Reviews by lobsters4ever
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Good one!  I loved the tension and anxiety about James escape and getting out of Edward's house. 

So happy that Bella told Edward how she feels!!! :)   I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I loved getting Carlisle's POV.  I still think that Lauren should have been punished!

And FINALLY -- Aro!

 

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Oooh, I loved the Jacob twist!  That was so good!  I was surprised how bad Laurent is! 

I can't wait for them to find James and Laurent.  And to find out where the hell Aro has been!! :)

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh holy crap!!!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Well damn -- didn't think that Laurant was that bad.  Guess I was wrong!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

*whew* I feel better knowing that they are on their way - soon!!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

YES!!!! I hope he suffers! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I am so relieved that Bella and Victoria are saved and thrilled that James will get what is coming to him!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wow!  That was actually worse than I had imagined for James.  I almost felt bad for him ...almost!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

This was such an incredible story.  Truly an amazing journey for Bella.  I loved the ending and really wanted more. 

Great job!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625046
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Nice wake up call for Bella!  ;)

Loved how the girls got to be all girly about Bella's ring and wedding!

I really don't want the cousins' to be there.  I am so anxious about this visit.  Eeks!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Nonononononono!  Oh no!  THIS is what I have been fearing since you mentioned it.  Please talk to her Edward.  Please!!!

I am so scared and worried!  Eeks!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Ooooh, great one!  I was so nervous at the beginning.  I did think that Edward did well.  I am relieved that he didn't hurt her.  I didn't think that he could/would but I was so worried because of Carlisle.

Glad that they talked and that she hit him for not being honest from the beginning.  Good for Bella!

As always -- can't wait for more!!!  Great job!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

My heart broke for Edward.  I thought it was good to see how upset he was about what has been happening between him and Bella.  And again, Jasper was amazing.  He is so understanding and supportive with Edward.

I couldn't believe that Bella was kidnapped.  I loved how Edward and his brothers rallied to help him and find Bella.  I hope that they get there in time. 

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Again this story took a turn I wasn't expecting.  I was stunned by Carlisle.  He was beyond insane.  I am thrilled that he is gone but wish he could have suffered more for everything he has done.  I do understand that he sons living the lives that they want and not according to him is the best revenge.

And while I don't want it to happen -- I do hope that he lets her go.  It will kill him to do so but is the best thing for her.  I am anxious to see what he will do and what letting her go means for their future.

Great job -- looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I was surprised in the beginning of this chapter - and a little worried too!  I thought that you did a good job sharing what Bella has gone through over the past two years.

I loved that Esme has moved on and is doing well.  Actually, it was wonderful to see how everyone was doing.  I wish we could have learned more about Edward and what the past two years have been like for him. 

It was a lovely ending and I am glad that she has found some peace in her life.  And that Edward is back!!

Amazing job Mic!

 

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I actually felt bad for Edward.  It made sense why he hasn't contacted Bella.  Hopefully, they can talk soon.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well, I saw this here and knew that EC Velvet needed some loving!  Oh, to be loving Velvet .....*thud*

Glad to see you posting here too!!! :)