Reviews by mountainlion718
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

Yeah; but he still avoids Bella, he says he gets to keep a piece of her, but he still acts all professional and cold to her

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

ugh! Renee is coming back! better get the pitchforks out......

Author's Response:

i agree.. but Renee was never just gonna walk away... at least i warned ya

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

damn, Rose is a little pitbull...lol. Wonder how Charlie is gonna take the news.....

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength

so now Renee is gone for good...right? so glad the judge sided with Edward

Author's Response:

i dont for see  any trouble from her anytime soon, thankyou for your review

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart

ugh! i would hate to have to make that decision.....

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Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

A cheap whore?! Please tell me no!!! And yes he's a dead man when Charlie finds out. Why is Mr Newton looking for Bella.....

Author's Response:

I hate leaving yall with cliffy's. next chapter will be up soon.. thankyou for reviewing

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

lucky they found her! love the name :)

Author's Response: aww thank you:)

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Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

glad she did well during her surgery! Esme and Charlie eh? :) yay B & E are getting married

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Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 full circle

great ending! so glad they are all happy

Long December by JustJo94 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Long December

While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH

This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 704
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)

This was beautiful, thank you so much for writing it. Wonderful job!

Summary:

This was written as part of a group project for the fanfiction.net countdown to halloween.

Bella and Edward spend halloween with Edward's family but a walk through a graveyard ends in tragedy for the young couple.

Rated for language and lemons.

Banner to follow.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6278 Read Count: 174
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please tell me Edward's ok?? Holy what a cliffy!

Author's Response:

Who knows!! That's up to the reader to decide but I hope you enjoyed the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.

After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Finding Home

loved it! i'm so glad she stayed! and Em too.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

So Far Away by jacky-cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

When Bella's truck breaks down, she needs a ride to her father's annual BBQ. Good thing a bronze haired Adonis is headed that way too.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5410 Read Count: 568
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2010 Updated: 17 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good job, will you continue? It's gonna be sad when they have to leave to go back to their homes

Summary:

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After James phones Bella and tells her that he has her mother, Bella realizes just how futile it would be to go to him alone and confesses the true identity of the caller to Alice. Edward takes Bella far away, to a remote cabin... 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8100 Read Count: 654
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn, couldn't is really have gone like that....lol
I wish! Awesome job on this! I hope you continue it!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!  I've actually have been thinking of continuing it - I had a really great idea pop into my head in the middle of the night awhile ago, and I'm toying with it right now.  So, keep an eye out!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:D Happy, Happy, HAPPY!!!! I wish Edward would have gotten custody of Millie...maybe later....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it! Can't wait to read more. Bella's thoughts on Jacob & Nessie are hilarious.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Millie is too sweet, i was tearing up from her words.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Everwood sounds so beautiful....(i wanna go there ;) i can't believe Jacob treats his kids like that, why bother taking them if you're gonna ignore them???

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i'm so glad she got those kids outta there. she's gonna push him away tomorrow, isn't she....:(

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i sure hope that's a premonition...:) yay! they're gonna give it a try! Happy holidays!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:D it's gonna be a lot of work, but since everyone seems to be on board and postive about it, it should go smoothly

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh damn, where are my tissues! *sniff* that was beautiful and so emotional.....I hope you have a wonderful New Year!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great ending, wow! 5 kids...busy household! beautiful story (as usual...lol) Have a wonderful NEW YEAR!!!

From Afar by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Edward is a reclusive College freshman. He holds back from making contact with the girl he believes could be his one true love because he doesn't think he's worthy of her affections. Fate intervenes, and they become friends during a biology class. Will he have the courage to tell her how he really feels or will he be stuck with admiring her from afar?

 

Banner made by me :)

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12859 Read Count: 608
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Love was right before my eyes

loved it, loved it, loved it!!! :) great job! sweet how they were crushing on each other all that time

Sitting on Santa's Lap by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Bella is working as a Santa's helper...see what happens when a new Santa arrives... holiday citrus and a little fun!  ExB


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3235 Read Count: 392
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very cute!!!

Summary:

 

 

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"I think you liked me touching you in front of your ex, didn't you?" E & B are alone for New Year's ... or not. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon, Lemon writing exercise.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2754 Read Count: 2290
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

whew! hot one shot! good job :)

Summary:

 

Edward Cullen is a musician who's been away from the town of Forks for over 10 years. When he returns, he runs into an ex-lover, Bella Swan, who he spends an evening catching up- will he try to rekindle the flame? Inspired by Dan Fogelberg's 80's hit "Same Old Lang Syne" AH – Rated M


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3037 Read Count: 402
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww, i love that song, but it's so sad :( good job on this!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!  It is a very sad song but I couldn't help but write it LOL  Glutton for punishment maybe? ;-P

 

Thanks for the review! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!!!! :) so sweet! Merry Christmas!

Ready by JustxxWicked Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella, a flight attendant, spends her flight to Italy thinking about her best friend's older brother. AH/ONESHOT

*AMAZING banner by mehek18!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5587 Read Count: 606
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 29 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

nice one shot!

Forbidden Muse by mizzdee Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella is a young artist getting ready for her first solo show but she's lost her vision. When she meets the owner of the pizza shop across the street, he becomes her inspiration as her attraction to him changes the look and feel of her paintings.

This is my entry in the Pick a Pic Challenge.  The story was inspired by banner #27. I would love to put it here but I don't feel right using it without permission.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9163 Read Count: 243
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this!!! Great job..... I was wondering how'd he'd explain the ring.....

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I know there are some men that will lie when they get caught with a ring on and I wanted her uncertainty to come across when he told her he wasn't married.  She didn't believe him at first but once he got to tell her his side of things, they were going to be okay.

Thanks for the review. Much love - D

Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. One moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it will stop, no one knows. AU/AH/OCC.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51782 Read Count: 10375
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: For All

great story, lots of ups and downs but HEA wins out! and Jacob is in jail... PERFECT! :)

Summary:

PostSecret Prompt Used: Everyone who knew me before 9/11 thinks I'm dead. 3rd Place Winner PostSecret Prompt Contest! SENSITIVE MATERIAL INCLUDED! PLEASE BE WARNED!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great job, very sad, congrats on 3rd place. I didn't think i'd be able to read it but i wanted to try. ( i knew 2 people who died in the towers that day)

Author's Response:

I am very sorry for your loss. My beta also sends her condolences. I am honored that you tried to read the story, knowing that it could bring back the painful memories. *Virtual Hugs* Thank you for your time and your review. You are amazing.

The Car Wash by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Picture inspired one shot for now. But how knows. An early morning naked car wash could brighten anyones day but can it change your future? Mature theme. M for a reason. Picture inside.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9000 Read Count: 8656
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whew, hot! Where can I find that kind of car wash....lol

It's You by duhitsangie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

A Locket, A Picture, A Dream.. What if someone you thought didn't exist came into your life when you had given up? B and E are 2 college kids in LA who meet and feel like they've always known each other, is it more than just a feeling? Fluff/Humor/LemonsBanner by Mehek18

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150715 Read Count: 25531
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:) i like this one too! good beginning, so glad i went fic diving today!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love it! he's so sweet, cant wait till they talk!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i'm so happ for them! and thank goodness Jake is gay!!...lol no competition!

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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Renee is an evil mother....lol!

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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WHEW!~ getting steamy in here.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

the trip to Forks should be fun....i hope they never have to deal with Renee face to face

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What did he do with the original picture????

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Omg! I hope she will reveal the secret!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:) yay! that's awesome!!! that Tanya is a piece of .....work.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jasper gonna flip when he finds out about his mom! all this time they were connected in so many ways....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

yes! Loved the showdown with Renee! so glad Irina punched her! looking forward to Vegas!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

cute costumes. glad Charlie and Irina got married, wait till Renee finds out!...lol,

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

awww! that was beautiful!!! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

yikes!, 1st fight, Renee causes problems everywhere and shes delousional!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So excited for the wedding!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I wonder how long it will take????? I wish them luck.....

Summary:

Edward lives in the world of beautiful people as a modeling agent, but a brief encounter at a poetry slam has him thinking about a real woman.  Will his poetry skills be enough to win her? FGB piece for azucena, M for plenty of reasons.

Below is the amazing banner by Rosalynn

RubyLips


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10598 Read Count: 1187
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ruby Lips & Words of Want

loved it! awesome job on the poems....so hot :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

ugh! i really hope Officer Black had nothing to do with those vultures showing up!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i hope Edward got alot of answers out of Billy. wonder how this will affect him and his future

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awww!, yay for Edward!.. i really hope it's not some crazy scary circus when people start finding out about him

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

guess the landlord doesn't think Edward will be around tomorrow.....

Author's Response:

Possibly....

 

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

omg, i'm gonna cry......that just broke my heart.......

Author's Response:

I know, I'm sorry.

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story, Edward is very sweet, but if Bella leaves i see Edward following her to camp as well

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward must be so miserable :(

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Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awwww....:( they all miss her...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh no! he was caught :( they're gonna put him in a hospital and run tests on him!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

shes not going to be able to leave him, he'll just get into more trouble looking for her

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh no, Alice is such a pain!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i hope none of her "friends" come to ruin her peace with him

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

but shes going to let him go?????

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

so she's gonna stay????? :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

how'd Leah get hurt??? no hunters right?

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

he remembered! what triggered it???? after all this time.....

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews. I loved reading them all.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

that's perfect for her! aww, and Rose and Emmett :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh yes! perfect! i hope it works out!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i hope Rose will be cool with what she just saw.......

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh crap, he killed the chickens didn't he?????

Author's Response:

Not telling.

 

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

he's going to be so excited, i hope the wolves will be too

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

great ending! so happy for them!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

even savage Edward is cute with his possessiveness

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Futuretake- The Proposal

where they met?! great idea!!! do you thin the wolves will be watching nearby?

Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

great ending! was that Leah's way of saying goodbye? Renee was a trip ...lol

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes it was part about Leah saying goodbye and part about Edward realizing his place completely.

Summary:

Isabella Swan is a flight attendant running late for work; she crashes into a handsome stranger and her future. She what happens when love is found on a flight bound to LA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3637 Read Count: 686
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great one shot! what a way to meet your soul-mate :)

Hesitate by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Edward and Bella had their future planned out, but uncontrollable events set their lives on different paths than they had planned. Bad decisions and reckless behavior changed Edward's life forever. Can Bella see the man he once was when they meet again? Foxy Fics contribution.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7308 Read Count: 513
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2011 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hesitate

great job! loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!! :)

Hide and Seek by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A day of play for some not so childish vampires. E X B and an afternoon of adult fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 587 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2011 Updated: 20 Apr 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:) good job! fun and easy

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

is Emmett ok? Jimmy, Jacob or Carla....maybe all 3, Edward is gonna end up crawling inside Bella......

Author's Response:

I can't answer any of that...but the answers ARE coming, after the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

he's not redeemed until he gives a better explanation...lol

Author's Response:

Maybe he will in the next posting? lol Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

:( why did he act like that! aww, poor Bella!

Author's Response:

Edward had closed himself off the past few years-he felt blindsided when he saw Bella and just kind of freaked out. It was a crappy thing to do, though, huh?  Thanks for reading & leaving me your thoughts!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good beginning! what made Edward leave like that.....

Author's Response:

Guilt, grief..but stick with me, it'll work out! Thank you for reading!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

omg, she gonna be ecstatic!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it is kind of cool, isn't it? lol Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

ouch! damn Jazz is blunt but such a smart man.....

Author's Response:

Yeah, Jasper tells it like it is! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

love Rose for putting her in her place! hmmmm was Carla a set up for Edward to freak him out????

Author's Response:

Someone needed to smack her, huh? Carla's role in all this will be revealed soon! Thanks for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So sweet ! I'm glad they expressed their feelings

Author's Response:

Happy you liked it. I wanted to make sure that everyone could see that they really had been 'holding out' for each other. Even if they didnt know it, so the ILY's seemed real. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Can't wait for Edward to go talk to Dan!!

Author's Response:

That will be interesting...I wonder what you hope will happen...? I am glad you like this and came back for more...(i do remeber you from ATH & CRR!)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Whew! Hot pool, hot dance, steamy car sex! :)

Author's Response:

Yeah....it was Hot  LOL  Glad you liked. Thanks again for reading  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Uh oh, hope she's not too mad, I like protective possesiveward!...lol!

Author's Response:

I know, right?? PPE is all kinds of hotness.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

ok, Renee, say what you gotta say and GET OUT! Bella better not back down from her!

Author's Response:

LOL Yes ma'am! I hope I dont disappoint you!  THanks!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Good for Bella by throwing her out, that way her mom can see that she's not gonna take her crap anymore. Can't wait for the tats, they're gonna be hot!!!

Author's Response:

Just wait...Renee isn't gone  lol  I hope the tat sessions live up to your expectations!! Thanks for reading/reviewing  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

was it Renee is the car behind them...or Jacob? Edward better keep an eye out......

Author's Response:

Good guesses, but you know I am not gonna tell you... :)  Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Bella was on a roll! Good, she needs to be feisty to get her point across, I hope Renee won't pull anything else....

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked that scene. As for Renee still being a problem.....?  Can't say for sure right now. Thanks for reading/reviewing!! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

The dinner cruise was so romantic!!!!! I don't think we've seen the last of Renee.....

Author's Response:

Thank you-glad you liked it! And about Renee, well...you didn't think I would actually spill anything did you?  lol  Thanks for reading-love hearing your thoughts!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

How devious are they gonna be....lol. Revenge will be sweet

Author's Response:

LOL  Well, I will tell you this...it isnt really very devious, but it is pretty freaking funny-least I thought so. Thank you for reading/reviewing, you know I love to hear from you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

omg, the prank.... i totally would have thrown water on all of them too!....lol. I'm so glad Bella got thru to Edward when he freaked, he can't go back to that dark place, he has to fight this

Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, I could just see Alice running in and doing that to poor Jasper! Not many picked up on that...how Bella was able to reach Edward...it's my favorite part of that chapter. :) Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That creepy guy must have done it, maybe Renee is involved.....

Author's Response:

Umm...maybe?  Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

damn, i really want to know what's up his sleeve!

Author's Response:

You're about to find out...hope you like it! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

whew......there should be NO doubts about how much they care for each other ;)

Author's Response:

You'd think, huh? Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Somebody took those earrings, right? Her room was a mess cause someone ransacked it

Author's Response:

You are correct!! (but who??)  :) Thanks so much, Hun!