender Edward is with Bella.

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Thank goodness this ordeal is just about over. Bella, and Edward need this closure.

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Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

Beautiful. So realistic.

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I'm surprised Edward allowed Alice and Rose to hug him.

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

I knew Emmett was gonna do something like that. If he wants to be mad at someone, he needs to be mad at Charlie. Charlie's the one that turned informant and got the ball rolling.

Poor Edward needs a break. Rest and something to eat.

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

I kinda thought Charlie would be the informant. I like that twist, that he wants out by bringing down his own organization.

 

Whoever took Bella is gonna get their ass handed to them by Edward.

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm... Charlie has Edward following and spying on Bella without her knowledge at the moment. This could get interesting.

Enjoying it so far.

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I see trouble coming a mile away.

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella has a hard life, right? Oh goodness, she is full of herself.

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Bella sounds like she's gonna be a handful.

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Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

You have me biting at the bits.

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Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

I'm actually looking forward to the drama.

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Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Damn, defiling Charlie's office, that was hott. Wonder if anyone knows what they were doing in there.

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Looks like they are all working in harmony to bring Bella home and take down Aro.

 

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Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Bella actually wants to go to Edward's dump of an apartment? Is she 'checking up' on him subconsciously.

Still don't trust Angie. Heidi was an idiot.

Looking forward to the drama to unfold.

~Sherry

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Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

A great welcome home. Looking forward to you ramping up the drama.

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Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I'm wondering if Volturi has gotten to Angie and she's acting on their behalf to help capture Bella, hmm... I still don't trust Ang.

At least Edward did tell Bella some of what's going on, maybe she'll be more careful knowing the threats are more serious than she realized.

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

I like Dr. Cope, she's making Bella face the hard questions.

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Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

I'm torn. On one hand, Bella should forgive Angela, be the mature one in the situation. On the other, she should tell her to fuck off. Angela is only there because Ben broke up with her over what happened, which isn't a good enough reason to forgive her. Angela isn't there to make a mends from the heart or the benefit of saving their friendship. She's selfish, but Bella will probably forgive, but they won't be close anymore.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I was sure Charlie had Edward following Bella secretly, but apparentally not. Hmm, so maybe Edward hasn't infiltrated the organization yet.

Bella's gonna give Charlie a heart attack. Funny Charlie's thoughts changed on getting Bella a thigh gun holder strap.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella's meddling can't be good.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Umm... this is the same chapter as the last one.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Kinda sweet that 'daddy's girl' is trying to make sure he's safe from harm.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella's quite the drama queen isn't she? But, with James involved she has reason to be concerned. I'm not sure things will go as planned during the exchange.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmm... bet Bella has changed her mind now about Edward being her bodyguard.

Wonder who James was talking with on his bluetooth... Aro? Looks like Edward is the new golden boy for saving Charlie's life.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is a badass.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Glad to see that Edward's issues hasn't taken away from his humor.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor Edward's world is about to get turned upside down when he realizes who 'Little One' really is.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A '68 Mustang, just signifies Edward's badass rep.

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait for Edward to meet Bambina and realize she's the very same as his 'Little One' he dreams about.

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward sure saved Charlie's ass. He's no doubtedly proved himself.

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Didn't expect that reaction from Bella.

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So in other words, Bella's only reluctance to having Edward guard her is she thinks he's 'really' a mob member. The lifestyle she doesn't care for and wants nothing to do with the business side of. But she's still attracted to him.

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Maybe Edward should do what Riley did, just grab Bella and kiss her to get it out of their system. Charlie didn't sound to opposed to her attraction for Edward. He seemed to find it funny.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

That's a little fucked up, two on one. Edward needs to 'work out' some frustrations on Demetri and Felix. Maybe Bella will send Emmett to help.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Well I knew Edward couldn't come out of that fight unscathed, but damn, a large hunting knife? Dude meant to do damage. Good thing Emmett showed up when he did.

I'm glad Demetri is dead, but Felix needs to be tortured for info on the Volturi family's whereabouts and plans.

I'm sure Bella will want her own revenge now.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

I keep jumping back and forth from here to FF. net reading updates and reviewing, lol. Oh well...

Riley? Did not expect to see him pop-up again. I hope Bella puts hinm in his place. The green-eyed monster may come out to play.

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

I wish Edward had been able to kick the crap out of Riley. He was about arrogant.

I don't envy Edward having to come clean with the truth. Though it may be better if Bella hears it from him, before she finds out on her own.

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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

I could almost 'feel' Charlie's pleading for Edward to take care of Bella. I think Charlie knows his days are numbered.

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Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

ILY's right before the storm hits. It's gonna be rough when it comes out who Edward really is.

Heidi is a fool.

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Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

This is gonna be the calm before the storm hits. They better make it good.

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Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Dayum!!! Edward tore that puss up.

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

They better enjoy the bliss while it last.

Great chatper.

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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Damn she went off big time. I can only imagine the pain of her hitting Edward, he would feel. Possible flashbacks from when his father beat him...? I can understand her feeling the way she does though.

Did not expect her to be snatched off the streets.

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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Edward's gonna kickass first then ask questions later. Can't wait to see how Charlie and Carlisle react to finding out the truth about Edward is out and that Bella has been taken. Aro needs to go down and Edward's the badass killer to do it.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

It's good Em came around so quickly. Now that their not fighting against each other, maybe they'll find Bella faster.

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

I'm excited for the action to take place at the warehouse. You have me anxious for the next chapter.

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Looking forward to more.

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Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

The last paragraph gave me chills. So, looking forward to some action.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Poor Bella. James and Riley are dead men walking, when Edward finds her like that, they're all good as gone.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

What James did was a form of rape. He's a disgusting magnot. I can't wait for Edward to kill the bastard.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

This could be interesting.

Let's add Renata and Alec to the list of dead mo-fos. As well as Sulpulcia.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Please tell me Renata isn't Charlie's daughter. That'd be so fucked up.

Can't wait to find out why Aro is holding Bella.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I hate James. I'm so looking forward to his death, I just hope it's not quick.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

I agree, Aro is a sick motherfucker.

I didn't expect Bella to be Aro's child. I'm hoping Aro lied about that.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

I have chills.

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

James and Riley got off way too easily, but under the circumstances, it couldn't have went down any other way. At least Aro got arrested.

Poor Bella. Maybe she and Edward can heal emotionally together now, while her body heals from the physical abuse.

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I love this Chalie. He's always looking out for 'his baby girl'. Does he know Aro is her biological father?

Poor Bella, she's in for a long haul to recovery. I hope she allows Edward to help her.

 

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Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

I'm glad Bella will get to have her daddy with her for a little while longer.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

These two make my heart ache.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Welp... she's gonna fly off the handle with that statement.

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Your breaking my heart here. So damn good though.

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Woo-Hoo!!! Second chances rock with these two.

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

I wish Edward could have been judge, jury, and executioner for Aro. Dude is one sick motherfucker.

How precious was the Edward and Esme moment. In a lot of ways, he still seems to be that little boy.

Looking forward to Bella and Charlie time.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Looking forward to Bella and Charlie reuniting and bonding after the ordeal she went through and what all Charlie has to say about being her father.

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

Gotta love Charlie standing up for Edward and pleading his case.

The moment of truth... How will Charlie reply to Bella's news?

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Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Poor Bella! Just when Edward thought he was gonna be able to take one night and get a good nights rest. Bella needs him more though. I can't imagine that setback this ordeal will cause her. 

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Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Poor Bella, what an ordeal!? At least she's been moved to another hospital.

Edward is amazing. Finally, she acknowledges she still loves him too.

Maybe Edward should talk to Charlie about Bella's paternity.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Duh. Duh. Duh... damn what a reveal? Can't wait to see what Charlie has to say.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Glad to didn't prolong that talk to long, and that Charlie is contesting it. I'm hoping Aro lied and faked it all. But proud of Charlie for reassuring Bella that no matter what, she is his principessa.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

I don't know, maybe I just missed it. But having a decoy didn't make much sense to me if Bella and Charlie were suppose to go to their mansion anyway. So why go to Edward's? The media wouldn't be able to get into their home to harass them.

Anyway, I like Rose's threat to hug Edward. And Edward's nervousness for his new houseguests. He has no need to be anxious, he's already told Bella everything there is to tell about himself... no more secrets, right?

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

So glad Aro was a lying piece of shit. Bella and Charlie deserve some good news.

'My asshole isn't hiding anything but hemorrhoids.' ... I laughed out loud, pretty unladylike at this. 

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Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Why do I feel this is another calm before the storm type setting? Is something gonna happen to Charlie on the father/daughter dinner date since the Volturi has some stragglers?

Can't wait for Bella to ask Edward to start sleeping in the bed with her again. They need that connection.

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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

At least Edward's deposition is behind him now.

He really needs to talk to Bella about the living arrangements, soon, before she moves out.

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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Bella does need to get some independence back, so much was stripped away from her. She needs to do this to claim some sense of normalcy.

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Bella is making progress. Sad to see Charlie leaving, hope nothing happens to him while he's in jail. I felt bad for Bella having to say goodbye to him... even if it is for a short time.

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Poor Bella is going through so much. At least Edward knows what she is going through isn't something he can help her with, that she needs to seek professional help and he's standing by her side, giving her much needed support.

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

I just wanna scream at the both of them.

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

I don't agree with the way she left, but I sort of get it. I feel bad for Edward, not even getting a goodbye or note with a forwarding address. Not a smart move for Bella, after everything she's been subjected to.

I'm thinking she's gonna call Edward now. But at least she made it home on her own, that's improvement.

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Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Glad to see Alice give Bella some quality girl time and helping Bella get ready for her date with Edward. Also, glad they are getting a second chance of happiness, they both deserve.

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Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

I can hardly believe Edward would walk completely away, but I understand his point of view. Bella can't go on pulling and pushing him in and out of her life. It's not fair to him.

Looks like he has went all out for their date.