Reviews by Drnifer
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Good News and Bad News

I normally shy away from historical pieces, but I've been sucked into this story from the first few paragraphs.  I can't wait to see how things progress, although I sense I may need to keep my tissue supply stocked:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

I'm really liking this so far, although in my head Edward plays for the Cubs(once a Cubbie fan, always a Cubbie fan;)) 



Author's Response:

So glad that you are liking it. Yeah I get the once a CUbbie fan always a Cubbie fan, it's like that for us Cardinal fans too!  That is the one thing Chicago and St. Louis has in common, very devoted and die hard baseball fans.  Imagine how I felt when long time Cardinals player Jim Edmonds came to play for the Cubs? He is my all time favoirte. But I still cheered for him. Shhh don't tell my husband he might disown me. LOL

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team

Lucky Bella! I think it's worth a concussion anyday to meet Edward, lol.



Author's Response:

Yep I agree completely, I would take the concussion too!!

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 First Base

I loved the ball and how sweet Edward was on their "date."  The ending was perfect!



Author's Response:

Yes, but wouldn't any date with Edward be perfect? 

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

I love that this chapter has a little bit of everything - drama, fun times with friends, and sweet lovin'!



Author's Response:

Ahh, this chapter scared the crap out of me when I first wrote it. You know first love scene nerves. Glad disappoint!!