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Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: bert602 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This is hateful and mysoginistic crap. How can this be written by WOMEN? You should be ashamed of yourselves. I've already wasted too much time on this and will not waste another second reading another word!

Reviewer: bert602 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't know yet how this ends, but here is MY HEA!  Carlisle threatens again to take Bella and Ava away from Edward.  He finally snaps, and strangles Carlisle to death with his bare hands.  He is arrested, tried and convicted of murder and is sentanced to life in prison without the possibility of parole.  So Bella and Esme are saved forever from Edward and Carlisle's further abuse, and Ava is spared. They live HEA together and flourish using the money from her father's life insurance to live off of. They eventually send Ava to Harvard undergrad where she majors in psychology and women's studies and then later goes to Law School. Ava becomes a clinical psychologist and attorney, specializing in helping battered women and children and prosecuting the sickko men who abused them.