Reviews by Bella94
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116434
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Bella94 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

YAY!!! Cant wait for more. In my opinion, Bella needs to tell Edward off a little more. And I kinda dislike how she gives into him so easily, like when they're arguing She just fucks him. She never wins an argument. I think she needs to. Like when she hand cuffed him I was laughing my ass off, because SHE was in charge of him. I thought it was good he got a dish of what he gives out.

Anyway awesome story. Can't wait for more.

Fourth Quarter by MBella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fourth Quarter

Edward is the star quarterback, Bella is the coach's daughter.  Falling in love can be bittersweet, but what happens when tragedy tears them apart and fate throws them back together years later?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146742 Read Count: 17966
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Bella94 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Outtake 1

Absolutely fell in love with this story. I love how you made the characters your own. And really the only thing you used was the names.  If I were you I'd change the names. Then I'd get it published. I would so buy this!

I... I'm speechless. Best Story I've ever read, and I've read a lot. I really think you should find a way to publish this. I would buy it, A thousand times over! Best Thing I've ever read. Book, story, or fanfic. My favorite Writing by far. You're an Amazing writer. You blew me away. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You don't know how much your words mean to me! :)  I am so happy you liked it.  I hope I see you on the review page of my new fic coming March 1st. :)

MBella