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The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sarrielle Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

Great story so far!

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Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

Wow, that was hot! Lov'in Darward for sure! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Over Indulging

Edward is such a glutten! Looks like he got caught with his fingers in the cookie jar! (hee,hee) Can't wait to find out what Carlisle has to say! Good chapter! Hot too!

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Almost Losing It

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. The Waterfall

Wow, I didn't expect that! Go Darkward!

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8. The Breeding Begins

They better hope that the girls don't find out about their extra curricular activities! Dying to find out!

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

I know I wouldn't have been able to watch, but I'm glad they did. Pay back is a bitch! I hope they get theirs! Great chapter!

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences

Are these guys for real? Do they think that the girls are just going to pine away for them because they're being stiffed? I hope not! I think they should be taught a lesson. Hope it happens!

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

Good burn! A little competition never hurts. Can't wait to see what reaction the boys will have.

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice

I'm glad the girls got some payback, not enough yet though. I'd like to see the guys sqirm a little more. Great chapter, can't wait till next one!

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Wow that was hot! I don't think I ever read a story where Bella gives her virginity to another. It certainly adds an interesting twist to the story. Anxious to see how Edward will handle it.

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

I can't believe that the guys left the girls. I was hoping for more of a confrontation with Demetri and the others. What a bunch of wimps!  Can't wait to see what happens to the girls next!

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

It's about time the guys woke up! Now let's see what they do about this mess. Wonder if Carlisle will fess up or sleeze his way out?

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Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)

Boy Edward sure isn't sympathetic to Bella's situation what a jerk! Jealous much? Serves him right, what's good for the goose is good for the gander. I'm not sure if Carlisle is sincere either. Too bad Demetri and the others went back to Volturi, I was looking forward to a confrontation between them and the Cullen's. Maybe later? Great chapter.