Reviews by Vampyslayerbitemeifudare
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow ok I really hope you dont drown out bella's coke addiction and i do hope she lays into rose for how she inevitably caused a lot of this to happen....i cant believe the nerve of rose. Also I kind of think you went two fast with making edward and bella love each other it just seems like they need to connect more because i feel like they havent had anything except a couple of conversations and good sex....cant wait for next update.



Author's Response:

Bella's coke issues will be addressed further in upcoming chapters. I understand where your coming from with the Bella and Edward falling in love thing, but if you go back and see the conversation between him and Alice when he acknowledges that he has fallen forher. Their connection was instant and the ordeal just forced the issue.

Thank you so much for your review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can not wait for next chapter love it.....so hot lol

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOL i dont want Emmett point of view I want more lemons for all as well as Edward and Bella. More dominating Edward and more stubborn Bella lol. And yeah ok I know I said I didnt want an Emmett point of view, but I wouldnt mind it as long as its a long chapter followed by a Edward point of view or something please lol. I love this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

Personally i would like to see more edward and bella because it seems they dont get many chances to talk to one another. i really would like to see edwards reaction to being around bella.



Author's Response:

Edward and Bella are on a slow simmer right now but I'm sure things will heat up eventally.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies

OMG please send me a teaser i need to know because honestly  if he slept with her i dont think she can forgive him that fast but i do think she would deal with it. I dont think he will be happy of her accussing him of cheating because i think its something else.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

yeah i like your idea, but some of this is kind of forced and pushed out pretty fast and its kind of not making sense. I dont get the feeling that any of the guys truely care about the females and its just too easy for them to like the guys which to me would have been better without.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your view. I'm not sure what doesn't make sense to you, but I'd be more than happy to elaborate.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

Ok i like this, but carlisle can kick rocks lol. I get where he is coming from, but they are just as bad as humans are when they torture them if they just fed from them i'd understand, but that is not the case. I really am disappointed in how edward still thinks he wont change for bella when it comes to feeding on humans, but he supposidly only preys on the bad people. I do love this story and I wasnt sure if i would have liked him, but apart of me does.



Author's Response:

well all i can say is tht ur queries on carlisle will all become apparent soon, he does have a gd reason, he is just too pigheaded to tell bella. And Edward is very self ritious, he believes bella isn't changing him, when in reality she is, he just doesn't like the idea of a human being able to hurt him, but i totally know were ur coming from.

Everything will become clear :) xx

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25615
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I liked this but i kind of wish we could hear more about edward and bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Carnage

WAIT A MINUTE BACK IT UP....YOUR PROLOGUE DOES NOT MATCH YOU STORY....YOU SHOULD MAYBE FIX THAT. I DO LIKE THE STORY, BUT BELLA GOING IN LABOR IN THE BEGINNING WHEN SHE SEES EDWARD WITH A STAWBERRY BLONDE AND NOW YOU HAVING JESSICA (WHO IS A BRUNETTE) TAKING THE BABY OUT OF BELLA, THIS JUST DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE. SO YOU SHOULD PROBABLY EXPLAIN THAT OR TAKE THE PROLOGUE OFF YOUR STORY SO THIS IS MORE CONSISTENT.



Author's Response:

LOL, Oh my.  You misread a chapter...The prologue was a dream.

Forbidden Desire by RosaBella75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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Banner by: Anonymous

In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will. 

Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual gratification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her. 

That is until she meets Edward.  Suddenly her Father's insistence on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life.  How will Bella and Edward survive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?

This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.

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Banner by: hologramGal

*WARNING*  This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters.  DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42320 Read Count: 12030
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: When Worlds Collide, part I

Love it and honestly i cant wait for some forbidden bella and edward action lol



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And I honestly am having a hard time following the orriginal plan.  I want to get them together too!

Glad you're enjoying!

Thanks for reading and responding!!!

Set in Stone by Psyche001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?

Nominated for an Indie Award!

Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13286
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

Ok i am going to review, but honestly this story is wonderful. You dont need to know it or be discouraged by lack of reviews. I know it is nice to hear good things and so that is why I am reviewing to sort of made your head explode with my thoughts of how great you are doing with this story. I love it and its orginal and the detail is just impecable. Keep it up and hopefully you will update soon because I cant wait.



Author's Response:

Aww, lol. Thanks for reviewing. It's comforting to know my readers are enjoying it. Update in fifteen minutes!

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Water Bed

I just have to ask are you a fan of Happily ever afters or tragedies? Which do you prefer to write? i love this story so far and although i am depressed about the deadline i cant wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Hahhaha...I was waiting for a question like this one. I will tell you that I love angst but I am also a romantic. Maybe that's a hint? lol. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Ready or Not....

Ok i love this story and yes it is morbid, but i hope to god you surprise us and let them live and love each other in some kind of way. I really do because at this point I dont think that will happen lol, but im hoping for it.



Author's Response:

I'm usually so tempted to just spill it out..lol. But Ican't. You dont want to miss the end tho, it's all I can say LOL!

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Stop and Go

i love it and did not see it coming but im hoping if edward becomes human him and bella will remember there love for one another.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Continue anyway i mean you are only 3 chapters in so why not continue on this story is growing a fanbase already so people really would love to see what you have next.



Author's Response:

I have decided to continue since most of you don't mind my spelling and grammar.

Thank you for your review!

XX
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

I love your story but i honestly wish they would take the next step of sex because bella seems a little whiny at times. She is not really the bella in the books because that bella wouldnt be so hesitant i mean i know she had to get to the point of loving him, but now that she is there "Aunt flow" kind of sours the mood. Also I know this is a weird thing to point out, but in the shower girls shouldnt be wearing tampons thats just plan gross and makes no sense when you wash yourself lol. I just had to point that out because you put it in the story i really think you shouldnt have. Other then that I love this story and I just cant wait for more loving between the two of them.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I don't think it's right for my Bella and my story for her to just give up her virginity ten minutes after she said 'I love you,' but it will happen within the next three chapters, I promise.

And I DON'T want my Bella to be like Stephenies, it's my story so I want to use my own characters even though they have the same name as hers.

As for the tampons. Some girls wear them in the shower, and some don't.

Thank you for your honesty and your thoughts. Not many give 'bad' critic, so thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Too soon....i really dont think they need to have a child. I really would perfer her not be pregnant in this story till way later on, but thats my opinion.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! I needed it. :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

Ok the if your a bird im a bird comment is from the notebook so that is the quote you used here. I really like this story, but i do miss some of the angst i will admit that bc it makes it that much better when things get good again.

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

ok i do love this story and have been reading it from the get go, but i can not stand this bella she gets more and more bitchy and its not even the pregnancy that bothers me. i just wish you would make her a little less mean....especially when it comes to her weight she isnt even big and when i read this it makes me almost hate the self image problems...especially since shes really tiny in the first place. other then that this story is great.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and honesty!

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Your on to something, but the chapters are very short and i really think that if you maybe added more scenarios and detail this could be very good. I liked the first 3 chapters thats why i added this, but the others are very short and to the point i just think it has more potential.

 



Author's Response:

I wrote this back in 2009 and I'm not changing it as I'm posting it to show people how I've grown as a writer. Chapters are of all different lengths.

 

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Marriage by Treaty by Zorantha Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 167]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Prince Edward of Forks and Princess Isabella of Voltura are forced to marry as the terms of a treaty signed by their fathers to end a war between the two neighboring countries.  Edward is a spoiled, arrogant womanizer who is determined to have a marriage of convenience.  Bella is a feisty young woman from a country where the women fight beside their men making her a warrior princess.  Can Bella tame the wild Edward and make him into the man he should be or will the whole world lose out.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59923 Read Count: 51659
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2011 Updated: 12 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Wedding

I hope you dont make us wait possible update today? I like that she is sticking to her guns

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a powerful telekinetic, escaped from a government research facility. With her is Edward, her guardian angel, sent to earth to protect her. Can they find safety? Can Bella love this extraordinary creature? OOC/AU, Rated M.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177566 Read Count: 20558
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 11 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

When i first found this I noticed there were no reviews and although this might be short, but i read this whole story in 5 hours i couldnt stop lol. I loved this and I am glad you shared it. Great writing and amazing bella and edward...my only sadness is that carlisle and esme dont seem to end up together.