Reviews by 2mpix
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift, helping those in need. He hides behind his opinions, seeking closure, barely living. When their worlds collide, can they help each other? A story of loss, love, and betryal with a supernatual twist.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43076 Read Count: 10308
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jul 2014
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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Dancing in the Light

Oh my this needed a tissue warning! Very few stories can bring tears to my eyes.  This one brought lots from just this chapter. 

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Now That She's Gone

CRAP! Really!

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Some Answers

No matter what he needed to see her.

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Never Forget

Now the two of them can move into their future too!

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Drowning

Finally the wicked witch is dead

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: The Denver Paranormal Society

This is not good hopefully something changes Edward's outlook and is Bella already pregnant?

Famous by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Swan is one of the most famous celebrities in the world….But she’s hiding an even bigger secret.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8529 Read Count: 11588
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 02 Jun 2014
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Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He totally told his family where to stick it!

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Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so cute!  A nice surprise him being the Prince!

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Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

If they ever find out they are married I'm sure rose will poop her pants!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146715
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Where I Belong

I'm so glad she is home!!! I love the shit storm Edward promised Carlisle!  I'm also glad he didn't tell him about Aro's offer.  



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. So, Bella's back but they have a few things to hash out before things can go back to normal. And hopefully Carlisle got the message and will leave them alone now. Next chapter, we'll learn a bit about Edward's family. See you then.

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose

Such a crazy boy that Emmett is!  



Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review. Yeah, it's crazy but this is fiction and shouldn't be taken too seriously ;). See you next chapter. It's going to end with a bang!

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Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements

So glad they are together in the same apt.  Edward turned on the extra smooshie sweetness to get her to stay.  



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Edward works hard to make himself indispensable. Let's see if it works ;). See you next chapter.

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The Prodigal Mother

Esme surprised me.  I'm glad Edward came home & caught her there.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so sorry for the delay in replying, but my family didn't leave me much time to go online during our vacay. Anyway, I'm back and here it goes ;). Yeah, it was good they got to talk. And he'll try to forgive her. See you Monday.

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Invasion

I'm so glad they snuggled!  I hope Bella wakes up needing him in the night or can't sleep until he comes to bed.  



Author's Response: Sadly, she won't call him back but he's going to be bakc as a constant fixture in her bed soon.

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Truth and Nothing But the Truth

I'm finally going to be able to catch up on this story!  =D



Author's Response: Great. I've been missing you ;).

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Labor Day

I wonder if he is asking about breast feeding? You did a great job describing the birth. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not a fan of making each birth sound like either a walk in the park or an almost tragedy. I prefer to write it as it is ;).

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - We Are Family

I'm excited about your Rec's this week.  I haven't heard of either of these.  In the past I have read almost all of what you have suggested & are completely correct on how good they are so I'm looking forward to these two.  I'm figuring it's Renee at the door & that's why Bella is asking about the bed bc Renee is staying over.  Hopefully this will have them snuggling & they will get used to it. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I hope you'll like these recs as much as the others. I love each one of them.

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Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

I really really really hope they at least kiss before leaving Washington.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Next chapter will start in Chicago again, so, sorry, no kiss in Washington :(. See you Monday with the update.

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Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors

It is very funny imagining Renee hanging all over Edward acting like a cougar.  I was hoping Renee would put them in the same room.  



Author's Response: Sorry, I just found this review again today. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. I liked the image of Renée all over Edward too. And they just needed to sleep in the same bed ;). CU

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Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Fever

Beyond time sounds really good! I can't believe they finally did it again! Then to put the whip on top Edward says I love you!  Woo hoo! I'm so excited for the next chapter!

i have a few recs for you... 

WIP: The Faceless Man by Sande this story is only on TWCS

This writer is really young but her writing is so captivating! I love anything she writes!!

Summary: 

From a most dramatic encounter unfolds a story between a man, whose identity is unknown to most, and a woman, whose identity is perfectly ordinary. Their attraction is instant, but forbidden by his secret life. If he chooses her, her life can land at serious risk. As a spy, he has no time for love. But he will soon learn the true power of such a force, and how merciless its hold is.

WIP: If This, Then by Bled Dry

this story has the best & worst teenage angst!

SUMMARY:

If you have chemistry, you only need one other thing: timing. But timing is a bitch.

 

 

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Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Surrender

I bet it's Alice's wedding. I wasn't sure if you were planning on getting her pregnant really quick again. It made me laugh.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Nope, no second pregnancy, yet ;). But I'm sure you know that by now.

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Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells

I'm so glad esme got a divorce too!



Author's Response: Thanks for another review. Yeah, Esme got her divorce, although it cost her a lot, but she didn't mind ;).

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Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

The epi was absolutely PERFECT!  It really was such a joyful ending!  I won't be able to forget this Edward & Bella 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the epi. It was giving me a very hard time writing it. I won't be able to forget those two either. For us writers, the stories are like our babies and we have a hard time letting them grow up and leave eventually. But I had a new little "baby". It's called Tie the Knot and posted yesterday. I'd love to hear from you again.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just put the story into my favorites so I'll be notified on July 1st with the update.  I look forward to seeing where you take this story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're intrigued. The story will be an advanture for me too since I haven't planned it out completely yet. We'll see how it turns out ;). See you in July.

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Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

Somehow I was missing out and hadn't read this first chapter.  This already has put a smile on my face!  You always know how to rope us in from the very beginning!  The best thing about being behind on reading chapter one is that chapter two is already waiting for me! 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found the story after all, and I'm happy you like it. There's a lot more to com.

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Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

No it isn't ok for him to move on with blind date & one night stands so I thank you in advance for us not having to read it.  ;)  I love this Edward already.  This Edward & Bella seem perfect for each other!  



Author's Response: I promise he won't really move on. It's more like he's trying to keep himself entertained instead of moping around pining after someone he may never see again. And he won't hook up with anyone. He's a serious guy and although he happened to have a few one night stands, it's definitely not what he's after. He's only thinking about taking a girl out to dinner. Hookups is what Emmett calls them. He'll tell you all about it in his next pov. And there isn't really anything to tell ;), you'll see. But next up, we'll be in Bella's head again. See you there.

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

I loved the comment "he isn't the brightest candle on the cake."  I'm going to be using tht comment.  

Riley is such a selfish douche bag!  Keeping her on the side for a year while he was away screwing someone else. 

I'm thinking especially after your sneak peek that Edward probably freaks out at first but then excepts it and probably has some anxiety about his dad knowing but also will enjoy pissing his dad off.  I'm also guessing that his dad insists on a paternity test. 


 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It's a German saying but I thought I could just translate it and use it because it's self-explanatory. Yeah, Riley's an ass but I want to believe that he really loved Bella once. So, you think Edward will freak and then enjoy pissing off his dad. Well, one thing's for sure, Carlisle will be pissed. But I'm not sure Edward will enjoy going against him. We'll see eventually how it'll all play out. See you next chapter.

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Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

Yes that went so much better than I imagined!  When Carlisle freaks out & is a complete jerk, my guess is Bella is going to be a good support system for Edward.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Carlisle won't be happy, that's for sure. But will he just be grumpy or will be pose a real problem? We'll see eventually. Until next chapter.

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

I was so hoping she would invite him to sleep in the bed with her.  I think she needs to have a nightmare so he can cuddle her ;). I LOVED the gifts he got her.  The Pen was an excellent idea!  



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Great idea about the nightmare. Maybe I'll use it ;). See you next chapter.

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Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Finally a kiss but not just a simple kiss it was HOT & steamy! Thank you!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm happy you liked their kiss. It's a shame Bella cut it so short :(. Next chapter, we'll finally meet Esme. See you Monday.

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Oh she is becoming mushy.  I love it!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bella will eventually cave in, but not yet. See you Monday.

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Date: 21 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Carlisle was worse than I imagined.  Tht pizza sounds disgusting!!  The commercial was pretty close to one we had a few years ago but it was with a dad & his daughter.  



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm still surprised by the reactions to the pizza. I know that the combination is weird, but many readers commented that tuna itself was disgusting on a pizza and not even available in their areas. That's so strange because in Germany, it's one of the most popular pizza toppings and I had it several times at Pizza Hut in London and Scotland as well. Interesting how national tastes seem to vary. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

It's her apartment building.  That will make Edward happy! I'm glad he didn't go on a real date.  

The next time I'm at Pizza Hut I'm going to request tuna and see what they say.  I live in Florida near Disney & we have tons of tourists around here so I'm interested to see if they get tuna requested a lot..... I'll let you know.  ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Let me know how your tuna experience turns out, lol. See you Monday with the answer to the apartment question ;).

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Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

I'm so happy happy happy that she is moving in officially!  Yes it is fine to live off his inheritance.  It's not like she doesn't work. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you think it's okay to live off his money, although Bella will never feel that way. They'll find a way to compromise, though. See you next chapter.

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Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I'm so glad Edward voiced that he wants to do Lamaze & did both wills!  I also love how Bella keeps getting caught checking him out & vice versa! I'm looking forward to their Lamaze dates! There will be some intimate touching that they both can't get away from & I'm hoping Bella won't be able to stop herself from letting it go further! ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lamaze classes will start soon, but I'm not yet sure how much of that will be part of the story. See you Monday with the update.

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - When It Rains, It Pours

I'm guessing the sneak peak is from Emmett!  I hope Edward lays a lustful kiss on Bella right in front of Riley!  He really is a dick!  He has a pregnant girlfriend & still is concerned about his ex.  Tory needs to get him a couple of junk punches! I loved that Bella called her a whore in one breath & then says no offense tory.  That was hillarious! 

I also loved that Edward got possessive at Lamaze. Some lustful thoughts & touches could come from them being so close.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You think the cynical comment is from Emmett? Poor guy if he's that disenchanted at that young age. Poor Tori is the real loser in this whole mess. She's tied to a cheating asshole for life. See you next chapter with the Christmas festivities.

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Merry Effing Christmas

I'm so glad Edward finally had some serious words with his dad.  I don't think it is over with the dad.  He is a pompous asshat! I was hoping after the piano and Edward having a beer, we would get a kiss but falling asleep together on the couch comes in a close 2nd place!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Edward finally manned up, but will that be enough? We'll see tomorrow ;).

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

I hope the teaser is Edward exploding on Carlisle.  Thank u for telling us it isn't as bad as we think.  I needed that encouragement!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I know that things seem bad right now, but you can be assured, a lot will be cleared up next chapter and by the end, it'll all be better. See you next chapter.

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26179
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Fantastic first lemon!

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nothing like throwing her a curve ball!  I'm very happy he did!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I found another chapter on ff.  I'm heading there to get it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well once you popped your first lemon you really went for it with your second one and knocked it out of the park! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Your writing is so captivating! 

End of Innocence by pappy73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

They say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. Being an Italian Godfather will not stop a Sicilian Principessa from murdering him, it will only make her more determined. We love hard and fight harder that's just who we are, but when faced with the largest obstacle of our life, can we come out of it togther or will it tear us apart?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106618 Read Count: 14018
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Yes the godfather is coming around!  With all the ways he is secretive with her it explains some why he is the way he is.  Constantly on guard with his own people & not sure who to trust but Isabella. 

 Why in the heck is he all giggly with Tanya on the plane?  I hope it is just the stupidness he got from Carlisle or hopefully Edward is setting her up.  I'm wondering if it is Peter, Jasper or Aro that walked into the bedroom?  It could be Tanya?  This is a big cliffie!



Author's Response:

Edward has to STAY on guard. 

Thank you for reading. See you soon!   :)

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Finally they talked!  I hope Edward gruesomely makes Carlisle pay for everything he has done to Esme & Bella.  Maybe Bella will get to give him some punishment too.  Something so terrible that will make Edward realize she really is a tough cookie & can hold her own.  Maybe they catch Carlisle and Bella attaches jumper cables to his testies starts to fry up some of his sperm.  ;) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Well hopefully they are going to really talk. As much as you continusly have me on the edge of my seat I love where you have taken this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!! I'm glad to hear to you're enjoying it..

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I really excited about the way you are starting this one out!  



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Edward was so vicious!  I am wondering if what he said to her is what Carlisle drilled into his head.   I really liked the original story but I LOVE this one even more already!  The warehouse scene between the two of them was so sweet & perfect!  The fight with Makenna was awesome!  



Author's Response:

BINGO!!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it!!!!!  Honestly,  when you said you would be rewriting this I didn't think you could make it any better.  You have knocked it out of the park & we are only on chapter 4.  I can't wait for you to update!  Every chapter gets better & better! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I really flattered. I have so much planned for this story! Hold on to your socks doll!  :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: End of Innocence

There has only been one, him!  Awe!  Another great chapter!  I'm so glad Edward is turning his behavior around for now at least!

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Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: End of Innocence Chapter 7

So Tanya is using her status with her husband to infiltrate the mason's or vice versa.  Jasper has some hidden info here.  I wonder why he didn't tell Edward in advance?  I have to say you write Edward beautifully!  In one paragraph I just want to punch him in the nuts & then the very next paragraph I can honestly say all is forgiven! His charm is remarkable! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

There is always that annoying cliffie!  It keeps us hanging on.  I can't figure out jasper for the life of me. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes she would have kicked his butt!  I'm excited about the wedding & of course honeymoon!



Author's Response:

LOL...You are so very right!!! I think the reason he stopped it bc he KNEW she would..LOL...

 

I'm hoping everyone enjoys the wedding and honeymoon!!  It's time for a little aww between these two.  :)  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't tell you enough how much I love the changes you have made to this story! I love Esme's back story in this & Rosalie not being such a witch!  I am wondering if Alice & jasper have something to do with her kidnapping.  She forgot to tell Edward about the tattoo.  I'm also SUPER EXCITED that we will get another update at he end of the week!  Hip hip hooray! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Don't worry the issue of the tattoo will come back up! I can't tell you how many stories I have read where Rosalie is the villain and Alice is always the "good" character. UGH! It's so overworked. I wanted to switch it up. I don't want to give it away whether my Alice is good or bad. So...

Thank you for reading and stay tuned in for this weekend. It's one HOT chapter!!

Playing Doctor by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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An entry for the Twific Doctorward Contest: When a slightly-drunk Bella arrives at the hospital with a suspicious-looking wound, ER-doctor Edward is concerned. For many reasons. When the line between professional and personal interest becomes blurred, will a workplace indiscretion land them both in hot water? 1ST PLACE WINNER, JUDGES' AND PUBLIC VOTE!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14471 Read Count: 2701
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2014 Updated: 27 Jun 2014
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Date: 24 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was so cute and funny! I loved Bella's inner thoughts! 

Summary:

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Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66598
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh crap! Just one night Bella & Edward could connect but Peter just can't sit still.

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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm excited about this!  Bella has a great plan & now Edward will get to see what she is made of.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2014 Title: Left Without a Choice (On Hiatus)

Thanks for this note!  That is very kind of you!  This story is great and worth the wait!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am very excited to get into this story!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am very excited to get into this story!

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Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like that Bella is a smarty pants!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love it that they are completely combative!

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Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think she is about to see what her family is really apart of & she isn't going to be happy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Right now this is oil & vinegar, how much shaking will it take to get them to mix?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think she is only calm bc she had figured it out & she plans on getting under his skin a lot more!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A slow burn is always so so good!  Mentally Edward is warming up but outwardly he can't control his anger. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Does she kiss him or does he get shot......

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I LOED her reaction to the proposal & ring!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Their chemistry is so hot with tiny embers!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella just lit them both up!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I wonder if he will confess his love as a child for her at the wedding?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I was worried Alec had some other tricks up his sleeve.

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Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think it's better that we don't have lemons. They have so far to go in just communicating.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am so addicted to this story!  I am looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You are keeping us on the edge.  I really thought he was going to kiss her.  I know it was best that he just held her hand.  The anticipation is huge!  I'm probably going to be jumping up & down when they finally kiss! ;)

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved your author note at that top!!! Bella kicked but maybe noe Edward will ravage her. ;)

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It looks like the lovers have finally hit a good point!

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
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Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder if all of jacob's friends are into boys & if so does Jacob entertain them?

Summary:

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Sequel to She Speaks Fear and Truth. Follow Edward's team, and Bella, the newest ghost-hunting member. With Bella's abilities will it only bring Edward's team to more harm? Their relationship is put to the ultimate test.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88946 Read Count: 9436
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2014 Updated: 23 Jul 2019
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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Case No.: 194 Part 1

It is only getting worse....

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Case.: 194 Part II

They just can't seem to catch a break.

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Case No.: 194 Part III

Bella will need to make Edward her priority when they get home.  I can imagine he is going to be a bit possessive!

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Ticking Clock

Hopefully rose lie could make the fuel truck into a remote controlled car and wreck remotely & start the fire.

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Case No. 186 Part I

Crap!

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Case No. 186 Part II

Yes making babies is always good!

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Cry Baby Bridge

I hope he doesn't die.

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Haunted Christmas

Of course it is a lie. I would lie too

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking the News

Bella knows what he is up too.

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Case No. 191 Part I

So it's a race issue....

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Case No. 191 Part II

I hope he doesn't have to do that again. 

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: So Sorry

Crap why are they in the house?

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Excess

She is extremely powerful!

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Crossovers

Oh no what will she see?

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Consequences

I wonder why Edward sees the Angels so often.  It is scary.  A lady came up from behind me earlier today while I was reading this story and I screamed bloody murder because I was so spooked.  I didn't realize how much this story creeps me out. :D

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Save the Boy

I look forward to hearing what happened to him.

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Library Part I

Oh craaaap!  Edward is going to be pissed!

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Library Part II

I wish Jacob could give them more clues. Maybe if she gets rid of that spirit it will change their outlook.

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope she gets a gun & kills them all

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Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It was so good to hear Edward's name!  Now how will they die?  I hope excruciatingly slow & painfully!

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Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank goodness Charlie is being severely punished! 

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Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is such an idiot!  Carlisle is really wretched but he doesn't lie.  Tells them straight up how bad it will be & 100 % follows thru.