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Night Train by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's been doing pretty well after getting through that rough patch. Moved across the country, owns her little house, has a pretty good job, and discovered a fascination with watching trains. Life was good, though a little dull. She should have realized the supernatural was never far behind. Written for the 2016 BiT Awards at BetterinTexasFiction. Collaborator: rissbenzo. Peter/Bella

Title: Night Train

Author: GeezerWench  

Characters / Pairing: Bella / Peter 

Genre: romance, action, drama, humor  

Rating: MA / NC-17

Beta/Pre-Reader: none 

Banner by: GeezerWench 

Words: n/a

Prompt/inspiration: rissbenzo

Work in Progress

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.

A/N: With much prompting and encouragement from rissbenzo, I started writing. Entered the first chapter in the Better in Texas Fiction 2016 BiT Awards.

Charlie Hunnam as Peter Whitlock

Kristen Stewart as Bella Swan

Billy Burke as Charlie Swan


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23891 Read Count: 6244
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2016 Updated: 28 Mar 2017
Reviewer: cnor9602 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Night Train Chapter 1

I love a good Peter/Bella story. Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: cnor9602 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Night Train Chapter 3

I really like your Peter. He is witty without being condescending 



Author's Response:

Thanks. He had no personality in the books, and the wrong guy was chosen to play him in the movies. I like the way he's developed in the fandom. So much better! I base mine on that and what I'd like to see.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cnor9602 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Night Train Chapter 9

This story is remarkable in that Bella is reacting with emotional depth and conflicting feelings. I really hope you finish it. I would love to watch it develop 



Author's Response:

I certainly hope to get back to it soon. One thing after another around here. But thank you for reading and taking time to review.