Reviews by 2mpix
Summary:

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Edward Cullen found the love of his life six years ago at summer camp, but after losing contact with her, he doesn't know where to begin the search for his lost love. That is until Emmett shows up with a couple of surprises of his own.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: The Forbidden Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14610 Read Count: 2009
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2013 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Thanks to My Brother, the Bear

It was a very interesting start.  I was worried but it was sweet in the end!

Right There by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

*Sequel to Come Closer* Accepting your place in life–and letting go of all that kept you in the wrong–is a powerful thing. Edward Masen knows this. Knows it with his heart, his soul, his being. Forbidden doesn't exist anymore. 'Can't have' are no longer words in his mind's vocabulary. And were never in his claim's. Isabella is getting everything she's ever wanted. To be his.

 

Right There banner by Frozen Soldier


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45749 Read Count: 5376
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

I'm so excited for continuation of this story!  The way you write keeps the anticipation almost unbearable.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Stripped Bare

It was so sweet what Edward said to Jasper.  Oh, and your warnings at the beginning of this chapter made me laugh a lot! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: And Then Forever

I LOVED it that she kicked Rose out just before she went to the ceremony!  You have mde her so strong & bold.  The next chapter I'm sure will be full of lots of yummy goods!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: YET

It was a perfect night!!!!!!!!  As much as I love lemons, the sweetest part to me was that you had Edward taking off her shoes not just rushing her to the bedroom. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Yes, SHARING  IS VERY VERY GOOD! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Entitled

You did not disappoint at all! Bold & sweet Isabella gets her way every time!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is offered the job of a lifetime. The personal assistant to one Hollywood's biggest A-listers. When she begins to develop feelings for her boss Edward Cullen will she be able to handle all his personal requests or will his domineering behavior cause her to run from her chance at true love. Story will contain, language and themes of domestic discipline including spanking.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71498 Read Count: 52759
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2013 Updated: 26 May 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is very cute.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This has been very interesting!  

Summary:

 

Bella prepares to navigate through the entertainment industries perils as famous Edward Cullen's new girlfriend. Will she survive or will she be just another Hollywood tragedy? What happens when Edward reveals something that may cause Bella to rethink her relationship with the man she loves? Read Part One first. Warning for spanking and domestic discipline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148461 Read Count: 50479
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder if garret or someone else from the tria fete society made Embry stop being friends with Bella?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love love LOVE Marcus J.  I can totally picture him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think the video was great!  I imagine it starting out in color & then when she sees the mail it all turns into black & white except the paint that she puts on the wall, the construction crews hats, the chandelier, the picture she puts a hammer through are all in color.  Then when he hands her the GQ magazine it all turns bak to color.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I just remembered that Jacob is a 2nd?  No idea what that means.  It makes me think if something happens to Edward, Jacob is supposed to step in?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She is always so combative with him. 

Summary:

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is sooo good!  Crazy how young Bella is.  Carlisle is so ruthless! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

I love it when he puts Carlisle in his place.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

Carlisle is one sick dickhead!  Edward is yummy!  He wants Bella to move on fast but not only for his pride but for her safety too.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

The way the kids talk is so cute!  You hear their voices perfectly!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Bad ass Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love it when He gets possessive!  You have created a yummy Edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

I hope you eventually continue this story!  I'm hooked on it!

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

This picture is goes perfectly with what you ave written!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Diavolo

Bossy Edward behind bars is yummy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted

Oh I think Bella is going to live but she will probably have some services to be rendered.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

The lemon was fantastic!  Very sad the way he treated her.  I'm hoping he only did that bc jerks walked in.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.

Holy cow he sounds BAD ASS!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.

I think the only reason Tanya didn't get her throat cut at dinner was bc his mother was there.  He was vicious! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was thinking she might be the leak.  More torture here we come!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that his mother had to get all over him!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You really are a genius!  You bring comic relief with kill them with kindness remark.  Too funny!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Another one bites the dust! And another one down and another one down.  I have that tune in my head!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

E&B Have a lot of talking to do.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ok!  I did not expect that at all!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So he kept her safely hidden until the could dispose of the father.  I look forward to hearing the back story on that. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm soooo glad she admitted what she wanted!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So Jessica gets to keep her life!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So happy to see an update for this story! Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss

Does she have a child or is she taking care of an elderly parent?  Why else would rose need to be there? 

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Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - just dessert

VICIOUS!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

I love how you have used memorable lines from the movies but used them in different context & with different people. You really are brilliant!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: cherry surprise

So it's not a child she's hiding & she has money if she's wearing that outfit.....

Summary:

Edward arrives a week late to Whitlock University to find his new roommate is not what he expected. At all. ALL Human. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7619 Read Count: 3457
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2013 Updated: 08 Oct 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Winter Wonderland

This is a great story & I'm loving how B & E are buddies! Of course everyone looks forward to the heat between them but the slow build of this story is fantastic! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm glad Bella will still have a piece of family in her life.



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I always love any collaborations between you ladies!  I look forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope when you say 19 ends with a fist pump it is because it ends with some lemony goodness! ;)  I wasn't expecting the proposal.  It was a sweet surprise.  I also love the description of her ring! 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Dutch by nikkirocsurworld Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

A fluffy love story of two childhood friends. All EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13940 Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Age 26

I told my BFF if invitro didn't work, I would carry a baby for her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Age 31

This chapter tells so much truth!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Age 24

Such a wonderfully mushy story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23448
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I LOVE this story.  I had to re-read this last chapter and make sure to comment bc I hope you one day come back & finish it. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Edward finally has the wife he wants & still can't have his needs met. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is such an interesting story!  The whole witch thing is an interesting twist!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so excited by this update! I love lemons but it is really funny how the kids keep getting in the way of poor Edwards needs,  ;). 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76900
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be sooo juicy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The affair is written all over them.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He really is a scoundrel!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Someone has hurt her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He is already falling in love with a WHOLE lot of lust mixed in!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There is nothing like having sex with a hooker & shooting her while in action.  That could only happen to Emmett! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He is so unbelievably bold!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella is doing whatever it takes it def. helps that she is madly attracted to him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Calling his wife a dog.  Man, Bella has a lot of softening to do!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He is trying to think of her feelings a little....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He loves her already too!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

She can be just a conniving as him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow rose just wouldn't stop!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She's pregnant.

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Just tell him Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

He is so so happy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bummer Edward is on the couch! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Her mother is a pot stirrer!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

I LOVED this story! 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Talk about a really fantastic slap in Tanya's face! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WHOO Hoo Esme approves!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There is sooo much lemony goodness & now the real sweetness begins!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm so glad Lizzy came to Bella.  Vixon Bella is always fantastic especially when controlward makes an appearance! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

What is Rosalie going to say?  I hope he will apologize but I'm guessing it won't be that simple.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The possibilities are endless! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can not wait to see what Edward's reaction is to James. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am shocked at how he just completely turned cold on her.   You are always so good at writing the cat & mouse games!  Thanks so much for the update & continuing the story!  It is one of my faves!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You are a GENIUS!  Those were the best emails ever! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Holy cow!  What a turn of events! Wake up soon Edward & please remember Bella when you do. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm ready for Edward to tear down Bella's walls & be together again.  You are amazing at writing them in any story ploy you put them in so I know any HEA will be worth the wait! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They are almost back together! Hip hip hooray!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I know it must be bad whatever he can't talk about and I can't even imagine what you have up tour sleeve for us to discover? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So now the healing can begin! This was a great chapter!  I thought Ben was great & Edward's comments to himself were very funny!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Levi is so cute & huggable! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I have completely enjoyed this story & I think it was a great ending!  I think leaving the USB unseen by Edward was perfect too.  I love how they ended up because I think their ending is more true to life.  When we go through trials in real life the problems can be solved but they are still sometmes still lingering.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272437
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love this story!!!! I hope you are able to eventually finish it!

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

I just want E & B to talk so Bella can lay her cards on the table.  With your notes telling us they aren't out of the woods yet I'm figuring I have a bit longer to wait.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I want them to talk to, I'm not sure though if they'll get the chance to do so in the near future. Yeah, you have to be a little patient. But it'll all turn out well in the end, I promise.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 - Long Distance

I'm looking forward to their sat. Night fun! 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm sorry to kill your buzz but there might not be any Saturday night fun. I'm just saying. There's another chapter before it'll even be Saturday and much can happen in one chapter ;). But there will be fun (eventually), I promise. Maybe on Friday already because I'm trying to get the Photo Session outtake ready to post for Valentine's. See you then. Silke

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Well after reading the teaser I can see Bella does go to La push.  I was hoping she decided not to go.  Jacob is now a big pile of poop sitting in the middle of their relationship. They need a pooper scooper ASAP!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake - Photo Session

Thank you, thank you for the v-day gift!  It was sweet with a fantastic amount citrus!  He got freakier with her than I expected which means you knocked it out of the park!  I think all of us readers can agree that when Edward gets demanding and bossy we just LOVE it! As always I'm looking forward to Tuesday's update! 



Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. I'm so glad you liked the Valentine's Day outtake. It was fun writing it and I was really sad when I decided to cut it. But considering the overall plot it was for the best. See you later with the next chapter.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

Valentines Day would be a perfect photo session outtake day.  Hint hint ;). I wish Bella didn't have any worries about how Edward feels but she wouldn't be Bella if she didn't. It brings me lots of smiles knowing she was ready to cry that he is leaving town.  The i Love You part that she said mentally completely shocked me! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I promise I'll think about the outtake as a Valentine's Day gift, but I can't promise anything. So Bella's realization shocked you? I'm sure it shocked her more ;). We'll see where it leads. See you next week.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Is it Jake telling him he's wrong?  This was a shocking chapter!  Edward was vicious with his words.  Some of what he said will be very hard for Bella to forget!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Bella will not be able to forgive him easily. But I promise that she will eventually.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

Bella is not freaking out anymore.  Edward is stepping up his sweetness aka "boyfriend moves" and Bella is responding well!  I noticed when Edward told Bella what Charlie said about taking care of his girl, Edward responded he would.  He didn't placate to Charlie that they were just friends.  The EPOV outtake is going to be interesting!



Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review. Yeah, Bella'S making progress but Edward risked a lot with his boyfriend moves. She might have run for the hills. You'll see what that conversation with Charlie was like and why Edward didn't correct Charlie. See you on Friday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Box

You have totally peeked my interest.  What did Jacob do? 



Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested. You'll learn what Jake did in chapter 10 ;).

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Unforeseen Encounter

I would have to say best kissing scene I have ever read! Not many writers can make lemony goodness out of just kissing! 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm blushing right now. What a great compliment.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Desire

So so good! What I really like about this story is even though they have hooked up, there is still some cat & mouse games going on.



Author's Response: Thanks! It will stay like that for a while. You'll eventually learn why.