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Drabble Mafia Fic. What is the ultimate act of Betrayal? For Bella is was when her husband and best friend slept together. Find out how she dealt with them and how she plans to turn her life around. Will she find happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22383 Read Count: 139185
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Dec 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Maybe now she will have an ally.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all your reviews. I really apprecaite them. I love hearing your thoughts on each chapter x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So much for them f-ing!  Edward knew it would kill the mood. 

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Will Edward give her some lemony punishment for going against him?

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I hope jasper is just playing nice with her father & not really on his side.

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Well it looks like Edward should be rewarded.

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Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Now they have a chance to kill Royce too!

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

He is mad at her but still protective.  I have a bad feeling about this exit.....

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

This does not look good!  I'm on the edge of my seat!

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Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I LOVED what Bella did to jasper! That was great!

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Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh CRAP!  This is a HUGE cliffie!  I was so happy to see this update and now I'm going to have to hope I don't chew all my nails off until tomorrow hopefully with the next update.....

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Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

That wasn't as bad as I was expecting but now I'm even more a little worried bc what does jasper have up his sleeve?

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Date: 12 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Sad this is almost over :(. HAPPY that there will be a sequel!  :D

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Date: 13 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

She continues to shock me.  I start to think she is going to be compliant and then she goes and plucks an eyeball!

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Date: 14 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I was so hoping she & Emmet were alive.

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Date: 14 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

He said he loved her!  With all the bad crap going on and the story ending :(. That was a perfect light to end it on.  I still hope Emmet is alive.  



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
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When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see more of Jerkward & assward!

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Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh no!  I hope Charlie didn't try to shoot him with theo in his arms.

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Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh now how is Esme going to react?  I'm now going to catch up on the new chapter of dance with the devil!  I'm so excited!

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Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So she ia already softening him and his mother sees it.

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39984
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Big News!

I knew someone was going to end up preggers!

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift

Rosie posey, that is so cute!  Then posey as a nickname it just really sweet!  I like Rose now just for her nickname.

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Confession

I'm all caight up and completely hooked on this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews, i have read and enjoyed each one.  

cheers, 

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 aftermath

The person who felt it unrealistic must not have children.  My husband and i always say we might kill someone if they hurt our son, the only joking matter is my husband isn't the best planner so i would be the one to dispose of the body.  Protective mothers are called momma bears for nothing. 

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Esme

Ding dong the stupid jerk is dead!! Thanks for making it a short angsty moment & not dragging it out.

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - the morning after

I was really hoping James was gone.  Guess not!

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Edward's Love

I hope she wears her gift from posey!

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella

Love the quote!!

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Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - the talk

I knew she was going to spill the beans.  Nowcarlisle & esme can have a good laugh privately too!  This was very funny!

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Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Phenomenal

Phenomenal!!!!

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Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: no need for tears

Unbelievably SWEEEET!

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Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - she be but little

The nerd duel was perfect for them!  Jacob needs to be buried alive.  You really caught me off guard with that. 

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Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - midnight confessions

I am finally getting to read this story and it is so cute how clueless they both are!!

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Date: 22 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come

Thanks for the update!  I have missed these two!

Summary:

When Bella shares her fantasy with her master he decides to make it a reality. So here's what happens.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4922 Read Count: 3627
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2014 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah I say enjoyed is an understatement!  Happy new year to me!

Summary:

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All of Bella's memories have been erased. She knows nothing about herself or the two men that are holding her captive. The only thing she can recall is a feeling of urgency ... Danger. She knows that she needs to escape ... Run ... While she still can. ***DRABBLE***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23513 Read Count: 41798
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Feb 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ok so I had high hopes for Alice but they aren't needed anymore!

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Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh wow I was hoping Alice would prove to be good or is this a set up for Edmund to use his powers?

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Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Here we go!

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Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ding dong the witch is dead well the head Druid is anyway!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

This was great!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I am so glad you wrote this!  



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all of your reviews and for taking this journey with me. Your support is highly appreciated. x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What did Bella's dad do to her.  I'm figuring it was to erase her memories of Edward.  What good that did.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And has me hooked!  I know you are going to deliver something good! 

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Paul is a dirt bag....

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You are soooo good at writing suspense!

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh crap!  This is not what I was expecting....

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Does she need a ssweet Edward kiss to make it all better?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is so intriguing! One of those stories you aren't 100 % who the good guys are yet.  I'm excited about a relentless update soon too!  Your mob stories are some of the best!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So she must be a vampire and they were waiting for her to show it????  Still on the edge of my seat.

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok so we now know for sure she has super human strength.....and that's about it.  Every chapter really ends with a cliffie bc one question gets answered but causes 20 more questions.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Even when you are sick your imagination is brilliant!

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Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It sounds like an excorsism.  But freakier!

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Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So they are wolves.  Or at least Edward is.... Still so many things to figure out....

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Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank you for all these updates!  I'm on the edge of my seat.  Has anything more happened other than a kiss?

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Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So now that makes a little more sense.  I still want to no more about Paul.

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Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

There is so much under lying love between them & I can see how Edward is having to hold back. 

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Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok now this is making sense & why Edward is more gun shy.  I love this story!  I have become a bit addicted!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Lots of tension in this chapter!  It seems Edward is the alpha.  I'm so excited to be behind a chapter so I get more to read!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Still so many questions.... How powerful is Bella as a werewolf & a Druid? How was her father able to do the spell if she was so powerful?



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all your reviews. I love reading them x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I was wondering if that is what Edward was hiding.  So Bella's eyes glow too I bet. 

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Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Those blue eyes are so controlling. Will she be able to fall back in love with him?

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Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So she was a wee bit manipulative even before she was changed!  I had no idea where this story would go from the first chapter but it continues to get better & better! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't be mad at Edward even though last chapter I wanted too.  I know why he has to be distant but I don't want him to be.  I hope Edmund helps bring back her memories & love for Edward.

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope Edward catches him & puts him in his place! I best he doesn't think Bella is worth all the effort.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I figured it was like that with Paul.  Now what happened with Jacob?  And the plot thickens...

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It has to feel so maddening not having a memory!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Will we ever have edward's point of view.  I'm only asking bc dealing with her nuts be like being in the twilight zone.

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What is going to who now? With the way Bella is now when her & Edward finally even just kiss it is going to start a fire.

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

But how will she find her powers if she doesn't remember?

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I don't want to complain bc you are sick & I feel bad for you bc if you have hat bad Lu going around you feel HORRIBLE!  But did you have to leave us with this HUGE cliffie.  Now I'll be jonesing for the next chapter.  FEEL BETTER SOON! =D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That is very sweet!  And HOT!

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Looks like Paul will be dead!

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Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh WOW! No wonder Jacob is gone & Paul saw the whole thing & thinks that Jacob isn't at fault?  CRAZY!  I hope they maul him to death!

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Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ripped to shreds!  Awesome!

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Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ok so dad needs to be ripped to shreds too!

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I really LOVE this story!  You really are a genius with your words!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Sorry to hear about your week! Thank goodness tomorrow starts a new & fresh one! I wonder if Bella is going to stick up for Jacob & that will enrage Edward?

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Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Will Bella kill Jacob? 

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Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

The dynamics of their relationship is going to be different. How will Edward deal?



Author's Response:

A huge thank you for all your reviews and support with this story. It is highly appreciated. x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Well dirty talking Bella!  Will Edward survive? Haha!

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A ballerina figurine and a pair of sad brown eyes change Christmas for Edward in ways he never imagined.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14186 Read Count: 47027
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2014 Updated: 25 Jan 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Is he going to have a hand in raising Charlie????

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Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok so it's obvious Charlie's family isn't nice.

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Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Now this is even sweeter but sad too!

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Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

No tissues but I'm excited to see what Edward does....

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Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh now I think Edward needs a little hug.

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Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No I wasn't expecting Rose at all.

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Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I was so worried they would sit back down & start eying as if nothing happened . I'm glad they left!

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Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So I definately hate Edward SR

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is going to be so sweet!  Sad I'm betting but I'm hooked already!

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Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Little Charlie needs a great big hug!

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Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh wow!  

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You like to keep us on the edge....

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope she is able to tell Emmet she wants Edward to raise Charlie 

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bc of your author note this just came to mind...did rose have an affair with Edward's dad?  Does that make Charlie Edward's brother?

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ok that was a tear jerker!  

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the author note and for this update!  It was a nice surprise!  

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Will Charlie be just the thing that gets Edward to walk away from his wacko family....

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This is just so sweet with Charlie & Edward!

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Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That is such a sweet picture you illustrated there!

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Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So sad & every mom's worst nightmare!

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor Emmett! I look forward to Bella & Edward falling in love all bc of Charlie.