Reviews by RubyDee
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 19 Part 7

NJ, ya need to put those two out of their misery.  lol ;p  Can't help but love these two. 

On another note, I can identify with the lesser bottle of wine.  Turns out my favorite Spumante is a malt beverage ... go figure, but hey, who cares.  *giggle*

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

These two are good together, that is for sure.  There is np wonder that he would feel love for her.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

Life won't be the same with Rosalie and Emmett gone. Then again if they are just a few houses down it doesn't have to change.  Wish Bella would have pried a little. lol.   SNL should be fun.  As should Ellen.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 20 Part 4

Their time together is so simple.  Watching them become the family they were meant to be makes my heart happy.  :) 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 20 part 5

LoL.  Will a lock be in place before nightfall?!!  Fun Chapter.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 20 Part 7

Loving the happy home they are making.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 20 Part 10

LoL.  If anyone can make America fall in love with Souper Girl it is Ellen,  

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 21 Part 1

The bubble has burst.  With a little luck fan will be happy to watch this family become one,  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 21 Part 1

The bubble has burst.  With a little luck fan will be happy to watch this family become one,  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 21 Part 2

It's good to know he wants everything out in the open.  Like Edward, I don't think it will matter.  :)

 

Summary:

When Edward takes a temp job as a fantasy engineer, he has no idea what he's in for. Talkin' dirty to ladies three nights a week doesn't seem too hard. But when Bella calls, Edward is the one that begins fantasizing.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10384 Read Count: 3820
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2015
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

DAMN It!  I have no business starting a new story but when I saw this on fb I thought I'd take a look.  Normally I would have glanced at the story and kept an eye on it as it progresses.  Since the first chapter is so short I read through it.....

  You just had to make him a fireman didn't you.  lol.  If you didn't have me with the fireman you certainly got me with the Hello, darlin'.  Yep.  You have me for the duration.  :)

 

 

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh My!    Masen has taken to this "line of work" like a fish to water and has wasted no time with the get to know phase with Miss Bella.   Can you imagine the fireworks should those two ever meet?

I really like how you have introduced Alice and Bella very seamlessly into the story.  Emmett, too.  I have to tell that the thing that has me hooked so early is that the story could take so many avenues and each one promises to be an adventure.  Thank You!!!

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That man can call me Darlin' anytime.  Hell, I'll even answer to Bella.  lol.

Never expected things to progress this quickly and thank you for that.  Loved how Carlisle took Edward to the bookstore with him and they (E/B) met face to face.  It certainly sped the process up for them.  Makes me wonder if Bella or Alice are going to be comfortable with their "guys" going to "work" now.  Amd if they do will they be able to perform with other customers? 

This truly is a fun story to read.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136808
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Dearest Ms SD85~

I read My Laird today.  I am in love with your characters and look forward to more.  There were a couple of them that I thought were rather questionable from the get go and crave more of the "miscreants of the underground". 

Bella and her uncanny ability to attract danger made me smile more than once.  Can you imagine the relief Jasper and Emmett felt each time the other was assigned to keep her in tact.  One can only imagine the tenterhooks they felt while awaiting the assignment.  On the other hand I loved Bella defended their honor to her husband.  Yes Edward is the laird and he is the husband but sometimes I could not help but stifle my giggle when she was the one that wore the kilt.  A let me tell you I was more than happy when Jasper put his foot down on her going with Garrett. 

I don't know how sympathetic a few of your readers may have been to Bella's plight.  Anyone that has ever walked in her shoes knows how difficult it is to leave all that is familiar behind when entering into a whole new world.  Compound that with going to live with a people you know as natural enemies.  She tried so hard to fit and not be a burden to anyone.  Then there are always the few that will make your life just a little more difficult that need be.  Take for instancee the first kitchen girl that showed Bella to her room via the dungeon.  Certainly she knew better but chose to make Bella's transition uncomfortable. (She must have been one of the infiltrators, huh?)  Tiffany was so kind to Bella and will certainly take Bella further under he wing as the story continues. 

Edward and Bella may have come from different stations within their  countries but they learned to adapt to one another.  A lot more adaption will be necessary but as they grow  together so shall their love. 

Another thing I liked is how you were able to keep this in drabble format.  Imho you kept the story at a comfortable pace.  You answered "questions" as the story unfolded and I don't think you left any stones unturned.  I have a great deal of admiration for authors that can do that.  Thank You!

The timing of the sequel could not have been any better for me.  I do hope to be with you every chepter of the way.  :)

Ruby



Author's Response:

Wow, your review blew me away. Are you sure it was my story that your read? hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will see you soon, hopefully x x

Summary:

They will pay for every hour that has gone by without hearing her voice. For every tear our lovely child has shed. For every miserable second I haven't been able to kiss my wife. They will pay...with pain.



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2342 Read Count: 1815
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2015 Updated: 30 Jun 2015
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah.  His head is pretty twisted.  I know I wouldn't want to go back in for more.

Thank You for sharing this with us, Mina.  Dark as it was, it was really good.  <3

Cama de Rosas by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

You saw me when I was nobody. You loved me when no one else did. And in return, I wrecked us. A story of finding the way back to lost love, and in turn, rediscovering oneself. Drabble-ish fic. All Human. Canon Couples. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2590 Read Count: 6660
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Jul 2015
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter-12: Sunshine

Edward may have gotten lost in the bright lights but he was able to hold Bella in his heart.    It was quite beatiful that Bella's love was unconditional and was there to welcome him to the safety of home and family.  Life has a way of giving us everything we need.  There is no doubt that together they can do anything.  <3



Author's Response:

Awww ... I loved how you summed up this story is just a few words.

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann