Reviews by mountainlion718
Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You

oh no, Rosalie is there to cause her trouble or harm???? Why didn't she call Jake to come to the house???

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home

damn, Rose still is a bitter bitch.....Capo should just growl at her till she pisses in her pants.....i'm crossing my fingers for Edward.....

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

1st of all, so happy to hear that you and your family are safe.. That was the best present for Bella by bringing her grandparents in for the wedding! Loved the vows! Can't wait to deal with Gianna......

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Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

she's a dead woman walking!!! Bella has to know that Edward would have never touched that psycho bitch with a 10 foot pole, and that she's obviously lying!!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

i wish there was a way tor trick Gianna into getting the test done.......ugh, it sucks that they have this black cloud over them

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

yeah, Bella was a brat, but when those hormones start raging....lookout! Edward did was was best cause if he stuck around she was just gonna keep at him, she needed that kind of wake up call. Gianna is too stupid to drop the claim, she'll stick with it until it all blows up in her face and then she'll go all super psycotic

Sin City by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a vampire who preys on the filth who pollute his city. She is his one weakness, her innocence calls to him like nothing else on this earth. Can he stay away from her to save her or will she be his downfall?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19693 Read Count: 2748
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

GREAT STORY! so different from what i've read. Will Edward give in and change her????

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

she's gonna be pissed that he left without saying goodbye. can Alice see the outcome of thier decision to fight?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and i hope you enjoy this chapter, Edward doesn't leave without saying goodbye.

Chrissie x

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Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

omg, freaking nervewracking.....please let him find her....alive

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and sorry for the cliffy, hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Chrissie x

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i wonder if this will change Edwardf somehow...maybe he will be more calm and easygoing....

Author's Response:

I think it will change him, make him a little less intense until more drama comes along. Thanks for reviewing and i hope you like the next chapter.

Chrissie x

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Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter! Was Bella thinking about a shield or was she just thinking about protecting Edward?

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

awww! yay HEA!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing, sorry had to change chapter eight but life is so chaotic at the moment that i wouldn't have time to do it justice. I have so many stories in my head it's a nightmare.

Chrissie x

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Great story, but this chapter is killing me, can't he discuss it with her before he tries to break her heart and his in the process.

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

i hope Alice and Em can make some progress with these two.

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Yes! Em & Alice make a great team...lol!

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

great ending! so happy for them!

Author's Response:

We're so glad to hear you enjoyed the ending and what we did with the characters!  Thank-you!!  ~IW and TA

Fantasy Fulfilled by Cass189 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Written for the Devirginizing Edward One-Shot Contest. He fantasized about her for years. Now, she'll make those fantasies come true. EXB, Lemons!

 

Rated M/ NC-17

 

Fantasy Fulfilled


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4116 Read Count: 1292
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 19 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good :) he's so cute being all nervous...lol

Author's Response:

I know, right? For some reason a nervous and inexperienced Edward is a cute one. ;)

 

Thank you!

Fire of my Soul by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Two lost souls uproot their lives and relocate in search of something more. Fate brings them both to the beautiful beaches of North Carolina, and together they find friendship, passion, and love. AU/AH,OOC,BxE


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98428 Read Count: 13350
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 May 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Awesome story! great job! couldn't stop reading till the end!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake

:) Bet Edward will be a little less grumpy now....lol

Author's Response:

I think he will too! LOL!  Thanks so much for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i like it, i wanna see how he's gonna get her to trust him enough to bring up his uh "lifestyle"

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh i would love to see if Emmett tries to ask her out what Edward would do....hmmm wonder what's in store for Tanya?

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Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hmmm, wait till she finds out what he does on the side......

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Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yup, Edward has no willpower, guess he'll be breaking that contract with Tanya soon

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Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Its Edward right? But was he the one who knocked down the chair???

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Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Holy crap! Tanya is a twisted bitch! Poor Bella, how will she ever trust Edward now?

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh no freaking way! he'll never get her back in the house now...i can't wait to see waht he does to Peter

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Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I could kill Tanya! Seriously something is wrong with her. I hope Bella didn't leave without saying goodbye.

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, I can't believe she was able to sneak out. Charlie was a little harsh, you can't really force someone to spend time with you if you don't want to, but threatening I think makes it worse. Can't wait to hear from Edward

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh no, it's not him! or it was before, but not now.....yikes

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV

she has serious issues.....crazy witch!

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh i think Edward will find her before she gets back to Seattle......

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good begining, can't wait to see where this goes

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

how dangerous is Allistair???? as bad as James???

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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this is gonna take awhile, you can't undo years of programming like that in a few days.....

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

ell look at Bella winning over the mean old crank...lol, now if she could just do it to Aro.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

omg, i'm so excited about this, great begining. wonderful job on describing the race. i can't wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

awww sweet protectiveward! as much as he's got these budding feelingd for her, he can't lose focus, if your mind slips a little while that car is goin 200+ mph, you'll end up in the marbles and against a wall or into the car next to you

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

you tell him Charlie! i melted when he said "But, I love her" I hope she'll be ok, no major injuries right????

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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

I love Charlie! That was some good advice he gave her. And I'm glad he's just as sten with Edward

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

aww, they are too cute together

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

Oh i hope he buys the house.....just in case ....down the road...(no pressure or anything...lol) they make their relationship permenant, they can raise their kids there :)

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

awesome date! very romantic ;) i hope Bella will do well in the next race and not panic

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

Ha! She showed him.....(lovingly) ;) why can't they spend their time together after practices and the race in each others trailers??? gossip???

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

He freaking better be related to (Tanya?)her! Well at least Bella doesn't have clothes on so she can't run out of the house!

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

:D whew! crisis averted! lol! Thank god Tanya spoke up! and the ILY's *melt* can't wait for their time on the road!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

damn he is the too sweet! i loved how he stayed near her during the race, but he can't coddle her either, they'll both lose out on points and finishes. Wouldn't want them to be threatened about losing their ride next year (and separating them) if they don't make the numbers

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Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

beautiful, loving and tender...just perfect to keep her feeling safe ans secure

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Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

at least he wasn't hurt by sacrificing himself. but i think the 1 time he doesn't protect her and something happens, all hell will break loose

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Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

well that's one way for them to motivate each other...bribes...lol. And that was nice of Tayna to do that, intrusive but the sentiment was nice

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

Damn, she drives a hard bargain... Lol, I don't think he can go being denied twice for that oufit. He'll unpack in time

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Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

that sux that they would treat them like that, but sadly that's how it is when you're in the spotlight....BROVO to both of them for sticking to their morals and hearts.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

HOLY HELL, THAT WAS HOT......damn lucky Edward!....lol. hope meeting the parents goes well and that they will survive the Volturi relationship drama

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

awww, *sniff* i'm all teary now ;) that was beautiful! screw Volturi racing, they can't mess with a love like that!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

That's was really generous and awesome from his parents. Good I hope they stick it to VR really good.

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

it had to be from Volturi racing right....or maybe the Daniels team???

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

wow, Bella has a heart of gold....glad Edward realized why Ben did what he did.

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

Hmm, Daniels & Cosma....those 2 must have something to do with the sabotage. Its the quiet ones you gotta watch out for...

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

that ass James, it wouldn't surprise me at all if Aro didn't pay him to screw Bella & Edward up. i hope he'll be able to race again

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Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

I love that they have the upper hand, Edward seems to be doing well despite he injuries. Is the prognosis good for him to race in the future ????

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

:) a baby! I'm so glad they finally found out who was behind all that drama. I bet Edward pushed himself in PT just to get ready for the new season. Cullen racing will have a future Cullen driver now (I hope) :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

:D She won it! Awesome!!! so sad it's over, i loved this, Great job as always! Kepp up the good work!!!

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

carriedAWAY

Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

sweet one shot! good job! hope you win!

Author's Response:

thanks!  I appreciate the support~

Creep by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Bella has no one, no family, no friends, she feels worthless and when the one person who had ever shown her kindness humiliates her it's the final straw. But what has Edward Cullen, another loner, got to offer her and will she be willing to accept?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good one shot! I like that Edward didn't stay away from Bella

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the cups ( i loves the cups). Yep he didn't stay away from her and looks like he's not such a goody goody. Glad you liked it.

Chrissie x

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297712
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

LOVE THIS! can't wait till you update. Please let Bella thaw a little more.....they can be so sweet together!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I just posted ch 6, enjoy! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

Slowly but surely :) they do need to communicate more though.

Author's Response:

Yes, they do.

We're working on that ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

hmmm she has like a weird OCD with McDonalds and Titanic.....i hope she lets Edward help her and not try to run away

Author's Response:

Yeah, she does, you forgot to mention Edward as well ;). It will all be explained in chapter 10!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I loved Edward's surprised reaction when she was being playful... I hope she will be like that more often... I wish she would stop looking forward to when the marrige will be ending...

Author's Response:

She will... soon! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

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Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

Uh, what?! Goodbye!? What the hell is she gonna do!? Edward better find her!

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

yay, she opened up to him....finally.....hopefully smooth sailing ahead

Author's Response:

Yes, she did.

This was hopefully the last 'heavy emotion' chapter. ^^

xx
Gelix

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

good birthday! love the puppy! i think Edward will be joining Elsa in the doghouse...lol.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and we'll see what Bella will do to him!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

Leave??? where's he going??? and why can't she go with him???

Author's Response:

Yupp, he's leaving and I'm not telling you where until chapter 13! ;)

xx
Gelix

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

OK, i'm totally gonna cry now, that was so sweet and sad

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

aww, poor Edward, he wants that ILY so bad

Author's Response:

Yeah, and I would've too! ^^

xx
Gelix

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

very sweet surprise for her, and another big step taking a shower with him

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know! :) And more steps it will be!

xx
Gelix

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

i think they're ready......

Author's Response:

Yeah, maybe. We'll see what they think on Wednesday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

great job with the chapter......i wonder who the new boyfriend will be?????

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You'll see that in chapter 19! ;)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

ok, this quote was from TOP GUN right??? :) i'm glad they cleared up the drama, that fighting killed me

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

good chapter, Edward was so loving as usual :) can't wait for him to get that b-day present

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

her mother is MESSED UP! she should cut all ties

Author's Response:

That she is! But it's not easy to cut the ties to your mother.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

wow, that's a shocker.......i dunno how i feel about it...i don't think theres been enough time for just them, i know that doesn't matter, but they're still getting used to each other.....

Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

hmmm, could she possibly be preggo???

Author's Response:

Maybe, I'm not telling :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

yup, she's preggo....and she just probably gave Edward a heart attack

Author's Response:

Yeah, she tends to give him minor ones from time to time! ;)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

YES! definitely preggo!..lol can't wait till they get the house :)

Author's Response:

Yes, she is! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

Edward was too sweet when he kissed her belly....*sigh*

Author's Response:

Yeah, it made me want him all to myself! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

the Ghandi quote was from 'Remember Me' ;)

i can't wait till they tell Esme!!!

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Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

No! do not tell Renee, she'll just make Bella feel worse

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting

i like the idea of all of them being godparents.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that. It was so hard to choose between them so I went with all of them ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

will Edward ever find out he stood her up???

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch

awww, very sweet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella has lost both of her parents. She befriends Alice at college who demands she accompany her to Forks for Thanksgiving. Good times aplenty on Thanksgiving Eve. M for Mature content-language and lemons. ExB, OOC, AH

Written for the Ficawesome Gift Exchange!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6723 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Holiday Encounter

whew! that was hot! great one shot! any plans to extened it?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure if I'm going to extend it, but if I do it will probably only be another 1 or 2 chapters!!

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 226796
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loved that chapter!, yup Alice really needed to be reminded.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i loved getting a view into their aftermath. always wondered what happep behind closed doors

Author's Response:

well, wonder no more :) thanks for the review sweetie!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

No wonder Edward had the reaction he did...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well damn Carlisle, i never knew he had it in him ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Damn, Carlisle took to those classes and the Dom position like a fish to water....Garrett would be proud!

Author's Response:

I'm sure he will be!  The classes will be up next,...

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Good begining, I don't think Bella will put up with his crap for long

Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Summary:

Runner Up for the Black Sheep Fiction FB Group Scenes on the Beach Contest. Love blossoms and friendships form through paintings on the beach. Follow a reluctant Edward on his journey of awakening and realization. AH/AU - ExB - Rated M for language & lemon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7276 Read Count: 191
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sea of Realms

very good, gave me goosebumps at the end.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!!

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Definitely worth the wait ;) !! Great job!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Amazing story, I was so hooked last night, I couldn't stop reading till I caught up with he final posted chapter. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Please let them get into save Bella before James wakes up again! So glad Carmen and Rosie have come to an understanding