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Bio:
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625246
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44
First I'm so glad I found your story again, I've been waiting for updates from FF but I thought it was over, but it was because I follow your story Creating a Mate that I notice your A/N on the last chapter that to came and and voila!
I'm soooo glad Bella gave Edward her virginity, suck on that Carlisle! That man is pure evil I so hope Edward kills him in a very painfull way. That's the only way they'll ever be safe and they'll need to make sure the cops know about everything and the new trainers as well.
I'm glad didn't run when Edward gave her the chance, because honestly I think she is safer with Edward. Carlisle would have found her very easily and I suspect he wouldn't have brought her back to Edward.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found me again. The next chapter is already in the works and will hopefully be ready next week.
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
Oh I can't bare the thought of Bella being subjected to those horrors again, I hope Edward is able to protect her, especially if she's pregnant. She needs to tell Edward and the rest of them Carlisle's plans for her.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
Oh thank you thank you, I just couldn't stand it if she thought Edward had reverted back, he needs to keep her safe she needs to know that he can protect her... I think the 3 boys should plan Carlisle's demise and put his rotten body in Esme's garden, actually no why poison her beautiful garden.
They still need to worry about this new threat and Sam and his group, plus it would be nice is these people were all arrested so this stops all together.
I'm so glad Bella finally told Edward about what Carlisle has planned for her.
Great chapter, I'm sending a subliminal message now, kill Carlisle with much pain and suffering :-)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49
OMG Bella's explanation of her essay made me want to cry and did in fact bring tears to my eyes, you could just feel her giving up and loosing herself I hope Edward wakes up fast!
Esme's garden, I can't even speak how that women survived and endured is beyond me.
I was left with a feeling of sadness after reading this chapter, I guess because of the two steps back for Bella and Edward and hearing Esme's story, I so want a happy ending for them at the end of this they deserve it that's for sure, all of them in fact (except Carlisle of course I want him to die a long drawn out painfull death :-)
Great chapter!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
I think Bella summed it up very well at the end can' she just get a break. I'm so glad Jasper knocked some sense into Edward, but didn't Bella get ganged raped by James and Paul or was that not enough men to consider a gang???
I so can't wait to read their HEA!
Great chapter, I'm so glad Edward got there in time!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Oh thank god that evil prick is dead!!! I hope Esme flushed his ashes down the toilet, although she took him outside, maybe there was an outhouse near by, one could hope.
I wonder what Bella meant at the end there does she want to leave. I am torn by wanting her to be with Edward because they do love each other but I have to admit after all she's been through it might be a good idea for her to feel free and control of her life for awhile.
Great chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Wow, I can't believe this story is over. I have to admit at times this was not an easy story to read and had to scim over certain paragrahps but I was emotionally invested in these charachters after the first chapter and couldn't not read it and was glad when I found it again on this site. I loved that Edward loved her enough to leave her alone while she went to school and dealt with the horrors that were inflicted upon her and in the end they still come together. More than that Esme finding real love was so wonderful, thanks!
Will look forward to your next story!
What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Homecoming
Gah I wonder where she went... I'm sure she is very confused after their kiss, you've mentioned it before that she doesn't want to get close to anyone because of her intent to kill herself so falling for someone would cause her a lot of turmoil.
They sure treated her to a very nice evening though and made her feel safe during through out, I'm sure she hasn't felt that way in a long time. I thought that was great!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
you are too sweet revieing in two places!!!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back
I'm glad Edward took the initiative to talk to her I suspect she would have taken way to long if at all to re connect with them thinking she was no good for them.
So I'm thinking Edward has a connection to her but to her emotions being her mate and all and that's why Carlisle had him concentrate on her, but I wonder why they don't want him to now, mmm interesting.
I'm glad Edward shared his past with her I think it was almost pivotal in her opinion in her own situation, that maybe she's not alone. Although I'm pretty sure she's not a murderer in the true sense of the word, I think she was forced into it. I feel like the Cullen's in this story because we don't know what happened so we are all in the dark as well!
I love this story!!!
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
lol, I swear I read this somewhere before. where was that again! LOL thanks
yeah, Carlise asking Edward to tap into Bella's feelings was a mated thing. He can't read everything about her but if there had been something major, she was being tortured or harmed Edward would have felt it.
I forgot to tell you, Carlisle had been against Edward knwoing he mated with Bella, cause he was scared he would freak, he is less worried about that now and is just waiting for Edward to figure it out. It isn't far off now! I promise
Thanks for your review, here's a tease of next weeks chapter:
Bella came in before anyone could say more and looked at all of us taking in our troubled and pensive faces. “Is everything ok?”
Esme stepped in saving us all. “Yes, dear, we’re fine. Emmett was just commenting about additional vampire movies and which ones would be best to show you.”
Emmett forced a smile, his thoughts consumed with Bella being in a place where she didn’t have support; he truly did see her as a little sister. “Yeah, I have to make sure your schooling is complete!”
Bella rolled her eyes. “Thanks, I doubt I would survive without more education, Lestat.” You could hear the sarcasm in her voice and there was a light of humor in her eyes.
Emmett walked over to Bella and tried to look threatening, though the corners of his mouth tugging up belied the threat. “Little human girl, are you making light of vampires while in a house surrounded by a coven of blood sucking fiends?”
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Just a Little Bite
Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
thannks :)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Aftermath
Awesome chapter you rule!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next week:
“Edward,” she said into the silence.
“Hum?”
“May I ask you something?” I looked down at the top of her head.
“Of course. What’s on your mind?”
“You know homecoming night?”
“Yeah, what about it?”
She took a deep breath. “Well, you kissed me.”
I smiled. “Yeah, I remember that.”
“You haven’t kissed me since.”
“No, but that isn’t a question.” I didn’t want to play games, I wanted to know exactly what was on her mind.
“I was wondering why you haven’t. Kissed me again, that is.”
My body tightened in anticipation. “Do you want me to?”
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Being Left Alone
Great chapter, looking forward to the trial!
Author's Response:
thanks again for the review
Thank you for the review and here's a tease that should make you happy for in two weeks:
I smiled. I was mated, to Bella. I let the idea sit with me and I felt lighter and happier just thinking of it. I was mated to Bella. The phrase played over and over in my head. The more I thought on it the more obvious it was and I felt like the biggest idiot for not seeing it sooner. Bella was my mate and I loved her. How could I have not seen it? I loved Bella. Now that I considered the idea I wanted to kick myself for not realizing sooner.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated
As always an awesome chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
lol you mak me laugh!
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next chapter. Don't hurt me!
Emmett spoke up. “Will she be ok Carlisle?”
He nodded. “She should be fine. She’s dehydrated, and has lost a lot of weight. From the look of it she hasn’t slept and it looks like her body just gave out. It happens to people that push themselves past the point . . . “
Carlisle cut off when Esme gasped and Rose called out, “What the fuck!”
I had been avoiding the thoughts of the women to give Bella as much privacy as I could, but immediately I saw what they had seen. I shot off the couch yelling. “What kind of sick sadist did that? What happened to her?”
I started pacing and was growling. Jasper put a hand on my arm to calm me. I wrenched away from him. “Leave me alone!”
He didn’t take offense but spoke in a calm voice. “Talk to me brother. What did you see? What happened to Bella? Is she ok?”
I tugged at my hair. “Yes, no, I don’t know. She’s . . . marked.” I couldn’t bring myself to say more.
Emmett came up to me. “What’d you me marked?”
I swallowed and put my hands on my hips trying to get the vision out of my head, but it was burned there and would never leave.
“On her stomach . . . it looks like she was cut with a knife . . . multiple times . . .” I took a deep breath. I couldn’t even say it.
Carlisle spoke. “What else son?”
I looked at him and whispered, “Someone branded the word ‘MINE’ over it.”
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home
Gah you're killing me here :-)
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home
You rock!!!!
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Into the Night
Best story out there!!!!!
Author's Response:
ow, thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?
Awesome chapter I'm glad you're back!
Author's Response:
hee hee, I only pretened to leave. I have just been busy, last week was CRAZY! seriously crazy. I had the chapter to my beta on time, but she forgot about it and I was to busy to track it down! pathetic I know!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Balancing Relationships
Full review on FF but as always awesome chapter!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things
Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
thank you.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Summer Outtakes for the story Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights. It all began the year her parent's died. The boys took her to the beach that first summer trying to cheer her up. It ended up being a yearly tradition for Bella and her boys. Watch as their relationship matures and develops from one end of the pendulum swing to the other until they finally find equilibrium. These outtakes also fill a few of the gaps between the wedding and the epilogue. Come enjoy the angsty, hot, and volatile journey.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 26418
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Last Summer With FDKK
I've decided to review from here to support your move here.
I'm sad this story is over, I loved every minute of and I it was so wonderful to see them all still getting together as one big huge family. FDKK started out as Bella & Emmett loosing her parents and ended in the most happiest time of her life with so many special people in her life. In my opinion the lemons you've written in this story were integral to the story line but were not exessive or gratuitous at all.
Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate the review and the support!!!
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ah poor baby and poor Bella...I hear it's though when a baby has collic.
I'm sure Edward will help her out :-)
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Mmmh, it is tough, very tough and who knows? He might ;)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter, that Car is a little charmer :-)
Author's Response:
Takes after his Daddy ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great first date, I didn't think they would sleep together on the first date, I think they would want to get to know one another better. I can't wait to read how their relationship develops!
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Hee hee, I threw my sisters for a loop though ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
That was an great chapter and yes that swimsuit is too adorable!! I love how they all took up for her at the restaurant against those asses.
Carlisle's tats sound awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D you should have seen my face when I google imaged baby swimsuits, I was one ball of goo because it was all so cute!
And yep! Doctor Sexy Dad has a fiery passion for ink! :D
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Awe that was so sweet, what a great chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Wow this story is making me very very happy :-) When Car called for his mommy that so sweet I had tears in my eyes, lol.
Awesome chapter!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Yay their moving in, I kind of figured it would happen if she ended up getting fired, it just made sense. It's funny I was just sitting here wondering when the next update would be for Etched and viola here it is :-) I can't believe it's coming to and end though :-(
Awesome Chapter, I'm looking forward to your new story!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
Sorry to hear about that, but having been in that position as most of us women are at one point or another sometimes it's for the best although it might seem that way right now.
Good luck!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
Yes definitely more Etched I love that story and did find myself wanting more.
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64187
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
What a great chapter, him saying someone wanted him broke my heart... they are so lucky they found each other, he gains a father and she realizes a career she probably would never have considered had she not met him.
They are so sweet together!
I can't wait for him and Carlisle meeting.
Thanks!
The long awaited 'Etched in my Skin'-outtake of the f*ckhot doctor Carlisle and Esme! Tattoos and Smut! What more do you want?
Written especially for Sessahhh whose awesome reviews inspired me to do this!!
Contains explicit sexual content!! If you're underaged, you have no bussiness reading this!!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 926
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Passion and Ink
Very hot, nice to see their passion is still going strong as well!
This story is amazing!!!
Thanks
Monica
O/S- What happens when a vampire mates with a wolf? And a wolf imprints on a vampire? Will it all be sunshine and roses? Silence of the Wolves Contest entry. Lemon
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6785 Read Count: 117
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Where do we go from Here?
Wow I didn't expect that ending, that was sad. Maybe they'll take pity on her and end her suffering as well to live without your mate plus live with the guilt of killing you mate would be too much!
Author's Response:
I didn't know how ot end it. I didn't know if she should live or not so that's why I cheated and left it hanging.
When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm. Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter I'm totally hooked already and am sooo looking forward to the next chapter!
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Awesome chapter I'm glad they are both on the mend. I think it's a good idea for her to start therapy but a bad idea about the picture!!!!
Loved the Christmas outtake, brought tears to my eyes!!!!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I'm glad they are moving forward with her therapy, although I completely understand Edward's reticence this will be tough on Wisp and he so just wants to keep her in that safe bubble.
Okay now they have a lead I say they don't release her picture that's a scary prospect letting those people know she's out there, I suspect they'll do anything to keep their secret, I think they need the element of surprise.
Awesome chapter!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Awesome chapter, I can't tell you how much I love this story!!!