Reviews by 2mpix
Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see how evil you make Carlisle!  An evil Carlisle is even better that an evil Edward! I'm sooo looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I was so happy to see this quick update!  Poor Bella sad that she doesn't even argue with her dad because she is just so used to him doing the wrong thing & being lousy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow! He is very much into giving out pain!  I didn't expect that and just the simple detail of having her dry made the whole experience so much worse.  I can't even fathom what you have planned for the next day.  Hopefully Bella gets a clue & finds some oil or something for her bum or she won't be able to walk after tomorrow.  How will she know when she has worked off the debt?  Or does he just plan on eventually killing her?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You continue to shock me!  Putting Bella in a dog cage definately takes it up a level and then Charlie with Leah, WOW!  He is as sick & depraved as Carlisle!  I think he does enjoy Carlilse too.  

I hope by th end of this story Bella gets her hands on a shot gun & catches Charlie & Carlisle in the act together & blows both their heads off!  Granted I look forward to lots of sick &  perverse chapters before that can happen.  ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have a bad feeling about 10pm tonight.  I have a feeling he will be showing all 3 of them off & Charlie the sicko that he is will have it the worst or at least I hope he does.  What r Bella's lesson's & who is teaching them?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm thinking A is Alice?  I definately think Charlie will have sex Bella.  I can't even fathom how much worse the next chapter is going to be.  If there is ever a contest for shock factor, no one will ever be able to compete with you!

Summary:

It's been three years since the day Bella changed Edward's mind — three years since they have gotten together. Now, Edward has a question for Bella. This is the story of the phases of change her mind goes through before acknowledging what's in her heart. A Change My Mind futuretake.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4620 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2014 Updated: 01 Sep 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Phases of Change

This was sweet!  I like how you went back & let us experience some of their firsts.  And best of all WHOO wouldn't love a naked Edward in all his glory down on one knee. 



Author's Response:

Yes, who indeed. :P

Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Burn Notice by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The last days of summer. Two weeks of freedom. One lie. What could possibly go wrong? BxE, canon couples, AH-OOC. M-RATING for lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25364 Read Count: 13462
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella is here to stay!  No kicking this "little girl" to the curb!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so glad all your stories are on this site! 

Summary:

Bella is leery of falling in love. She soon learns that life is filled with countless forms and degrees of emotions. There is love, loss, healing, and everything in between. BxE. Canon couples. AH-OOC. HEAVY ANGST in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10590 Read Count: 3211
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 24 Nov 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Step back Riley!  She still has to meet Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

She is already feeling the pull towards him.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was funny on both jasper & Bella's part!  Very cute!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks so much for the update!  So sad that Jasper's sick! 

One Night by chiqalinda Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper meets Edward at a club in Seattle. He quickly falls for the innocent blond blue eyed kid; Jasper knows that as beautiful as Edward is there is something dark about him. Jacob, Jaspers long time crush comes to visit and reveal a secret. Jasper doesn't know that Edward is the most dangerous mob boss Seattle has ever known.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123819 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2014 Updated: 20 Oct 2017
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE THIS!  It's going to be so steamy!



Author's Response:

Thanks 2mpix, i hope you enjoy the rest, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't think it will go down how u are thinking Jasper!



Author's Response:

yeah little did he know. thanks for readingand reviewing, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What is going to happen now??????  How old is edward anyway?



Author's Response:

what next?

well you'll just have to hang aroung to find out.

How old is edward?

early twenties.

thanks for reading and reviewing, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward is going to break him in nice & slowly.  I wonder how jealous jake is going to be?



Author's Response:

oh yes he is, and as for Jake well you'll just have to see.

I hope you don't hate me when you do find out.

thanks for reading and reviewing, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward is so freaking busy!



Author's Response:

yes he is but the time him and Jazz spend together is worth every bit. He is learning how to juggle his old and new life, i hope you like the rest, thanks for reading and reviewing, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thanks for the EPOV.  IT WAS A PLEASANT SURPRISE!



Author's Response:

Hi 2mpix, glad you like it i'll be throwing Jake in there now and then too, hope you like, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I can't believe edward didn't get a little relief himself!



Author's Response:

Hi 2mpix,

i know right but you know what they say? All delicious things come to those who wait... or something like that.

thanks for reading and reviewing, chiqalinda.

Fairy Godfather by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Young doctor Edward pulls a beautiful girl out of harm's way, and finds that he may have just stumbled onto his greatest desire. Daddykink, so if that's not your thing, go elsewhere. For abadkitty.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33156 Read Count: 40041
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Mar 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Baby girl has got some skills!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And the kink begins! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the teddy graham idea! That was pure genius! 

Summary:

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Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192191
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Only his!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'll be super excited when you can add to this!! :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Please finish this, it is SOOOO good! I would love a PDF if it is still available.

Summary:

Summary:
AU~ E/B ~HEA
Izzy has followed in her parents’ footsteps, and is working in the porn industry at Cullen Enterprises. Everything is going wonderfully.  Then, she begins to feel as though someone is watching her with every breath she takes.  Those haunting eyes seem to be everywhere.  Who is it, and what do they want?

Beta'd by RAH07890

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4036 Read Count: 21907
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2014 Updated: 06 Aug 2019
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward must be freaking out!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

HELLO EDWARD!  Will he be able to keep quiet as he finishes?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Haha!  Thank goodness she was sleeping!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So she isn't asleep.  And a virgin to boot.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I completely forgot his family owns the company.  Let the drama begin.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love your idea that he can't read minds at all bc of izzy.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Will Edward switch jobs with Alec?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Perfect pic for this chapter!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think edward's idea sounds divine!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So I guess izzy wanted 34DD. That makes her being a virgin even funnier.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Giddy up! How will Edward deal with jasper

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well well well!  You are a genius!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't wait to read what is next!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I was hoping he would kiss her! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The kiss from the movie is my absolute favorite out of all of them!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I was so hoping to get to the good stuff.  Oh well I can imagine it.  The still photo shoot had to be crazy good in your mind. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Every breath you take

I hope you finish this Drabble one day.  ;). I'm going to start reading some of your other work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122122 Read Count: 16348
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2014 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Edward

I am so hooked on this story!



Author's Response:

Yayyy, I hope so. I would have suggested you not read the OS first, but since you did now you know what you're working toward. ;) I hope you enjoy the journey and we so look forward to hearing from you as you catch up to us. Thanks so much for leaving us your thoughts!

 

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So mystery POV is a girl.  This chapter really makes it look like Edward is the stalker, but I hope he isn't.  My gut says no.  This chapter was extra creepy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sam is totally the stalker & Edward has been watching. Sam slipped up, Bella never told him she was with three guys she didn't know.  I bet Sam has something to do with her being attacked. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward drawing a cat & a tree only makes this even more spooky!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward could of bribed jasper his best friend for info on Bella.  Her dad did go to the police station & jasper could have told him what town her dad works in.  Also, he said he is a writer.  Is he a newspaper journalist? Does Edward have autism or just extreme OCD?  Ass-hat & ass-bag fits Sam to a tee!  I am so glad Bella didn't go to sam's house.  Something tells me if she goes there she might not be released.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think the killer & stalker are the same.  I think Sam being the IT guy that he is and thinks he is so smart & can't get caught, has a camera in her room and is one crazy mother f@#&er. I'll take split personality for $200 Alec.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The story as a whole was fantastic!  There was so much suspense.  Every chapter seemed to bring on more questions.  Emily really was the biggest psycho! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm still leaning towards Sam.  I just can't see Edward being the crazy caller.  I could see him watching her from afar but not being scary & mean. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank goodness the two crazies are gone! Now we can have a little romance with E/B!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sam is still one of the bad guys probably both. I think he is talking to Jess now trying to frame Edward.  Not sure who the Mystery POV is?  Sam is a horrible father!  I am willing to sacrifice an HEA with E/B so that Seth gets an HEA. 

Summary:

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The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6112 Read Count: 552
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Pop Religion OneShot

This is fantastic!  I'm looking forward to reading the whole story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! We soooo hope you like it! Keep us informed :) 

Fyre

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

BANNER BY: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44722
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope that at least when he drops her off at her house that he kisses her forehead so she can see he has some feelings for her, since he definately isn't planning on making any major announcements. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah a secretary is right. Edward is pretty much a pompous ass right now!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm already excited to read copward! Let the hostility begin!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It seems like Edward might want some lemony goodness with Brave Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I really liked hearing things from EPOV.  I think it is funny that Charlie knows that Edward likes Bella already & they go fishing together.  I have no doubt that Edwrd will now save Bella unless she saves herself.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think he has feelings that he doesn't want to admit to so he is trying to get her to quit. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Maybe he didn't want her working with him bc she distracts him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy crap she is an amazing actress!  And she made it believable that she was 15!  I wonder how Edward is going to react about the kiss?  I think I was as nervous for Bella as she was in this story.  I'm so glad there will be an update tomorrow!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It looks like Edward is going to be worshipping Bella very soon!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So Bella thinks this could be a set up with a leak in the department?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He is hopefully oing to attack her in a good way when this bank crap is all over!  ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

There is no doubt Edward along with the rest of the force is going to kissing the ground she walks on & giving her tons more respect! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think the costumes are great! I wish Bella would put a plastic bottle on the end of her gun & use it as a silencer.  ( I saw it on a tv show). She could take more guys out & not let anyone know.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes I think she is a brainiac!  I hope she kills all of them!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

FINALLY! Edward took the bull by the horns & grew some balls!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella is a very good actress!  I know Edward will find her!  I think here is a leak in the dept.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

One they better check out the bed and a lot of other surfaces.  We have been writing 18 chapters for this....will they get drunk & married?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble Mafia Fic. What is the ultimate act of Betrayal? For Bella is was when her husband and best friend slept together. Find out how she dealt with them and how she plans to turn her life around. Will she find happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22383 Read Count: 139185
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Dec 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Cat & mouse games are my absolute favorite!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wherever he has taken her must be somewhere she can't really escape easily bc he surely wouldn't untie her otherwise.  Maybe it's a private island?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my, nasty, gross Roy is her dad! Shit just got real!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mr. Cullen already turning on the charm.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So i wonder how deep is Edward into the mafia? Is he just an errand boy?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So Edward must be a real bad boy if Emmet doesn't want her around him.  Your author note was hilarious at the beginning of chapter one!  I love your mafia stories.  I'm looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is starting out exciting!  I wasn't expecting Bella to be a bad ass!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella is such a hell raiser!  All I can do is chuckle at her.  That poor guard is going to be hurting later I bet!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was thinking she was about to be drugged when she took the second drink.  Crap!  It looks like Bella is about to be married again.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It makes me so happy that she is trusting him so much already.  I hope you feel better very soon!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can't get enough of the heat between these two.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So much drama happening behind the scenes.  I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is Bella going to be made to marry Edward?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WOW!  I thought this was exciting before, this just jumped to hot, steamy, & exhilarating!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You are such a tease!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It looks like they are going to get along just fine!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This just makes me laugh!  Bella is just a little hell raiser!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Edward really does want to be with her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

He'll probably buy her a house there.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews honey xx

 

That would be nice x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I have a very giddy feeling that when things calm down Edward and Bella will need to take care of some lemony aggression. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

She isn't ready to lose Edward! =D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

It looks as if daddy does want her killed!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

She is always so difficult.  I love it that she is so worried about him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thanks for this quick update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Finally all it took was a bullet wound or her to become a bit needy. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

And now Bella will be ready to kill Royce too, but will Edward let her?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh Bella this is such a bad decision!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Seeing him get this upset I know is for her own good but part of me really wants her to push him to see what he would do.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm really surprised he didn't tie her to the bed. She makes him so crazy it is funny!