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High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Denali

I so would  have been like bella in this one...

 

~Tiffany

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Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Wendle

i wonder if the first day is going ot be as easy as she thinks...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 5. High School

Edward seems irritated...hmmm

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Revelations

uh oh...that doesnt sound good...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Living the Lie

OH NO!!!! Everyones gonna be so mad!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 8. Fabrication

wow...she finally gets it...what she begged for..

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 9. Choices

Amazing job putting this chapter together!

 

~TIffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: 10. Alice

Alice always knows just the right things to say!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 11. Jubilee

ohhh...sneaky bella...lol

 

~TIffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: 12. Together

cant wait to see what he hears...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: 13. Something Else

NOOO!!!!!!!!!! and I dont have a chapter waiting to find out whats going to happen!!!!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

This story is quite special to me, as it's what first got me into fanfiction. I felt that the extremely HEA in Breaking Dawn almost detracted from the first three books, and I just couldn't leave Bella without really understanding the life she had gotten herself into!

Hope you enjoy the rest, I will be updating pretty regularly.

Ria

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 14. Fight or Flight

I was so extremely excited to see there was not only one update, but 2!! I felt like Edward there for a minute...never even crossed my mind about Carlisle's past...NICE!

 

~Tiffany

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Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: 15. A Virtue

I  cant believe how easy this theory could actually be what really happened..I always wondered how it had been so...i dont want to say easy for him...but he handled it so well...Even Bella who couldnt stand the sight of blood had a hard time.Yet Carlisle was able to never in his almost 40 years given in to his bloodlust...there has to be something else at work there...

Cant wait to see what other spins you're gonna put into this!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: 16. Perspective

Oh crap!!! He must be a very good hunter..How did they not notice him?!?

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, this guy's trouble! Next Chapter's titled "Hudson", and will be up tomorrow.

Thanks for reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Hudson

somehow i missed the update for this, Heading to the next chapter...Loving Hudsons power...jsut not him...lol


~TIffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Flight

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! Just thought i'd let you know...again...LOL

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it!!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Escape

Very cool how she sees Alice in her mind...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: 20. A Losing Battle

Yay Bella..Im so prould of her for doing what she did!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: 21. Out of Time

ohhh, a new power! What kind of damage will that be able to do???

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22. Waiting for Absolution

I love her new talent...hope shes able to work with it before the volturi come!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: 23. The Stand

Huge gasp!!! I totally didnt see them spliting up, caius's power, bellas New power...totally blindsided me!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24. Wolves Defiant

Oh...to leave me like this!!!

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

Im so sad to see this over...but i cant wait to see what else you come up with!

~Tiffany

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64347
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Im gonna miss the banter...it always makes me giggle...

 

~tiffany

Summary: Past Featured Story

arms

Set in high school.  Friends since childhood, Edward has always loved Bella.  When he finally musters the courage to tell her how he feels the result is unexpected.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7431 Read Count: 795
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

amazing..would love to see more of this...even if its just random POV's..

~Tiffany

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice....would love to see an outtake if you feel like it!


~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Thank you!

The Sex Talk by Jennmc75 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Get inside Charlie's head and see what he was thinking during the "sex talk" that takes place in chapter 2 of Eclipse.  My entry for the Twilight Novel Novice Eclipse Fan Fiction Challenge.  Rated T.

The Sex Talk Flashy Avitar

 

The Sex Talk Banner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2170 Read Count: 873
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sex Talk - One Shot

I love Charlie's head...Its such a fun place...LOL

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Charlie's head is definitely a fun place.  I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Summary:

How does a father deal with his only daughter getting married? Charlie finds comfort in an old friend. See how Bella’s decisions in Breaking Dawn affect Charlie and lead to a relationship with Sue. Charlie POV for parts of Breaking Dawn.  My entry for the Twilight Team DILF contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/Sue
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8560 Read Count: 555
[Report This] Published: 13 May 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2012
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Learning to Love Again - One Shot

awww, i love charlie....



Author's Response:

I love Charlie too :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing

Summary:

. "Sure, we didn't have all the luxuries life had to offer, but we had each other, I had her and she had me" Inspired from Type O Negative's "Summer Breeze" R.I.P. Peter Steele.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2497 Read Count: 138
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sometimes when you think you have nothing, you have everything...

 

~Tiffany

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The ER

james...crap! I cant wait to see where this story will lead...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Lol. Crap was the reaction I was hoping for.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…”  I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."

 

 

 

~*~*~

 

"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"

 

~*~*~

 

This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Birth

awww, looking good so far!

 

~Tiffany