Reviews by hlsmith29
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

FINALLY!!!!  Aro calls back, but I wonder if this is a good thing or not.  I'm glad Carlisle is taking the right steps in handling the school and how quickly he is doing it as well.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Crap, crap, crap!!!!  Ok, so now Jasper, Alice and Jacob are leaving to go to Edward's house, but that isn't where James is going!!  Laurent is a sick MF too.  I thought James was bad.  I had a feeling Jacob was undercover too.  I'm scared for Bella right now, cause Victoria is upstairs, alone, with that damn chip in her and James is on the loose.  I think he will show up soon.  Great chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat awaiting the next one!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Continually taking deep breaths....  this is soooo not working.  I am freaking out right now.  Is it James or Laurent?  Are both of them there?  I remembered that James chipped Victoria, but he found them really fast.  Please, please, please update early again!  I can't take the suspense!!!!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

It's all falling into place now!  Heidi worked for Aro but was working with Laurant as well.  Aro does not know James, Jacob had heard of Heidi.  Now everyone is aware Bella and Victoria have been taken by James.  I can't wait to see what is next!!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Holy sh*t!!  I can't believe James dropped his phone!  Talk about karma coming to bite him in the a**!!!  I was jumping up and down when I saw this update, now I can't wait for the next!!!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Holy sh*t!!  I can't believe James dropped his phone!  Talk about karma coming to bite him in the a**!!!  I was jumping up and down when I saw this update, now I can't wait for the next!!!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Hahahahaha!!!  Is it wrong for me to have laughed the entire time I was reading this chapter???  James totally is getting what he deserves!  I am sad to see this story coming to an end, but I know it has to end sometime.  I can't wait to see how you complete this great story!

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Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMG!!!  I absolutely loved this story!  It was so much darker than any other story I had read, but I was hooked and couldn't stop reading.  I knew you would find a way for everything to work out in the end though.  Will there be a sequel or is this truly the end?

Summary:

There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is?  A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.

 

Banner by mkystich72  .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Mar 2010
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ummm....  I'm leaning towards Charlie right now as my suspect.  Simply because he was nervous when talking to Bella and he is getting angry at how Dover is questioning everyone.  I'm definitely intrigued.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Holy crap, holy crap!!!  Ok, so Edward and Bella got caught up in the moment and forgot protection.  Now Carlisle's guests have arrived.  I'm slightly freaked out right now.  I'm scared of what is going to happen now.

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Ok, I really, really hate Carlisle right now!  I think this would be a good time for Bella to let Edward know about Carlisle's plan with her although I don't understand how Edward couldn't have figured it out already.  I'm scared for Bella right now and I hope she understands why Edward is going to turn back around.  Once again, you have left me on the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting another chapter!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Its about freaking time she told him!!!!  I had a feeling Edward was going to put on a show for Carlisle, Marcus and Demitri and not tell Bella.  It's the only way he could make sure she was really scared.  I don't think the other men would have believed any of it if Edward had told Bella, she really isn't that great of an actress.  Thanks for the quick uypdate!  Can't wait to see what is in Esme's garden.....

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I am soooo sad to see this story end, but I guess it had to at some point right?  I usually don't like stories that are this dark and angsty, but once I started this, I simply couldn't stop.  I understood some of the abuse Bella went through (only the beatings and such, nothing else), and I thought reading about it would being up some bad memories, however it did just the opposite.  I have found a way to let go of those memories now by reading about the strength of the women in your story.  I absolutely loved it!  Thank you for sharing this!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Just for the record, I really can't stand Renee and I know Karma is a bitch.  I hope Edward can talk Bella into some sort of therapy.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Goodnight, Travel Well

I really don't even know what to write now.  I'm in tears.  That was by far the saddest, but best written chapter yet.  I can only imagine how hard that must have been for you to write.  Excellent job!



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sorry you cried. It was a hard and very depressing thing for me to write, I wanted it to come across as realistically as possible. Thank you so much for the review.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

I am wondering why Edward wound up in foster care to begin with.  What happened to his parents?  But I am more curious to find out what happened to Bella.  Have a great vacation!



Author's Response:

Their full stories will come out... soon! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

OMG!!  I hope it is Charlie in the diner!!  I can't wait for the teaser!!



Author's Response:

The teaser should be up tomorrow, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

I just found this story and I really have enjoyed it so far.  Emmett is hilarious!  And Bella is now kinky!  Who knew?  I guess it is the quiet ones huh?  Can't wait to see where you go from here.



Author's Response: Oh thank you for your kind review. More chapters will be up soon

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

I can't believe Edward actually did that!  It's about time though.  He needs to show Bella that he's not afraid anymore and that he truly wants her.  A peach?  That is crazy, but I guess it worked.  Can't wait to see what happens from here.



Author's Response: H: the crazy things we do for love...