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The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Cher78 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32. Bella's New World

I am super pissed that Bella forgave Edward for being a pig so easily.  She could have given him hell after she woke up.  I hate all the stories where she's a lovesick puppy who gives in easily.  Ugh.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100874
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Cher78 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions

Thank you for doing such a beautiful job translating this great story!  I am so excited to read new chapters - I know you put a lot of work into translating it from the original French version!  I'm curious about something, do you plan on completing the story beyond the 24 chapters the French version had?  A friend of mine read the french version and the story just hung there by chapter 24.  I think you would do a MARVELOUS job wrapping up the story between these two characters by bringing final closure.  That would be fantastic!!



Author's Response:

First, I want to apologize for the delay with the publication of chapter 19. It's been ready to be posted for 3 weeks now but I'm still waiting for the author's approval. Second, I want to let you know that the author Drinou is having issues in real life that keep her away from her writing and she doesn't know if she will ever finish her stories. However, the last chapter she published, the chapter 24, is almost a closure in itself, as we can see a future together for the two characters, but it's also possible that Drinou will find the motivation to write the actual epilogue to her story. That's what I wish for the sake of all her readers (and believe me she has a lot of readers). I wish I could tell you that I will wrap up this story, but I'm just the translator and I have no say on the matter...

Thank you fir your kind words :0)