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I love fanfiction, maybe one day I will get round to writing some. But Im not sure i can compete with all the great authors out there.
Bella's first trip to England at Christmas isn't exactly a Dickens novel, especially when her host family's son seems to hate her guts.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35950 Read Count: 12733
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hi I really love this story. Its great.
But I thought I would correct you on the spelling of Edinburgh. It's not Edinborough. I know it sounds pernickity or picky. But just for future reference.
I live there and trust me we get even more wierd and wonderful spellings.
Also just a quick question in this last bit about James are you implying that anal sex is wrong? And disturbing? Or are you just putting it in as the characters perception, because of what she has been through.
Cause I totally understand the latter and James seems like a total freak.
Cause I wouls just like to say lots of people like anal sex, and aren't disturbed.
God I sound like a total bitch, sorry no I really do like your story. I can't wait to see what happens with it. And where it goes.
I just had to ask that.
Anyway I will get back to reading and such.
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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35966
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue
Make a sequel there is still so much to be said! I mean the whole how did she get preganant. ets...
Bella has a great life but she's missing something...Will the new Marine in town be that something? Will she be able to handle the life that a Marine leads or will it all be too much?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93026 Read Count: 23379
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 2 California Waiting
Love where this is going.
But a quick grammar tip. The past tense of to see, is "I saw" not "I seen", seen is used when you say thing like I had seen, or I have seen.
Just a quick tip for future reference.
Author's Response:
this fic is a bit messy... I need to sit and go through it again... it was my first so I've learned a little more since writing it.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude
Still good though if it was awful I wouldn't be reading it.
Anyway glad to know that you are improving. But it's probably better than I could ever do!
Author's Response:
*giggles* well thanks, editing your own story sucks... I'm trying to get someone else to do it LOL writing is much harder than I thought it was.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude
I wish I could say I could help but really I am only really good with spelling and tenses. Not exeptionally great with the punctuation at all : ; not really my cup of tea.
My pet peeve is people who confuse your with you're. I am finickity about spelling but not so much to put me off a good story.
Just crap story lines do me in.
So it's going fab so far.