Reviews by 2mpix
Pressing My Luck by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
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Bella faces fierce competition to be crowned Ink God. Her biggest rival is the man who taught her everything about ink, not to mention love. With a lot of talent and a little luck, Bella knows she can win it all, including Edward's heart.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20759 Read Count: 19621
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is super sexy!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Some little tiny sleep clothes will help in nit letting edward sleep well tonight.

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness!! Love the fruit idea!! Skimpy clothes not needed!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That's right!!! Hahaha one point for bella!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope nothing ruins the heat between them!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I was worried emmett wasn't going to leave!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am looking forward to see what other piercings edward has!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Let the goodtimes roll!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Emmett is so crazy funny!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thought he might be a bit distracting.

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope the tie.

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

They both can be on their knees tonight.

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Very cute ending!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

MADE BY: LUNARECLIPSE1

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MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Shit just got real!

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

The sex in the city comment from Emmett is so funny!

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"I bet I could make you feel that good again if not better" Jasper said.

J/E slash pwp


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1389 Read Count: 1910
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
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Date: 04 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just found this!! Yummy! I can't understand how there are not more reviews! It's been 10 years since you posted it and it's still delicious! The banner is delightfull too!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59779
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So many twists & turns!  I thought the HEA was oing to be Bella running away. I would not have predicted this outcome! 

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The boutique has been closed for 45 minutes and Bella is still waiting to be picked up, something that's become a pattern she's getting tired of. Will an unexpected knock at the door make her stop waiting? O/S, Bella & Edward, rated NC-17 for a reason.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5276 Read Count: 2042
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
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Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The cat burglar was a very funny and great idea! 

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

Wow! Fantastic cliffie!

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

I'm extremely thankful for the extra lemony goodness you added!

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Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom

I knew it!  Heidi is becoming an issue! 

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Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Living Room

Isn't Heidi going to find out bc of Maggie? Heidi works at the hospital.

Summary:

The Master and Isabella

It was a great honor to serve the Master, and there was never a shortage of volunteers. She came to him of her own free will, eager to please and to be pleased. She had possessed his every thought since the moment he laid eyes on her; it was time he took what was his. 

No vampires, but still supernatual. See warnings in the chapter notes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Mystery, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5117 Read Count: 2707
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Master and Isabella

Extremely delicious!

Playing Games by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Story.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3239 Read Count: 30999
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 13 Sep 2014
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Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow! He put Belle in her place!  There is no chance she could have misunderstood that! 



Author's Response:

He's a man of words, us our Dan! Thanks for commenting. I love interaction :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yikes!  How completely embarrassed is Louise going to be!  He is going to be totally smug as he should be! The ex will hopefully see she has no place with him anymore.  I just hope she doesn't use this against him with seeing his son.



Author's Response:

I hadn't even thought that far ahead! But you're probably right. In my mind, the door stays open for Hal. Don't worry about Hal being used as a pawn, she's far too conniving for that.

Thank you for your comment. I love comments, me!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

They always get right to what they both want. :)



Author's Response:

They just can't help it, it would seem :)

Thanks for taking the time to comment, comments makes my day!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hal has helped to stir the pot in a lemony way! 



Author's Response:

The innoncence of children! Out of the mouths of babes, and all that :)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Poor Louise! That witch of an ex totally planted those underwear. 



Author's Response:

She totally did! Because she's a nasty piece of work.

Thanks for your comment

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm so happy to see this update!



Author's Response:

So sorry I'm a bit cactus. Please drop me a line if you want to see the whole thing, once it's done.

 

Thanks for sticking with me al this time x

 

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At 30, Edward realizes that he made five monumental mistakes in his life, but what he didn't realize was that those mistakes would be profoundly life altering; leading him to her. A romantic drabble in EPOV.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), To Read , J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18116 Read Count: 68539
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

This was the sweetest little story.  I don't know how I hadn't read it before.

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We were together nine years … and then we weren't.   Now I’m just pretending.  The trouble is, I’ve never been very good at lying. 

With one drunken kiss at a New Year’s Eve party, lives change when the clock strikes midnight.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3810 Read Count: 1628
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: On the Stroke of Midnight

I loved it!

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113784
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
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Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I was hoping you wouldn't end the chapter before she heard the good news.  Now when Edward comes home maybe they can have some delicious reconnecting time & then she can drop the bomb on him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I so love this E&B!

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Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Looking forward to the Lemons!  I love the tattoos!

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks for this update!

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Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love this story!  I look forward to the next chapter. I hope the FBI gets on with the search & finds those letters!

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Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I was getting worried we weren't going to get any bow chicka wow wow as we were getting close to the end of the chapter.  Shew!  Thank goodness they did!  It's still so hard for me to wrap my mind around 9 kids! 

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Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Mario is such a douchebag! He can kiss any connection with emmett goodbye too! He is 30 years old and is such a selfish prick.  And his parents will probably not get to see their grandchildren either.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717286
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok good no hookup!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Looks like the date might not happen.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope he gets those answers.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Millionaire WOW!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella is now going to need to show him how thankful she is.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So Bella doesn't like Alice being interested.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward is going to eventually do some serious damage to jake! 

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my my my! Bella is mad!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

How is Bella going to react to that?

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jake is going to get it & so is bella

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She is such a HUGE tease!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

He is spot on about trust!  CJ might be a bit jealous!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is about to be movin on up!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This might work out good so he can see Bella w/o jasper around.  

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I knew it & Bella was just a flirtin!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It wouldn't surprise me if she sneaks into his room one nite very soon!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella has penetrated edward's wall.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward is not getting any tonight!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Omg jake is a total jack ass!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So so funny the two of these guys.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Looks like jasper has some deciding to do.  And he is pretty drunk so Edward might be able to get away with something with Bella since jasper is so drunk.

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Please dump jake!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Shit is about to get REAL!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Will Bella attack him in a fit of lust?

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It is soooo on!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh crap run!

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

He is soooo falling for her!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Maybe you can make her feel better Edward.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Will she come along peacefully or not???

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What happened to her? Chapter 36 is getting close

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I was so hoping she would go in his bedroom.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

She won't give up. That's a GREAT thing!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh this is not going to be good!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Jake just dug his grave!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

He is going to go ballistic?  Will he be able to actually leave for Tampa now?

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I hope he makes him suffer!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I can't wait to see what he does to him!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Giddy up! IT HAS BEGUN!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

He is so cut out to be in he mob & be an assassin!  I love assassinward!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Poor jasper!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That was smart of him to kiss her cheek.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Assassinward with his purple backpack!  TOO FUNNY!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

CJ might have been a bit too nice there.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

He called!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Riley seems good but then he pulls a stupid stunt like this.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Buh bye jakie & good riddance!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

They just need to nap together.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Jasper is taking them possibly being together very well

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Maybe Riley didn't want to pay?

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I bet Bella is wanting a little something too!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Just kiss her Edward!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

The things Alice says are hillarious!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh crap!  Edward is going to be happy.

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

The two of them I just want to bash their heads together!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Well that went from bad to worse!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

CRAAAAP!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

You make me laugh with those final thoughts!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Just when I thought it was going to get better!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

This is a bit better!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Best ending to a chapter! I'm laughing out loud!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Holy crap!  Of course they make a little headway & take 20 steps back bc Alice has ran her mouth!

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Oh my goodness!