Reviews by Banshee69
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983473
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
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Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

They've known each other for years. Forget slow... just go. Bella is driving him crazy slowly.

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Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Pretty damn hot indeed.

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Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Hopefully whatever drama that ensues, they'll be strong enough as a couple to withstand it. Looking forward to them getting back to Chicago and working on balancing a relationship with everything that comes with that.

I'm betting Rosalie is gonna cause some more trouble.

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Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Therapy is exactly what Bella needs.

Glad they will not be denying they're in a relationship if anyone asks. That's progress.

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Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I love Alice's description... a hyper and rambuncious elf. She's more excited about Edward and Bella being a couple than her engagement. Not sure what Jasper would say to that. 

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Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Jasper does have a good point. Bella has to want to change and want help for therapy to work. She's gotta do it for herself, not because someone else wants or suggests therapy for her. I hope Bella truly wants it for herself and not being influenced by what she thinks Edward wants. These two don't need any more bumps in the road.

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Looking forward to their date and the blast from the past.

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Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Edward is so romantically sweet.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Bella should talk to someone about her low self-esteem.

 

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Paul is a royal ass. I wish Edward would had decked him.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

*fans self*

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

I expect Bella not to get therapy until after she has or nearly has sabotaged her relationship with Edward.

I'm so looking forward to them moving forward with their lives and getting their HEA.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I hope Bella's stubbornness won't ruin her changes of 'fixing' herself or ruinning her relationship with Edward.

 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Edward sure knows how to make a girl feel special.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Yes and please...

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

I'm liking this side of Edward.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Edward Cullen, exhibitionist. I want more of that too.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Role playing is really good. Love how trusting they are with each other.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

*fans self*

You sure know how to write a hott scene.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Bella should make a complaint against Paul. That asshole deserves everything that goes his way. Not sure if Edward should get to involved with investigating Paul, it could backfire on him and cause problems with his job.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Love this Bella's attitude that she's 'all that' and that Edward makes her feel that way.

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Esme is a hoot. I adore her. She needs grandbabies, asap. The stay at the Cullens will be interesting.

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

I'm betting Edward is wanting to see if he could make her dream wedding a reality someday.

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Role playing is fun.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

*fans self*

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I don't understand how some readers could think Bella was a ho, like you said she's had bad relationships, that has left her scarred and feeling unworthy of Edward.

I'm hoping she can confess her love for him soon.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Ahh... sweet Momma and son time.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Hot shower scene.

I love Emmett. lol

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Emmett's antics had me rolling.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Gotta love Emmett. He's such a good guy, even when he's teasing.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Poor Edward, being sick sucks.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

I'm hope Bella doesn't get sick. I'm curious about Emmett's date.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Nooo... she can't think it was just a dream.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I getting suspicious that Bella is tired for another reason.

Jasper's brother sounds like a real dick.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

I'd have had second thoughts on including Jasper's family in my wedding planning if I was Alice. His mother, Barb is unbelievable.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Thank goodness Alice is marrying Jasper and not his stuckup family.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

That was exactly just what the doctor ordered.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

I'm so looking forward to them taking Paul down. It'd be golden if that one chick did have his baby.

Can't imagine how Bella will feel once she finds out he was busy with his students while they were dating.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Giselle and her family deserve some retribution from Paul, as well as the other girls. Shit is about to hit the fan. Can hardly wait to see how Bella will deal with it all.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Oh holy hell. The shit has hit the fan.

Angela?

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Dating your brother's ex-girlfriend is off limits, and giving her Edward's number so she can call him to catch-up may piss Bella off more.

Emmett is a man of reasoning when he wants to be.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Bella was wrong to defend Paul after everything he did to her. Edward did what he thought was right. Bella needs to see that and accept he loves her... unconditionally.

Looking forward to more, now that I'm all caught-up again.

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

Finally she has admitted she needs professional help. I don't think she'll need a lot of therapy, just enough to get her on the right track.

This talk is gonna be life-changing progress. Can't wait to hear Bella confess her love for Edward. He should attend her gynocologist appointment with her. Hopefully, they'll get some unexpected news.

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Bella is smart to want to get checked, as well as suggesting Edward to the same, regardless of how sure she thinks she's clean.

Exchanging 'I love you's." Nothing better. Can hardly wait to see what the doctor's say.

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I'm kinda disappointed that Bella wasn't pregnant, but hindsight, she's not mentally stable enough to care for a child at the moment.

She's took a huge step in taking responsibility for her own mental health. Seeing a therapist sometimes is the best thing for someone to do to get things in perspective for themselves. 

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Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Is it just coincidental that Paul had a 'family emergency' the same time witnesses came forth to give statements against him. Did someone tip him off?

At least Edward and Bella are working through their problems. I'm curious as to what her letter may have in it and what Edward's reaction will be.

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Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Edward needs to tell Bella about meeting up with Angela before he actually does it, or a huge misunderstanding can happen.

I can hardly wait for Paul to get what's coming to him.

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Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

I must have forgotten it, but did you ever write how Rosalie knew how much Edward and Bella's share of rent was? I don't recall that being addressed exactly how she knew.

Glad Bella and Edward are focusing on themselves and their relationship.



Author's Response:

Rosalie was a real estate agent. She knew how much the rent for their condo was and she knew that Bella could not afford it on her teacher's salary. Plus, she had access to all of the banking information since she was a manipulative you-know-what. She got what was coming to her when Edward's firm dropped her as a client when she tried to 'sleep' her way to freedom by giving Edward a blow job...

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Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Relieved he told her about meeting Angela for lunch and making sure Bella was okay with it. Last thing Bella needs is to think Edward is sneaking around behind her back. I'll be glad when she gets some self-esteem and confidence in herself.

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Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Of course Paul wants a lawyer, the little dick tweeb.

Looks like Edward and Bella are back into the game. At least they didn't have to wait very long to be able to get back together.

I'm curious about what Angela wants to say to Edward.

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Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I feel bad for Angela. She's had a messed up life. Not the conversation I expected to come from her.

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Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Edward's last words gave me chills. Yes. No doubt Paul will be sneeking revenge on Edward and Bella. I fear Bella will get the more backlash though, she'll be an easier target to get to than Edward.

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Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

A very nice little lemon.

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Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Ahh... Edward just wanted some birthday sex. lol. Bella should realize what she just said. She'll always take care of Edward. That's a huge commitment in itself.

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Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Ahh... the Dun, dun, dun... as me concerned.

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Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Way to go for Bella!!! She got to give Paul a piece of her mind. I knew Paul would show up and lay blame on Bella for his actions. He just sealed his fate.

Bella has finally accepted she is worth someone's affection. She's worth Edward.

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

A lot of things are changing for Edward and Bella. Being partner is huge for his career.

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Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Didn't see that coming so quickly. Once Bella set her mind to be happy and except Edward's love... there's no stopping her. I'm a little surprised she wanted to get married so fast. Looking forward to it.

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Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Dropping a hint there, were you?

Paul is getting what he deserves. The school got off fairly easy.

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Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

So sweet...

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Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Perfect!!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

Perfect way to end their journey.

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101887
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
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Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I find this ironic. My brother was just recently diagnosed with pancreatic cancer and has been struggling for months with the pain. His prognosis isn't good.

Needless to say, this chatper cut deep into my heart.

Bella can only move forward from here. I hope the next few chapters aren's as heart-wrenching.

Sherry

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109461
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
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Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward is king, why not declare Bella is to be his wife during court? If he made an official announcement, how could she decline him? Alice and Jasper's wedding would be the perfect atmosphere to make an announcement.

He needs to send the princess of France packing... soon.

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97779
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't tell you how excited I am he stopped her. I'm hooked.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dayum, Esme broke bad. I hope Carlisle getting Bella to hear the baby's heartbeat will give her a change of heart as to how she feels about the baby. Edward killing her family is a large pill to swallow, but I've got my fingers crossed they work through it.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh bloody hell, they can't catch a break, can they? I really wanna know if Little Eddy is really Edward's child. This certainly isn't gonna be good on their already strained relationship.

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Marcus is a sick bastard. That was just too coincidental, not to be a setup. At least hasn't pushed him away.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's about time Ronnie takes some responsibility for his part. If they wanna get technical about it, Ronnie is the one that killed her parents. He's the one that placed the bombs on the cars.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Why do I think that is Eddie Jr. and he's been placed in Edward and Bella's home to get revenge for Heidi's murder, and it was Eddie Jr. that followed them down to the playroom?

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I knew the Ukraine Isabella was a plant by Marcus, didn't expect it be his mistress though. I bet he and Dmitri and the ones feeding lies to Little Eddie, and he's definitely up to something with Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I absolutely loved how Victoria got her revenge/closer with Marcus.

Oh fuck, it's Jane, isn't it?

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Tanya has some nerve. I thought for sure it was Jane Bella encountered. I really hope Edward has Tanya taught a lesson in respecting his wife.

I really want Edward and Bella to work things out soon and she excepts their baby and grows to love him/her. Even though I can understand Bella's hatred for what happened to her parents that Edward and Ronnie were ordered to do, but she killed Heidi on her own free will, so how can she interact with Little Eddie the way she does. There's no difference between her and Edward on that part.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

My heart aches for them.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I had a feeling it was that sick prick Dmitri that's been picking up Little Eddie before and after school.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Damn, the Cullens just can't catch a break.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm really wondering what Tanya is up to, can't be good. Edward has the weight of the world on his shoulders. I'm really hoping Bella will have a change of heart soon.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It's good Edward and Bella finally talked some things out. They need to work through so much that's happened to them. Good to see them still able to have some sexy times.

I can't wait to read on to see what Jane and Tanya or up to.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm liking that Bella seems to be having a change of heart, slowly but surely. I was impressed she grew a backbone and confronted Nonna. Her realizations about her biological father/family seems to be helping her release some of her anger toward Edward.

Tanya's gonna get it. Jane is about dumb as a box of rocks.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

At least Bella confided in Alec about her feeling of being watched. No one should ever ignore that intuition With Alec calling out to Edward like he did, someone must be at the house.

Thank goodness Tanya and Jane have been eliminated.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Finally got caught-up and all hell breaks out.

Holy hell!!! Right when it clicks she needed to step-up and be the mommy her child needs, she gets kidnapped. Damn, where is Edward? I hope her call connected and he heard what was taking place. Bella sure doesn't need to go into labor with the baby in breach position, that could end badly. You definitely have me invested in this story.

What a cliffy you left us with. Bravo my dear, fantastic writing.

Sherry

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh holy hell!!! I have chills. What a hell of a cliffhanger? At least Eddie now knows the truth, poor kid. They have to get Bella to a hospital in time.

Great chapter, I want more... more... more...

Sherry

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm holding my breath, everything has to be okay for Bella and the baby. Death is way too easy for Dimitri, he needs to suffer before he dies.

Fan-fuckin-tastic chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

If anyone can save Eddie from Edward, it will be Bella. As it is now, that boy is a dead one. I was wrong, I guessed the baby to be a girl. Edward will cherish his newborn son. I loved the part where Riley met Bella in the great beyond and told her to go back, that was very touching. I can hardly wait for Bella to wake and be reunited with Edward and their baby boy. I loved every word.

Sherry

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I wanna hug Edward. He's grandfather was an awful man. He deserved to have the life choked out of him.

What an honor to name their son after Bella's brother.

I half expected him to allow Eddie to live. I bet Bella is gonna have a hard time excepting Edward killed his own son, no matter the circumstances.

Awesome chapter Cristina.

Sherry

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Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Absolutely perfect Cristina.

Thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us. I appreciate and love every word you have wrote to form this amazing story.

Sherry

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479013
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
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Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Their attraction is so clear. I'm wondering what's up with Mike, he didn't seem to like Edward much and he said Edward was dangerous. Does Mike really know who Edward is?

Sherry

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Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Finally, she's gonna be the kids nanny. Something is off about Mike.

Sherry

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Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It's good they talked and discovered a bit more about each other. I think its Jacob that sent the flowers and note to Bella. Mike is definitely working for him. I'm also starting to think that Guido and Miss Honey know Edward's grandfather. 

Sherry

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Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm liking that they are opening up to each other.

Shery

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Date: 02 May 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Bella is quite the badass.

Sherry

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Date: 02 May 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I loved the scene with the kids.

Sherry

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Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella's helluva smart. Edward may be pushing her too much. I'm hoping as I read on Edward confronts Sasha for her actions; who is Penny?

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm interested to know who Charlie crossed.

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This makes for an interesting turn of events.

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Something is up with Jessica. I love the kid's mischieviousness. They sure know how to play their Daddy. I think Bella is in for some changes.

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't blame Edward for being over cautious with his kids, but I'm wondering if Bella really doesn't know what kind of business Edward is into outside the public eye.

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm thinking Marmaduke is Jacob.

Sherry

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wanna slap Jessica for loosing the kids.

Sherry

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Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Interesting twist that Esme was childhood friends with Renee.

Sherry