Reviews by Mary Alice
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366745
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

ARGH Emmett just has me ticked the hell off!  I know this is a few chapters after his douchbaggery but I just keep fuming about it.  Ok now that I have that off my chest...I so love this story and I know that there is a method to the madness. 

Mary Alice



Author's Response:

It was hard and interesting at the same time to write Emmett as such a douche rather than the nice, fun loving guy we see him as in fanfics.  Yes, there is a definite method to the madness so keep reading!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467287
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I so wish there would be more!

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167504
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 58: 58 I Do Times Two

This has been one of those stories that I truly Waited Patiently, Impatiently for the next update...Evrytime I received that email notification I'd get a big ol smile on my face...Sad this one is over.

 



Author's Response:

Glad we were able to bring you some smiles while the story lasted. We are sad to see it go too. We truly fell in love with all of the misfits.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The doctors at this busy, New York hospital all have the same goals; saving lives, setting the on-call rooms on fire, and maybe, falling in love? Grey's Anatomy concept with Twilight character twist. Canon Couples. Rated: M - Romance/Humor - Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199786 Read Count: 177752
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loves it 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491644
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I started reading this story a few days ago. Now I want to say I am enjoying the story however as much as I enjoy lemons in a story I think that sometimes you can have too much of a good thing.  They are hot but for me I just start to get into the story and then BAM they're going at it again.  LOL...Just my opinion and I'm still reading so I hope I didn't offend.

Mary Alice

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thank you to everyone that voted for my Jackson and my Emmett!!!! petersgirl loves ya!!!


THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS CREATED BY ELLIE WOLF. SHE IS SO TALENTED AND A SWEEHEART!!!! A HUGE THANK YOU TO YOU DOLL!!!


A really good friend of mine and a talented artist Megs (Mmismpy09) made this for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Love ya Doll!!!!

 


 

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After Edward leaves Bella is sent to live with her Mom. Phil signed on to another baseball team and they end up in Charming, Ca. Bella learns that it's not only vampires that are dangerous when she meets Jackson Teller, Sons of Anarchy, SAMCRO. Jaxs teaches her a lot about real life. The Cullens want back in her life, but Jaxs is a part of that now and things get complicated. They will be in their true forms of bikers and vampires.

 

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Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159233 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 May 2018
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just wondering if you were going to finish this story?  Writer's Block?  I really enjoyed reading what I have so far and am hoping for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113787
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is this going to be continued?  I sure hope so.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is this going to be continued?  I sure hope so.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is this going to be continued?  I sure hope so.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272447
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see I can read from TWCS.  I am happy to re read and go with the flow.  Keep up the excellent work!

Summary: Past Featured Story


The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40211
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

What a pleasant surprise when I opened my email today.  Hope all is well and looking forward to more.

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh hell to the no!  Are you flippin kidding me?

GAH! 

Carry on ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh boy...Can't wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

I would watch Look Who's Talking all the time when I was pregnant with my son 😃😃

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 04 May 2015 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

SERIUOSLY!  I sure hope you post the next chapter ASAP 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

This story is so sweet! I surely do hope that she holds to her beliefs. Looking forward to the next one. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You'll see!

Summary:

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Sometimes it’s the ones that are seemingly invisible that have the bigger impact on our lives. This proved to be truer than anyone ever imagined in a town known none other than Charming…

Contains: violence, language, racial remarks, explicit sexual content, abuse, drinking, drugs etc…




Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Friendship, Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 348213 Read Count: 97806
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2015 Updated: 20 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Arrested Developments

Clay is such a douche bag! Love this story and am looking forward to more. My two favorites...:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Seriously? No fair to stop it like this