Reviews by Heather Grey
Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100871
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: On the wire

Ah! He maybe tried a little. At least Bella stood her ground. He needs to work for it.   I hope they end up together. He just needs to shed that hard exterior shell. Thanks for the update! I look forward to seeing alerts for this story!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

That was an exciting chapter. Damn. I can't wait to see what he does next. He obviously isn't going to let it go. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

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Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923242
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Excited to see an alert in my inbox. Bella having multiples? I guess that ups the chance of getting a boy. They are going to have their hands full once they get off that island. So sad to learn more about Bree's background. I do hope she makes it off too. I have a feeling James is going to be requesting her again. Thanks for the update!!!

Congrats on Midnight Caller. Can't wait to read it!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Sorry. I've been a little behind on read but I'll be caught up today. Such a beautifully hot chapter. My favorite part was Jasper's lines at the end. So true. Thanks!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I think this is a record for the number of sweet, mostly drama free chapters. Nice for them to get a little break but I'm sure you have something up your sleeve. The shower scene was really hot. They can't get enough of each other. I like seeing Bella get more confident in her sexual encounters with Edward. I'd be really insecure at Edward's previous experience. He is doing a great job of encouraging her and expressing how much he loves her. Her riding him at the end was so sexy. So nervous about James. He is trying to weezle his way into everything. Hope Edward doesn't take the bait. James is obviously trying to get a reaction out of him. Anyway. Fantastic chapter. 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Best opening ever!! Loved how she woke him up. So good! Then you had to top it off with some oral scenes. Yummy! Hope she gets more comfortable talking to Edward. She needs to understand how different she is from everyone else he has been with. Oh and she needs to stop comparing herself to Rose. Oh and yay she is preggers? Not sure if I should be happy or not. Mixed feels as I'm sure they are having. Thanks for the update!

I forgot to mention last chapter but I love the images and gifs. Thanks! 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Well I got some free time to read. I've been putting it off because I knew this was going to be a sad chapter. Even though it was extremely sad, it was also a beautiful chapter. The butterflies were a lovely touch. I'm sure Alice's reassurance helped too. I couldn't imagine leaving my baby behind especially in that place. Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Poor Bree. Breaks my heart to see how she is being treated. It has to be even harder on her being pregnant. I can't imagine. Thankfully Jasper is able to give her some peace. Alice being Edward's sister is out of the bag. Think it's going to take some time to process that. Thanks for the update and congrats on the book. Looking forward to reading my copy!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Wow. They made it! At least away from the island. I hope they can make it far enough away. 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

On the edge of my seat. So much happened! Edward needs to stop being so negative. Like Bella would ever leave him even now that they are free. Can't wait to see how this all pans out. I guess Rose will be involved too. James is still alive right? I didn't see his death. So much was going on but I don't think I missed it. Hope you have something good planned for him. 

 

Btw I don't think I could've gone back like the girls did. I'm glad they did since help was on the way. But if help wasn't coming, I wouldn't want to be there. 

Thanks!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

Omg! Edwards's self hating is so frustrating!!!! Just talk to Bella you silly man. I understand he is also dealing with a lot too so I won't strangle him. Hopefully he comes to his senses before Bella finds out he is missing. I'm happy everyone is alive and will eventually recover. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

Scared me there in the beginning with Tanya. Sneaky! Nice for Bella to be so open and honest with Emmett and Rose. They would've never got talking and realized they have feelings for each other. Hopefully Edward deals with his issues. I can accept him needing time and help getting over things but I just hate how he is misinformed about the babies. Thanks for the update!!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66

Some well deserved sweetness after everything. I can't imagine what it has to be like for Alice. Being so sheltered and exposed to life on the island. It's has to be so strange for Esme and Carlisle too. Can't wait to know when Edward finds out he is still going to be a Dad. Hopefully soon. He is going to miss out on things and I'm sure that's going to bother him. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Sweet chapter. I giggled at him for not realizing she got her period. He was also really cute at the pharmacy buying condoms. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

Tanya and Garrett...adorable! So confused about Aro's whereabouts but I'm glad Edward will be reuniting with Bella. Maybe he will figure out that she is still preggers. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

Not sure how I misses this in my inbox. Happy they are all together. Oh and that James doesn't have a peen! Thanks for the update!

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60928
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Outtake 1

Eek! I can get the reason for tension and animosity. Thanks for the outtake. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Excited to see an alert in my inbox. So happy she finally decided to tell Edward. He needed to know. Feel so bad for Bell and Maddie. Can't wait to hear more of her story. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thanks for the update! Even though I love Edward and Bella, it's nice to hear from the other characters. Maddie is so cute! Ugh Edward's interactions with her melt my heart! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

So much still doing on. Hopefully they can sort it out when they chat. E is definitely serious about Bella. Thanks for the update!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26240 Read Count: 13810
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2013 Updated: 09 May 2013
Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Finally have some free time to read the continuation. So good. My heart hurts for them. I hope they can make it work somehow. Amazing that they both have a connection to music and the violen. Off to read more. Thanks!!



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you are enjoying the story.  Yes, it made our hearts hurt a bit to write it.  The connection they both have to music is a strong one,a nd it will help tie them together.  Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow! I can't believe their bathroom interaction. I don't like cheating but it was hot. I wish he would've handled it better. They were both in the wrong but he shouldn't have left her on her knees. At least he realizes it. Hope they are able to work it out. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Yes, he made quite the mistake there.  They're both going to have to talk about what happened, and acknowledge the mistakes they made in order to make things work.  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love!!! Fantastic story! So happy A friend pointed them in the right direction. I can picture their lives together. I love your writing style. Very visual. Thank you so much!!



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the way the story wrapped up! So glad you can picture their lives together. And we're so pleased you like the writing style. It was an interesting challenge for us!  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it! -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Outtake

Sorry I've been such a fail lately. Fantastic outtake. Love these two! It's been an amazing read. You both definitely opened my eyes. Beautiful writing! Thanks!!



Author's Response:

I have been a total fail about review replies, so it's totally okay.  Thanks for the nice review. We are thrilled that you enjoyed the story and that we opened your eyes.