Reviews by Gnrclln
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

Please don't have an Edward death scare or an Edward death.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence

What a teaser of a chapter! Ugh, I am greedy for more! Again, please don't kill Edward or do a MIA.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

I am so glad she got to tell him on the phone! Please don't kill Edward or make us or Bella think he is dead or missing. Pretty please with Edward on top...

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Loved it! Hope to hear from Edward soon, by way of letter of course.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

Ugh! I am dying here. Next chapter please!!! Thank you for not having Bella go into labor. I was afraid of that. I really like the baby names. I hope it is a boy.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy

I hope the next chapter brings a letter from Edward. Does he know what happened to Bella. Please don't have Jacob become a major part of this story. No Pearl Harbor love triangles...please!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

I was hoping for a boy but am glad the labor went well. I hope Edward gets to meet his daughter soon.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

Thank God he is safe! Please give them some happy family time before you end this story. I would love to read about them together some more before the epilogue.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

I am glad he is home and that they are going to be ok. You better bring the lemonade next chapter though! Between SF and these two being seperated I am feeling quite frustrated!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

What is there to say other than that was a perfect chapter and reunion lemon! It was great and fit the story wonderfully. I hate to see this fic end but am so glad you extended it beyond the one shot it originally was.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

So glad all the boys made it home safe and sound. I really hate that we were not privy to the lemon at the end but oh well. I know I'm a lemon whore. Can't wait for the epi.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

What a perfect ending for this story. I am looking forward to rereading it all together.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373444
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Oh, please for the love or all that is holy, do not bring Tanya's skank ass into this story unless you are beheading her. I can't stand her.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

I really hope Tanya does not prove to be too big of a character or problem. That story line is so played out. That being said, I really think Edward has far too much love and respect for Bella to be unfaithful to her. Also, I don't think he would tolerate anyone making her feel uncomfortable. I hope I am right. You could always have Tanya beheaded. They did that in those times didn't they? On a much brighter note, I really hope Bella is pregnant.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

How much longer will Edward be gone? It has been far too long. Oh please have Tanya beheaded, it would be so great. I hope Edward puts her in her place in a way she will definitely understand. Please don't let Bella get any wrong ideas or have there be any trouble for the couple. I really hope she is pregnant.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

Well, I hope we have seen the last of Tanya. The end of this chapter does cause me some concern. Would it be too much to ask for them t just be happy for awhile? If they must have troubles, please make the troubles be outside of their marriage. Let their love give them strength they can lean on and use to overcome any problems that come their way.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Thank you for sending that skank away. I really hope we have seen the last of her. I can't wait to read Carlisle and Esme's reaction to the baby news. I really hope it is a boy!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Well, you brought tears to my eyes with that one. Not easily done either. I hate to see this story end. I had hoped we would get more of their rule together. I plan to read this again in it's entirity.