Reviews by desdemona
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624978
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

great story! was a bit worried that she was actually going to end up with someone else but loved the ending



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Be sure to check out my other fanfics LOMO & CAM. LOMO is the darker of the two, but neither are like TPW. I've also published 2 original novels: Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection (which will have a sequel). DOP does involve white slavery, but it is not a "copy & paste" rewrite of TPW. There isn't a single scene from TPW in my original work.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review!

Mic

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

lol2

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167582
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Perspectives

yep, bella is selfish and i don't like her

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

wlb


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159843
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

now that should of earned one hell of an apology from bella to edward for the way she is always running out on him or thinking the worst of him at every turn.  edward shouldn't be the only one that gets yelled at or threatened for acting like a moron

Reviewer: desdemona Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

i really hope bella does some series ass kissing for blaming edward, because every time he tried to put his parents out of his and bella's lives it was her that begged him to forgive them and have a relationship with them

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 80705
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: My Bella

i am finding your mind creative, just a fyi :)

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Realizations

love, love, love .... just leaving some ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Bella is still like Edward's master. And more than not she sees Ellie as hers, not theirs it seems

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

great story. i know i didn't like every detail but that's what made it yours! :)  and i know it's an older story but i still like to leave a little comment as a thanks for sharing! 

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

dead charlie=yay!!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

oh great

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Edward's like a servant....Bella's in charge, Bella's way

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

uh oh, pissed off edward here we come

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

go judge!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

kind of sick of rose threatening edward all the time, she just needs to get over herself

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

happy for a court date, not happy how no one seems to think anything of bella using her touch and i love you's to manipulate edward into doing or feeling what she wants

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

ugh, everyone else can do for her but not edeard unless she allows it. isn't that her controlling him? when she didn't want to be controlled herself

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

now i have to say, i always hate when a woman says "my body, my choice"  it took two to make the baby, the father should be able to have a say about the matter. i know lots of guys that had they been given the chance they would of gladly raised their baby alone versus the girl having an abortion.  now in cases of rape..i completely see that it's the woman's choice.

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well, that was just a bit too harsh. yes, he should of talked about his plan with Bella but then again it's not like if it was Emmett that was in danger Rose wouldn't do the same thing

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

she used him

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i can't say that i blame edward for the choice he made 

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

:'( 

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

:)

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

poor girl

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh no

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:(   sad chapter

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

would love to read more from this!! that jacob needs his butt kicked

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339481
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: The Hospital at Christmas

hey, i'm just wondering about the missing parts in this chapter? i'm loving the story but there were a few times it seemed to be missing some dialouge between the characters and the story about Todd's past and what Bella did to make him relax.  are they in an outtake?

Summary: Past Featured Story

fsg

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence

i was a story-ho, i am sorry.  i found your story  a few nights ago and i was hooked.  i couldn't stop after chapters to review each one because i was so excited to keep reading.  wonderful story, great characters.  i love that there were lemons but more so there was a real story not just a paragragh of nonsense in between sex scenes.  fantastic work!!

~danie

Summary: Past Featured Story

ATL

Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491588
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

seems very cold and self-centerd of edward and bella to be worried more about bella's feelings than the fact that rose and emmett lost their baby



Author's Response:

Edward does have his self centered, cold moments. It is alluded to in some chapters that before Bella came along that he was a different man, cold hearted and rough around the edges. Thank you for reading nad I hope that you are enjoying it.

Sher

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59280
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just checking in .... i see i'm not the only one hoping you will pick this story back up.  PPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSEEEEE

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Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hi!  i love this story :) i happened to find it through facebook when someone else was asking for help locating which story an event came from.  it sounded good so i had to check it out, so so glad that i did!  i know that it has been over a year since you have updated this story but i was wondering if you plan to continue and finish it? i very much hope so. or if you have it finished somewhere else i'd love to know, i already looked over at ffn.

thank you for the great story line. it's nice that the sexual parts are not taking over completely

~danie

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412089
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great story, i'm on my way to read the outtakes now!! 

i love that you didn't make them all perfect with one being good and one having a past or both of them being virgins.  the story was something that could and does in fact happen in real life.

thank you for sharing your talent

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh no

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Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

uh oh, i think wisp's temper may be coming out soon

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

and here i thought edward was so smart

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

my stupid internet connection wouldn't let me leave comments, kept kicking off-line when i tried. i tried to comment and rate each chapter even with a smiley just because i appreciate all your hard work

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hope James doesn't get off easy with this deal

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

what a sick creep

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

poor edward, he's trying to tow the line isn't he? damn that dr for putting those thoughts in his head

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

aww i hope getting her a pet doesn't backfire

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wonder if i said "ow" it'd get the kids to do laundry? lol

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

go wisp

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806384
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

in all honesty i don't remember edward hitting bella...leg sweep, grabbing arms, running at her and aro beating his ass a bit ... yeah, but it's bella who is always hitting him when she gets mad or upset?  why is it that her misdeeds tend to be swept under the rug?  sonny didn't just get his temper from his dad  

Summary:

 

Bella orphaned, ward of the state, reaches adulthood. She meets one person and she thinks she has found her forever, but he breaks her heart and throws her aside.  At twenty-one she finds she is the sole beneficiary of the Swan Hotel.  Weird things happen, and the evil spirit in the hotel has decided that Bella belongs to him.  Will he get her, or will a local ghost hunter be able to save her. Rated for Adult reading. AH

Banner made by: TeamAllTwilight 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23222 Read Count: 2986
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 27 Oct 2012
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween 2012

Cool story! I worked at a haunted mental hospital for awhile in Kentucky, saw and heard some strange things there. Western State...you can feel the vibe just looking at the place.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bd

"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

really enjoyed this group of characters!!

Summary:

 

Winner of the Mine to Mark Judges Vote, 2nd Place Public Vote, two Judge Favorites and Most Original Public Vote. l Fueled by desperation, a queen turns to a king known by the world as an uncivilized barbarian. Will he be able to save her from a fate that seems unavoidable by taking her as his own or will he turn his back on her like everyone else? ExB

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11094 Read Count: 3103
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Jan 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

holy hotness!! i know it has been a long time since you wrote this but it should most definately be continued. i would love to read more because this king is so damned hot and manly and rough and and and ... the list is endless. and this queen bella, well i love her already. strong and smart, not meek nor stupid like bella is sometimes made. and that scene was just YUM

The Demon's Mate by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary: Past Featured Story

dm

Banner by Ellie Wolf

'It is decreed that the mate of the heir to the crown of the Dark Kingdom will be of human flesh born of pain, loss and hate.' Follow the dark prince as he finds his mate and seeks revenge on the one that harmed her.    

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, The Demon Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127795 Read Count: 100927
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 19 Jun 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

will there be more from Lord Jasper and Lady Isabella? I've just re=read the story again as it is one of my all time favs.  You ended it with some questions about certain charaters motives and it seemed as if there was possibilites for more from the dark prince and his mate

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i usually don't like the bella/jasper stories too much but i LOVED this one! and i must say, alice and edward getting theirs was awesome too! would love to read more from this bella and jasper

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

5 years after NM Jasper is back in the south. Due to his 2nd in command, things come about that will change the vampire world forever. Good or bad he doesn't care and only two things are certain; he won't be alone and she will be perfect... no matter the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125512 Read Count: 75248
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2013 Updated: 20 Jun 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story! i don't think that ppl judging jasper so harshly is fair to your major.  he was cheated on by his wife that although not his mate he loved her. and that cheating was done with his brother .... to put it simply, he was scorned.  no one judged bella for tearing edward and alice to shreds because she hasa scorned by edward ... hell, she didn't know alice had anything to do with the wrongs edward did against her until jasper told her.  i think the major had to learn to trust and let his heart give itself to another, the only true way to learn is to screw up alot.  would love to see more from thiese characters and the changes to the vampire/human world.  also, what happened to the other cullens?

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281022
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

happy 21st!!!!!!!!

your talent is indeed a gift to anyone who reads your works

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i finally had some time to catch up on this ... and i see you have started a new story!!!  yay, i'm so so so freakin happy ... as my daughter says lol  hungry for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

good luck with your mid-terms, but you've got it in the bag :) !!!!

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106101
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

i know you have not written in awhile but i was wondering if you have more from these families? i am in love with them all...  wonderful story, great characters.

~danie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella has a stalker who is seemingly harmless. Hired to housesit over Halloween, odd things begin happening. She takes care of the dogs, but is annoyed by Dr. Cullen’s younger brother. Is Edward playing tricks on her, is her stalker’s actions not so innocent or is the clown just a wax statue after all?

Banner By: DeeBelle1

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16319 Read Count: 2071
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Oct 2013
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Third Annual Halloween One-Shot

dang, i thought it was jacob acting alone.  good one :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The man in Bella's bed was second in command of the largest Italian Mafia family in Chicago, and she was the cop that had sworn to take them down.  Follow her as she puts her life and her heart on the line.

 

Completely uploaded today. 

 

Almost at 1,000 reviews!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100675 Read Count: 38876
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great story.  can't wait for part 2 :)   i know it won't be sunshine and rainbows but i do hope there's a HEA for them.  and what is it about Esme?     

Sons Of Jackson by petersgirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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**SEQUEAL TO RICHOCHET OF LOVE You have to read it first to understand this story. Jackson made them brothers. Their hearts made them outlaws. Abel has taken over the gavel. Finding out all the thing you must do to lead. But when he finds out the secrets too; it sends him in a new direction. Questioning Jackson and searching for answers. Just like Jackson did with Clay.


Categories: Sons of Anarchy
Characters: Jax/Other Character, Jax/Tara
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12869 Read Count: 272
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2014 Updated: 29 May 2018
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so your stories have made me laugh, get pissed off, cry and cry while pissed off .... now i know it's been a LONG time since you've written but i have hope that the time and talent you put into jax, lily and the 3 boys will have you coming back to finish their tale.  i'm willing to beg if need be!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you two are an amazing writing duo!!!

Summary:




Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

SUMMARY: This is a companion piece to Family Business, all in Tanya's point of view. Let's take a look at this woman's life, and see what led her down the road she traveled.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4302 Read Count: 1504
[Report This] Published: 12 Sep 2014 Updated: 12 Sep 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

crazy, just crazy. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

boy bella really was clueless in this one.  i mean, sam told her she was with 3 strange guys that night on the phone and she never caught it let alone any other comments.  great work as always

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary: Esme Cullen has a plan for Christmas this year, she's playing matchmaker. The two she's trying to get together aren't even searching for someone else. Can she help her friend, single mother of three – Bella, find a man who will love her and her children? What will happen, when it's Esme's own son is who she's trying to match Bella up with?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11709 Read Count: 3097
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wish i had a momma esme like this one!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Tiffany Kennedy - thanks for making this banner for us.

After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 21862
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

okay, i'm spending my free day reading/re-reading stories from my fav authors list. this story, yeah i'm sniffling like a baby.  you girls have so much talent. thank you for sharing it with the rest of us

Summary:

Side shots of Bella and Edward's POV from our Christmas story called Momma Santa's Christmas Plan.

 

banner by: tonks1865 / Tiffany Kennedy


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21090 Read Count: 6937
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Jan 2015
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love this whole family!!!  esme rocks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

There were so many secrets people carried in their minds.  For this reason I told them the mind often whispered and I didn't hear it unless I listened closely.  I lied.  Lying is part of who I am: A vampire pretending to be human, a mind reader pretending I don't know the things I know, an old lover pretending to be a novice.  When she asked if I'd ever been interested in the beautiful Rosalie--I lied.   

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55884 Read Count: 5448
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2015 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Epilogue

enjoyed the story but i do think that bella should have been a wee bit pissed with having been lied to about his being a virgin and about his past with rose ... not that it mattered because it was so long before she was even born but that she was lied to when she asked straight out about the matters.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  There were many times in the original story I thought Bella should have been more pissed about a lot of things.  She gets miffed, but I don't think pissed is in her make-up.  Especially when it's Edward; she'd forgive that boy anything--including murder, and abandoning her.  Sometimes keeping the characters true to canon is the hardest thing about fan fiction.  I'm thinking that in the long run, that lie will have some consequences.  It proved that he's capable of lying and keeping things from her.  Trust had to have taken a hit.  

Again, thanks for reading and for the review and rating!