Reviews by mountainlion718
Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

omg!, did Edward and the gang finally find her!?

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

omg! NO! please don't let her die!

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

whew!....she's ok....you had me so worried in the beginning of this chapter! so happy you're doing a sequal!

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

LOL! that was priceless! i can't wait for them to finish that conversation!

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

nice wedding present :) i just hope he won't be a stubborn overly prideful man and he'll accept the gift :)

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

omg....too funny! had to be Emmett....lol!

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

awww, YAY! a boy! so happy for them.....congrats! Dr.! :)

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

so glad everyone had kids and they all stayed together

Summary:

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This is the outtakes from my story 'Married to the enemy.' Please read that story before reading the outtakes!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6428 Read Count: 2011
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
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Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakdown

good job, now i understand a little more

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
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Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

is this vamp a threat?????

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

It's too funny that I was searching for this kind of story yesterday! Thx so much for writing this , can't wIt to read more, I'm hooked already! Please continue!

Author's Response:

It would have been published yesturday if I had stopped sending my beta changed chapters! I couldn't help myself, I wanted to make it as good as possible. Thank you for reading it and reveiwing!

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

i feel so bad she has to question herself every time :( i hope Edward can take away all that self doubt

Author's Response:

He will, but he is doing it slowly. He is smart enough to know not to be too harsh with her so not to scare her off. Being her first Dom puts a lot of pressure on him to take it slowly with her. Thank you for reading my story and I hope to hear from you again!

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Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

thank goodness for Alice, the punishment was necessary.

Author's Response:

When they discuss her training in detail he will understand better to why she slipped up.

Who doesn't love Alice's ability to keep Bella alive!

thanks for following my story!

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Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

glad Carlisle is coming around. maybe if Esme meets Bella, she wont think she's being abused or anything

Author's Response:

Esme will definately be coming around she just needs a little time to come to terms with her own issues first. Thenk you for reading it!

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

she did very well, and he must be estatic that he was in control the whole time...no bloodlust......Trouble??? oh no.....i see punishment in the future.....

Author's Response:

They are both doing very well. he is controling his thrist and she is bahaving very well! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

what happened, did the dream turn into a nightmare. yeah i think Rose will 'handle' Mike best. I wonder what Jazz and Em did to those guys????

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

What are they doing to him, i though Esme was coming around????!!!! are they holding him for Tanya??? EWWWW!

Author's Response:

To answer your question yes they are holding hin down. but edward will be saved not to worry!

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

I can't believe Esme did that to him, I wouldn't trust her anymore either. I think Edward's in for an eyeful once bella gets on that pole

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

Wow, total 180 from Esme! Can't wait to see how that cottage turns out

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

i think she'll take that kind of punishment any time....

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

i guess Esme did a great job on the room.. is it really a good idea for them to move there when Bella feels so much tension with Esme around

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

wow, Bella must be like...WTF??? he didn't say she couldn't leave.....

Author's Response:

oh she will be examining things in the next chapter. she admits she wasn't told she could leave. but she understands that without the chasity belt she was at risk.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

the playroom was a success! so now they can enjoy themselves as a couple....hope it works out

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

loved Bella's POV. :) great job!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh, someone is going to die....and i think it might be a wolf......where is she? is that her blood?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella is a rising fashion photographer. She isn't as lucky in her love life as she is in her professional one. She's hired by Edward, an American model with great popularity in Europe, to take some pictures for his book. Will he be just what she needs, or just another thorn in her side?

Banner made by me. 

;o)

Note: This is an O/S that as of now I have no intention to continue.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 1964
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Domino Effect

whew! hot, sexy one shot....love possesive/domward...lol

Author's Response:

Thank you... I really like Edward as a possessive character as well...

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it...

 

Ange xxx

Summary:

Formerly the fat kids at camp, Bella & Edward return having shed the extra weigh & are ready for what the summer holds. Will the pressure of new-found popularity be too much for them to take, or will love win out? Written for Camp Twilight Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8684 Read Count: 432
[Report This] Published: 30 Aug 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  It was a fun little one to write! Thanks for the love.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well, it started off tense, but i'm so glad Esme was ok with it, and Carlisle looks like he'll come around soon. Em and Rose and the rest of the town are going to be a tougher nut to crack though

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yay! they made up......but of course they still be overprotective....:)

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Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

great beginning!, seems like the 2 of them are having certain feelings they can't explain

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Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I cannot wait for his reaction on the outfit! And then plus Jacob will be after her.....

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Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Jeez, how did they even know they were there? I'm glad they got her away from Jacob (sorry I'm team Edward all the way, I don't like Jacob in any fic, unless he's gay or already in love with someone else, then he's Bella's best bud and so hilariously funny and NO threat to the B & E connection) Emmett should remember Jacob too right?

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

smart girl Bella!, i knew Tanya was lying too!

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh boy....very awkward break indeed.....i guess she's hurt since he says it was a mistake

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

that was very sweet. I'm glad they are on the same page now

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

the neclace sounds so pretty :) i wanna know what keepsakes he has in there too...lol

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

whew....getting risky.....can't wait to see how they do once they get back to school

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

whew! things are heating up, why do i think Emmett will be the one to find out 1st (or catch them 1st)

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Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

amazing opportunity, i'm glad she had a positive spin on it and sold him on the idea

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

uh oh!....potentially caught??? Gianna better back off, fake wench! i wonder when Em finds out if he'll be supportive or will this cause a huge rift in their relationship

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

please don't let Em be mad.....i just don't know about his parents though...that might be the tougher sell

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh, crap! what the hell, did he hear them thru the door!? *GLUP*!

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well then, after that its not looking good at all for when they get home :(

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

that was an awesome speech Edward made, hope it gave Em a lot to think about. i'm so nervous about the party.....

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope that is the worst they will endure. Bravo Em for defending them!

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh I'm so glad Em is slowly coming to terms with this. It stressful enough for them without have your own family givin you grief

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

money worth spending....lol Em...just don't even question where they were

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

i'm proud of her standing up for their relationship. she's just gotta hold strong and weather thru this

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

it would kill them to be apart, but let's see how the discussion goes......

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

good! i knew they'd make it work!!!

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Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

awesome ending! wrapped up very nicely :) as always...lol. loved this! Good Luck with 'Induction'!!!!!!

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3853
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ah ha! so he does feel the same and for a while now too! this just keeps getting better and better

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

now you just have to declare it fully to each other ....then you can deal with your family....

Summary:

Winter, 1693. The hysteria of Salem has reached the town of Carlisle, MA, where a group of magistrates including Edward Masen are sent to investigate claims of witchcraft. Will they find the truth & save those who are innocent? FGB o/s Javamomma0921.

 

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This banner was created for me by Rosalynn as a part of my FGB bid on her awesome banner skills.

 

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This is the banner I created for the story myself.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17336 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered

wow, awesome story! absolutely loved it. so sad and tragic what happened to Bella and the others, such a shame that people were like that, so judgmental and just plain old liars just to inflict some kind of revenge. but sad to say, it's still like that now, yeah we have freedom of religion and speech and all that, but you still see and hear people being persecuted or targeted because of it. thank you for this, truly enjoyable

Author's Response:

I'm so gald you enjoyed it! Writing this, my primary goal was to make my bidder happy and write something other people would enjoy, so to get the response I have has been amaing!  I worked hard to write about the time acurately and show how as much things change, unfortunately, they always stay the same.  Andd thanks for finding me on twitter!  I can't wait to chat with you more over there!

Summary:

Social reject Bella Swan finds her whole life changing before her eyes after her first encounter with the cute boy at the Concrete Canal. Three years later, she shows her uppity classmates that she's so much more than they ever thought possible.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 29.

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I actually won Kharizzmatic's Pick in the A Picture Says It All Contest! I'm so honored and excited. This was my prize, make my Khar herself!
Someday Prize Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7251 Read Count: 4258
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Someday

great story!, love strong Bella!

Summary:

Alice and Bella are on the trip of a lifetime, spending Halloween in one of the most haunted cities in the world brings scares, laughs and much more than either of them ever expected.

One shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great one shot! very cute and sweet!

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

no you can't end it there!!!! i'm so happy he's found the one and vice versa~!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Carlisle and Esme are too funny....lol! can't wait to see how Charlie will react

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 15151
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Breaking

Great story! Edward is so broken, it's breaking my heart, Tanya is so not worth this depression he's in.

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Witnessing Defeat

I wish she would just up to Edward and hug him, but that's just wishful thinking... She's in to a shock with learning all the drama about the Tanya situation

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

it's good for him to get it off his chest and check in with the family

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ugh! James is giving me the creeps! Evil freak of nature! Edward is gonna be keeping an extra close eye on Bella now.

Author's Response:

James is beyond evil ;), love writing him though. Twisted I know.  Edward's protective streak will definitely hit Defcon 1.  Thanks for reading and update will be up within the week. 

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10.5

these poor guys have to deal with so much stress their 1st day :( but i'm glad they are all there to support each other.

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

aww, Edward, come on, don't be like that. how are you gonna protect her if you're trying to stay away from her?????

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Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11.5

jeez, what did Edward do back then???? please tell me the baby will not be Edwards!!!

Author's Response:

I wish I could say for sure, *LOL*, but there a few surprises coming up in the next few chapters.  I'm glad you're staying with me, I see I have a little following of faithful readers. :)  

What I CAN tell you is Edward was NOT as bad as James, but he was a little baddie back then.  But he will lay it all out there for his family and friends soon.  He's not all bad,but he's not all good too ;) - but that is the best kind of Edward!!

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 - Dealing with the past!

i hope once he explains she'll be more receptive to their help

Author's Response:

We'll see...she's still angry.  She knows deep down that Edward is not to blame, but if it wasn't for the Cullens, Bella might have been able to deal with James differently, maybe not.  Her knowing the Cullens has jumped the angst a little.  Just stay tuned...it's going to get good!!

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Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15 - Facing the Music - Part I

are they only fighting the connection until this James issue is over????

Author's Response:

Bella is fighting it for a couple of reasons, yes, James is ONE of them.  Edward is fighting, and losing at this point, but he's still fighting because of the crap he went through with Tanya.  He feels he will only get hurt again if he allows himself to get involved with someone.  But he's starting to feel comfortable with Bella, for a few different reasons.  It will all work out...it's just going to take a little bit of time,and James and Tanya out of the way.  Stay tuned!

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13 - Memories are best left in the past!

Wow, James is really bad.....I hope Bella will be ok . Can't wait for Emmett and Edwards talk

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, there's so much in store for the gang, stay tuned!

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Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 - How do you help one who is in hell?

omg, i want to rip off his head off too! i wonder how his family will take the news....

Author's Response: U too! LOL! There are things still to come, stay tuned!

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Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - Facing the Music - Part II

love this chapter! i'm so glad he finally got everything out. and they kissed...YAY! so happy for them :) can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

*giggle*  Thanks...I'm still debating whether the next chapter is going to be in EPOV or BPOV...either way, it's going to fun!!

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Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17-Baby?What do you mean baby?

yikes! Edward can't catch a break! i really hope he is not the father. to have to be tied to that skank for 18 years, ugh! hasn't he suffered enough!?

Author's Response:

LOL....I really love my readers...."I hope Edward's not the father" is like the first sentence in each of the reviews....thank you for reading and sticking with me for this long....stay tuned, there is so much still to come. 

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 - Facing Reality Head On

I think she's a lot stronger than Edward thinks she is...hell, she might be hiding a lioness inside that will bust out when her 'mate' is threatened! ;) missed you!!!

Author's Response:

Awww, thank you hun. I've missed my followers as well. It's been a hectic year, but hopefully I can finish this story up within this year. As far as Bella goes, heehee, he has no idea what Bella is capable of.

I'm so glad you stuck by me. I'm hoping to have another update in a couple weeks, maybe. There is so much more in store for our gang!!

thank you again!! 

The Meadow by EternallyCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Post Twilight/Pre New Moon AU - Bella and Edward are enjoying a hike up to their meadow until they are caught up in the rain. Rated NC17 for LEMONS. 

 

Written as a gift for my gorgeous friend and fellow author Evieeden

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7603 Read Count: 488
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great one shot.....see i knew Edward had amazing control way before Isle Esme....lol

Summary:

Edward didn't believe Bella's reasons for going through with their wedding plans so easily. Can Bella convince him that waiting to do things properly is what she really wants? BPOV, One-shot, Written for the Scene Stealers Contest-2010.  Winner Overall Judges' Choice & Individual Judge's Choice- SydneyAlice.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8214 Read Count: 466
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Nov 2010
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Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Believe You

great job!too bad it really didn't work out like that in the book...lol

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great ending! but i don't want it to be over...*sniff* i'm gonna miss this!

Author's Response:

Wow, what a nice thing to say! Thanks for sticking with me and ATH, I know you've been with me from the start!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

loving this!, so glad i took the rec! so sad he'll leave in 3 weeks :(

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm curious, who rec'd this to you? Edward leaving is always sad..

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

Actually I got I'd off the TWCS blog that I subscribe to.

Author's Response:

Oh. okay, thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

awww, see it's sweet their starting as friends....with a dash of UST...lol

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

aaaannnnndd.....cue the misunderstanding.......lovely, Bella's gonna be all standoffish now

Author's Response: Was it that predictable?? Yes, it probably was. lol!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

awww, poor innocent Edward!

Author's Response:

Ha! I agree. Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

thank god for Alice.....meddeling little thing, but she's so good at what she does...lol

Author's Response:

Gotta love Alice! Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay! They're dating! How are they gonna be away from each other for 4 months, they're just starting out, that'll be so hard

Author's Response:

Hmm, guess you'll have to stay tuned...lol! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

so sad....she'll be a mess for a while....

Author's Response:

Thank you for R/R. Yes, it will be tough on them both.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

jeez, talk about stressing out! Edward can't concentrate over there and Bella's freaking out over here. please let him come home soon

Author's Response:

I know, it's crazy, huh? I think about bringing him home.. Thank you so much !

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG, OMG, OMG!!! did he stab her in the leg??? or inject her with something???? please let her be ok! Edward is gonna go ballistic, nobody will be able to hold him back....

Author's Response:

LMAO-you crack me up! I know you're gonna find out, so I'll just say thanks for reading and leaving me a review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

whew! thank god she's ok! lol...he's gonna carry her around now and not let her lift a finger. Mike's going straight to jail right?

Author's Response:

Mike should be in the hospital for a while-dog bites can be serious!! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

damnit, where the hell is Charlie?? please let him be ok

Author's Response:

Charlie is down by the boat!! lol  See you next week!  :)  Thanks for R&R.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

awww, YAY! great ending! Have a wonderful holiday!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for all the support.! Happy Holidays!

Summary:

ENTRY FOR THE CHERRY EXCHANGE 2010 CONTEST!

 

How far would you go to prove your love? How pure would you stay, just to have that one night? 3 years & a country may have separated them, but both kept the one thing that the other wanted most. E/B.

 

When virtue is the only thing of value.

 

Rated M for language and lemons.

Kick-ass banner by miss FrozenSoldier :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14798 Read Count: 735
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Believe The Hype...

Great job on this! absolutely loved it! good luck in the contest!

Is This For Real by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Bella’s always had a deep love of undiscovered talent, so what happens when the newest artist she finds touches her heart in a way she never imagined.  Winner of 2nd Place in the Public Vote in the "Killing Me Softly With His Song" Anon One-Shot Contest

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Winning banner made by Robs Button Babe

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5555 Read Count: 740
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 01 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Is This For Real

great job! loved it!, very sweet! CONGRATS ON 2ND PLACE!

Author's Response:

thanks so much! It was a great one to write and I was surprised when i got 2nd...I never do well in those types of contests.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

i'm so glad Charlie know the truth and he didn't chastise her for it. wonder how Edward will react to the kiss?

Author's Response:

next Chapter will be in EPov maybe as an outake type chapter. Bella needed one good parent in this story and Charlie is it

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

Great story!, so glad i took the rec! can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

ty for the review... next chapter should be up on 12/12

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

uh oh, looks like the whole story is about to come out.....I hope Jake put him in the hospital for good

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

wow, go Bella, a girl that knows what she wants :)

Author's Response:

shes trying to grt past everything and be assertive:) ty

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

OMG! Renee is just sick and hateful! i can't believe she wrote that to her own daughter.....Bella's better off without her

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

Bravo! Charlie, so glad he had that unworthy piece of crap arrested. So sad about Victoria's baby, I hope she's ok or at least will be...

Author's Response:

Victoria will grieve, and yes Charlie  was awesome:)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on

oh damn, he just made me melt....lol. guess now she's 18, he can pursue her :) yay

Author's Response:

:) so glad to read this review.. im trying to get better writing one on one intereactions. and yes 18 and legal:)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

it's gotta be those hormones right, cause she's just way too bitchy (espically to Edward, who loves her) for a simple overheard phone call to cause that kind of reaction. she's gonna have some MAJOR aploigizing to do. I think Charlie had something to do James death or Maybe Jacob had one of his boys do it?

Author's Response:

I agree... she has got some hormones a going.  and need to say sorry to edward. thankyou for your review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

i understand the general idea f what Edward is trying to do, but does he have to be so cold about it? :( so, wow...Mr. Newton did it?!?!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

are Renee and Michelle out of their freaking minds!? i hope Edward had them banned for life from the child

Author's Response:

no question about it, edward would never let them near his child:)