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Just a college girl that adores the written word in all its forms :)
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He thought her to be dead, as he tells Watson of her - Bella - his lost love, she is struggling with the decision of her past. Will he take her back when all is revealed or will he turn his back on her? R: M Sherlock/Bella
Categories: Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Alternative Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Sherlock
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16330 Read Count: 1490
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm rather new to this site, but I thought I would branch out from Fanfic.net and see what else was out there. I'm quite glad that I have. I really like the concept you have going here and love the idea of a Robert Downey Jr. Holmes crossover with Twilight. You are doing very well thus far, and I cannot wait to discover more about this story :)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Oh, that was so sweet! I just adored getting to see how they met and being able to learn more about the nature of their relationship. I think the characters are very true to form, and for that I appluad you :)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Even more development! I love the idea of Bella being the one who helps Holmes control his "curse" and how you've brought in James and Victoria is brilliant. You really are doing a fine job, and although I noticed one or two erros--don't quite remember where--they in no way hindered my reading :)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
You may have made him OOC, but I can still see enough of the original character from the film that I don't notice as much. I'm not sure if that sounds bad...but it was meant as a compliment. I really do love this story, although I have to wonder where Emmett is in all of this. You mentioned him as her brother, if I remmeber correctly in an earlier chapter, but that is it. Other than that, superb :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the reviews, it means a lot. I know holmes is a little if not too much OOC, but i am still trying to capture him. Hopefully with much practise I will get him right.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love it!!! Bella just had to interfere, but it has led to some very good questions and will lead to some even better drama! I was glad to see Emmett, if only in a memory, as it brings more insight into Bella's life growing up with a protective elder brother. And how you had Bella show up was a nice touch, especially with how she vanished after telling Watson that she was glad that Holmes had a friend like him. You really are doing an amazing job, so keep it up!!!
Looking back on the memories of Sherlock Holmes, Watson thought it was the end, or was it? AGoS
Categories: Sherlock Holmes (Movie)
Characters: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1464 Read Count: 35
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like how you captured the pair and how a possible meeting once Watson discovers the question mark could go. It was cute, made me laugh, and altogether wonderful :)