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Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Friends with benefits

I'm glad Edward is being persistent! 



Author's Response: He has to be, otherwise he couldn't wear her down.

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Your place or mine?

Extremely hot in here!



Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm always so insecure about my lemons. I almost can't believe that the readers seem to enjoy them.

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Revelations

What I find so refreshing about these characters is that Bella is a strong girl and knows that she is attractive & Edward is his hot cocky self also.  Neither of them are weak even though they have some hurts & baggage from their pasts. 



Author's Response: I'm really glad you like my story. And I love hearing what my readers think. Thanks for letting me know.

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - MIA

I can't believe Bella stayed an extra day & we didn't get a smidgen of a lemon tart!  By the looks of the next chapter you are making up for it!  WHOO HOO! 



Author's Response: Don't worry. There's a lot more citrus to come. But there has to be a little plot in between to keep it interesting ;).

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Dirty Talk

I love, love, love when they both talk dirty and you wrote it wonderfully!  I love it most bc of the location!  In her studio, in the midst of taking his picture only added more HEAT!



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm blushing again. I was particularly nervous about that lemon because of the dirty talk. I'm happy you liked how it turned out.

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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Resistance

That is Bella putting her walls up trying not to fall for Edward.



Author's Response: Yeah! Reactions to her actions were very different. Some readers were very upset because she let Mike touch her in front of Edward, others were angry with Edward for overstepping a boundry. I think it was a bit of both and the mix was just right ;).

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The First (non-) Date

Totally a date! I love how Edward had a perfect plan with his dessert wine to get her back to his place! Also, I'm super excited that she will be meeting Emmet.



Author's Response: Yeah, a date. You'll have to wait a little longer for Emmett. He's going to show up in chapter 15 which will probably be posted on Christmas Eve.

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Dessert

Tiramisu is my absolute favorite dessert I had no idea I would love it even more lemoned flavor!  Bella taking control is fantastic!  So now that I have this story caught up and have to wait until Tuesday for the next chapter I am going to checkout vampgirl79.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I wanted Bella to be the one in control for once. But, as it turned out, my love for Edwards with a dominant streak won out. Sorry. But I'm sure you liked it anyway. Hope to hear from you on Tuesday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

Yes, yes, yes is my answer to Edward outtakes! Those would be Christmas gifts on their own but you are also going to give us a lemon too!  That's you saying Happy New Year too! 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm feeling generous this year so there will in fact be a lemon for Christmas AND another one for New Years. And if everything goes as planned, there will be a couple of short outtakes. See you then.

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Date: 25 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Emmett

That was a hot little lemon! You were spot on about adding excitement getting lemony in public!  Yes, I have done it and it adds to the experience but not so much if you get caught. Which has also happened, thank goodness only once!  

I love all of the things Emmet said but didn't say.  I think it is is so fantastic that you have written Bella to be so oblivious and I'm not annoyed with her. Probably bc she is like so many of my friends who think they can keep their walls up but are so smitten it is almost funny.  So, I guess what I'm saying is Bella is very relatable in your story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It was only coincidence that Bella came just the moment they were being caught. It wasn't because she was extra excited over the audience. Bella will soon start to see that there's much more to the connection between the both of them than she's been willing to admit. Just another couple of chapters ;). Until then, I'll give you an extra long lemon next week and a step into the right direction for Bella. Merry Christmas!

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Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Outtakes - Conversations I

I love it how he says "she's amazing" it makes me giddy just imagining how smitten he is with her. I think jasper is a good friend to both.  Thanks for the Christmas conversation! It was a real treat!



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. Although I've had parts of it planned out for a while now, the talk between Jasper and Edward wasn't easy to write. It was hard to decide how much he would share with Edward and what he wouldn't say out of respect and loyalty for Bella. But I think it turned out alright. He didn't say too much but Edward pretty much understood what was going on with Bella. I'm working on two more conversations with Emmett and I hope I'll be done with them by the end of the weekend so I can post them before New Year's. Hope to hear from you again soon.

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Outtakes - Conversations II

This was so sweet!  I feel like it was some extra candy I found in my stocking! Thanks so much!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet review. I'm glad you liked it. Now you know how Edward feels. Next, he will make Bella feel some new things.

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Do You Trust Me?

Nothing like going out of 2013 with a BANG! Haha!  Happy new year!  I so love that she invited him to thanksgiving & was extremely comfortable going to the movies!  It made me smile when she woke up & missed that he wasn't in bed with her.  She is warming up & her walls are crumbling.  You are writing it brilliantly!  



Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. I'm blushing right now. I'm really glad you like the story. It won't be long now until Bella takes a big step towards Edward.

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 - Meet the Parents

I hope Edward has some great sneaking skills & makes into Bella's bedroom w/o a Charlie or Sue interruption!  That sneaky kiss that happened in her bedroom caught me off guard.  I LOVED it! I can't get enough when Edward takes control!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! So, you think Edward would disrespect Bella's father by sneaking around and having indecent contact with her? We'll see about that next chapter ;).

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

I loved this chapter, it was super important!  Bella was sooo mushy & I would have to say that the walls are crumbling fast! 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're agreeing with me about the importance of the chapter. I can assure you that Bella's change or heart is going to be way more obvious next week. See you then.

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake - Blessing

I really really like your Charlie!  He was spot on about Jacob & Edward!  I loved when Edward got out of the car, he considered the option of running.  I have been married 15 years & I still consider running when I see my in-laws.  It made me smile really big :D when Edward said to himself about Charlie being a future in-law.  That was some great foreshadowing!

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20 - Kinky

I'm guessing his trip to New Orleans couldn't come at a better time.  Absence makes the heart & lust grow fonder!  ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There's still one chapter to go before Edward leaves for New Orleans. You're right, absence makes the heart grow fonder but what could happen during Edward's absence? I guess we'll see that soon.

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Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 26 - Limbo

I think Jacob is a complete dickhead for offering her dinner bc he didn't give her one in the past after he screwed her over.  Way to bring up something bad.  He seems like he is trying to makeup with her a little to hard if he only has only true friendship on his brain.  I want Edward to tell her not to go but I they haven't talked yet so he doesn't know her true feelings.  I'm so glad to hear you will be updating more often! ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I promise you'll learn about Jacob's intentions in the next chapter. About the quicker updates, the next chapter will probably be up on Sunday. See you then.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV

I'm glad Edward went to her door & stayed all night.  He has soooo much graveling to do!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, he's trying but she's not yet ready to forgive him. But she will eventually. See you soon.

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Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 29 - All Alone

Oh man, it is so hard to even choose sides because you can see where they both screwed up & knowing how each other have been burned in the past they both walked right into it. :(



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The great thing is, you don't need to choose sides. I don't. They both made mistakes. Their biggest mistake is not talking to each other enough. They'll correct that soon. See you Sunday.

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Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30 - Blue Christmas

I'm a good gift giver & I can't figure out what he left.  That was smart of him to leave it at Charlie's.  



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You'll know soon what it is that he gave her. It's really special.

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Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31 - Mail Delivery

I had forgotten about the locket.  It was the perfect gift & the engraving ties into the story perfectly.  Good thing Emmet sent his letter & invite.  It seems it is going to take the whole family to drag these two back together. 



Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. Yeah, Emmett did good sending her the invite. But Edward did even better. His present showed Bella how well he knows her and how much he loves her. They'll be back together soon.

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Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year

I was wondering what his parents would think with the display of clothes tossed all around downstairs.  I think next chapter is going to bring some laughs!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, next chapter will be fun. See you Friday.

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Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33 - A New Beginning

This was great!  The tattoo was a really creative idea.  I loved how Carlisle & Emmet were discussing E & B's sex life over breakfast.  That was funny!



Author's Response: Thanks! But I have to forward the praise for the tattoo idea to my friend. She came up with the general idea. The design was my idea though. I'm glad you liked the breakfast scene. It was only added quite late. See you in the epi.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue - Part II

They have a bun in the oven.  I loved it that they got married privately!  I'm a photographer and have shot tons of weddings.  I always tell the bride & grooms that I meet to keep the wedding about them.  That is the best way to enjoy your wedding day!



Author's Response: A bun in the oven? Did they bake something? I must have missed that ;). I'm glad you liked the wedding. I wasn't sure how readers would react to it. After all it's not the usual. See you Friday.

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue - Part III

That was the best epilogue!  You hit all the best parts & I loved that they were married secretly & it was only about them.  This was a fantastic HEA! 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thank you as well for your continuous support. I'm so glad you liked the HEA. Take care.

A Thin Line by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
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They say there's a thin line between love and hate, even between enemies like Bella and Edward. The problem was there was mostly hate. They can't decide if they'd rather kill the other or rip each other's clothes off. What they do realize is that they can't stay away?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25851 Read Count: 4233
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 12 Oct 2013
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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love needy Edward!

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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Fantastic mushy story! 

If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7974
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Dream That Will Never Come True

Wow I'm hooked! 



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks so much for the great review ;) Im very pleased that you are hooked to the story already! Thank you so much for reading ;) I appreciate it! Xo, Leslie

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Temptation

I hate cheating but when it comes to E&B I feel no rules apply bc as long as they are together all is right in the world! 



Author's Response:

Hello again! I totally understand how you feel. I feel the same way about cheating and as you said though when it comes to E & B as long they are still together its okay, haa. Im so glad you are still on board with reading. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and look forward to hearing from you again ;) Thank you for reviewing! Xo, Leslie

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
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Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - - My Second F#$k Up: Part Two

Maybe he will lay down his pride for the wedding & she will give into him.

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Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - My Second F#$k Up: Part One

So his pride once again gets in the way!

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11 - My Second Fk Up: Part Three

Why can't Mase keep it in his pants and just grovel a little?

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Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 - It's About to Get Messy

Will Isa lean on Mase more now & hopefully he can keep it in his pants when other skanks are around. 

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Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - My First F#$k Up

Oh man!  I guess E & B will not get together anytime soon with what just happened!



Author's Response:

2mpix

 

Thank you for your review. B&E getting together ... hmm, if you were Isa what would you do?

 

Until next update. Don't forget to check out the blog, http://luvtwilight4eva.blogspot.com/p/falling.html

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Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106136
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
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Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

I had to re read this entire series again because i missed them. 

Dreaming in Blood by Discordia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Emotionally distant investment banker Edward Cullen struggles with his attraction to the mysterious vampire who changed him. Angry and denying that they're mates, Edward must reconcile the pull he feels to her. When her past threatens the fragile equilibrium they've established, Edward must decide if he'll forgive her, or abandon her to the monster from her past. Dark, non-canon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62307 Read Count: 3927
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy cow!  I never thought a hand job could be so erotic in the woods!  I was completely shocked at how dominate he was with her. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I was hoping to see him get jealous.  

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm really glad edward has more than one friend & he seems to trust emmett.  

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Your writing is amazing as always! I can feel the tension between them as i read this chapter.

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Are we about to meet Carlisle?

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

With all the jealousy he is feeling, he is going to me a wild mad man when he finally does claim her.  I can't wait!! You only have 14 chapters posted. I really really hope we get to the claiming part before chapter 14 ends. Haha.

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was sone lovee cuddling!

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's odd that Edward didn't smell the other vampire?  He also doesn't trust emmett when i thought he did?  Could this be a setup between emmett & bella to make edward realize his feeling?

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh my gosh it looks like we are not going to get any lemons before 14.  :(

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Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Holy crap no i wasn't expecting that at all and i can only think that edward will be claiming her tonight after that hug!  But very very very sadly there isn't a chapter 15.  I'm crying!!!!

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When you met the right one nothing else matters but what if he is the undead and you are already in a relationship>


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35801 Read Count: 5629
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- When Paths Cross

So Edward is a werewolf.  This is such a different story line.  I love it!

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- There is No Easy Way Out

I hate this part of the story!  Which means yor writing is getting me all angsty!  You have so many twists & turns!  I' m on the edge of my seat! 

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Some Things Cannot Be Forgotten

Crap! At least Edward gave her a new cell.

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- It Must have been Love

So Damon is much worse than I imagined.

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- At the Bottom there is only one way to go

Say yes Dee!

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- The Birth of a Vamp

Oh the craziness these two can & will get into.  Is Jane really out of the picture now?

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 40439
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WOW!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i just want to scream!  The communication between these two is maddening!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Please tell me he hadn't been drinking!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Possessive Edward is always hot!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't even guess how Edward will react.  It could go either way.

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm ready to cry! 

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Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm shocked!  I did not expect this story to take a turn in this direction.  Not only do we not know if Edward survives but after dealing with this catastrophe Alec still needs to be found. 

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Shockingly she didn't get spanked.

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Fantastic lemony goodness!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She is so busted!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally,  they each got some release!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Cockyward makes me smile!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

He is so controlling!  I wonder how many times Bella will try & buck the system while they hangout for the fourth.  It seems he plans on taking her with him back home for as many clothes as he has in the closet.

A Stolen Life by jlove34 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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"Destiny is a name often given in retrospect to choices that had dramatic consequences."

— J.K. Rowling


In the process of returning to Forks, Washington, Edward came across a car whose passenger held a familiar, silent mind. Curious by the phenomenon, he followed them and inadvertently witnessed a horrific accident. Compelled by curiosity, Edward found himself immersed in the blood that he'd so desperately tried to shield himself from four years earlier. Overwhelmed by his vampire nature, he allowed the beast within free rein and savored the alluring liquid.

Consumed by the shame of drinking her blood, Edward brought the girl home to his father and hoped Carlisle would save her life, knowing deep in his heart that she was beyond modern medicine. After much deliberation, Edward accepted the inevitable and changed her himself, nearly killing her in the process. With the treaty in shambles and forgiveness hanging in the balance, could Edward forgive himself for imposing such a fate upon a dying girl? Could Bella forgive a vampire who whisked her away from her family and her friends?

~Edward and Bella~


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20954 Read Count: 1993
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 20 Dec 2013
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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-The Sands of Time

This is such a different twist on the original story.  I'm looking forward to how you tell this! Oh & just to put my opinion out there.... Lemony goodness is always yummy! No need to keep it PG-13.  ;) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I always wondered what would've happened had Edward been unable to control his bloodlust. This is one of my first stories, the other is on this site, as well. And I'm with you on the lemons. All my other stories are NC17, I just wanted this story to be tamer.Thanks for reviewing! - Jamie Anna

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Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-The Rubber Band Effect

Fantastic description of her transformation!  I'm shocked about the mother part & very intrigued with her gift!  She seems like she will be a bad ass Bella! 



Author's Response:

The transformation was a difficult portion to write, but I was pleased with the result. Yes, her being a mother is indeed unfortunate. Her gift is powerful, alright, and she will be "bad ass Bella". Thanks for reviewing-JA

Summary:

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She was innocent, pure and temptation personified. How could he resist her? EPOV. All-Human. Olderward. DiorRob Contest Entry.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4619 Read Count: 5631
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 27 Nov 2013
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Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Let It Burn

It is sexy, yummy & sweet! 

Summary:

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Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87253
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I wish they could just get on the same page.  Edward takes a one step forward & two steps back.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Of course now we have Heidi trying to make a claim! I love that Bella called her Helen.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

There is a storm brewing.  I can feel it! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thanksgiving break is going to be a time of giving thanks to the readers!  Bella the nanny is about to get a bit kinky! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I can't even imagine what their thanksgiving holiday is going to be like.  I'll be surprised if Edward lets her leave the hotel room.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A failed marriage and long divorce left Edward with a lot on his hands. Moving his kids closer to his family in New York was the fresh start he needed so that his family could thrive. Not knowing how he would juggle work and caring for his kids, he jumped at the chance to hire his brother's nanny to care for his own kids. But the moment Bella walked into his house everything changed. She started out as the nanny, but she quickly became everything he wanted.  

 

Bella's POV of this story is posted as Everything I Needed.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101886 Read Count: 89369
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Would Edward surprise Bella & go to the wedding?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

His dreams are going to be interesting!

Summary:

This story is mainly just MC-17 explicit material. Please do not read if you do not like any writings of descriptives or of characters vocalizing during the pleasurable acts of this rating.

 

Bella isn't Edward's, but who is she with? Who is this female named Lizzy that Edward is hanging with and bringing to the house. Why does Alice have someone by her side who has a death wish when he is up against the major. How many places can they get away with doing it in before they are caught? Rose meets a singer.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Edward/OC
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34249 Read Count: 12906
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 07 Dec 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh how I hope Edward will want to be a prt of Bella & jasper!  The names you have the family calling Edward are hilarious! 



Author's Response:

No can do, sweets

Eddy boy has a date with another outcome for him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm so excited to see who Edward has met!  I know you said J/B can only get frisky so much before it gets boring but so far 7 chapters in & you are still coming up with some really creative places.  I was thinking the piano bench was just to make Edward jealous, but you surprised me by Alice's text. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweets. I appreciate the positive reviews

Glad i caught ya off guard with the Alice phone call.

I like how Bella stands up and faces the consequences for whatever she does.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The gassy lady is SOOOO funny! A perfect place for a comic relief & her not having any teeth was priceless! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, and you are welcome.

Summary:

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I should've listened to my wife, now I'm paying the price. She's really mad.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9022 Read Count: 2471
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was absolutely AMAZING!  So well put & spot on with reality!

Summary:

He was the third person to hold me the day I was born. He called me his BabyBell. He said he would never let me go. I've never let him! AH Language and Lemons

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7820 Read Count: 1914
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 27 Dec 2013
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story should have more reviews! I loved it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I'm very excited bout the defilement of Edwards bedroom!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I'm so glad Edward was smart enough to pull the jealousy card on Bella. Her seeing the green eyed monster may just be what makes her admit her feelings. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Hopefully with her being all emotional & needy these next couple of weeks it will soften her heart towards having a relationship with Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I'm sure he is going to say he meant what he said about the mistletoe but he also really means that he loves her too.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I'm crossing my fingers that at the club Bella will get jealous.  That way we will only have a few chapters of them not being together. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I feel like Emmet is not going to figure it out bc he a little dense in the love dept. and on top of that if thy each follow Emmet's advice they won't be together.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Maybe when Edward goes home & tells Bella that he was approached by Heidi it will make Bella see the light!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

How will they survive w/o being together for Christmas Break?  I know you have something lemony up our sleeve!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

I have a permanent grin!  I'm so happy they are together!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh my goodness I hope he remembers all of it! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

3 more chapters with more lemons.  You re sooo good to us!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

OH MY GOODNESS!  You are killing me with the build up of them about to get their freak on!  Granted I could kiss the ground you walk on since Edward is going to be the next chapter! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

My hand is raised to say I'm SUPER excited for public indecency! Dirty mouth Edward is sweet goodness! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Please let them fall into a relationship in Mesa!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Edward's suggestion was perfect! Maybe she'll have to have some mushy talk about him & over the break it will soften her heart. I think Alice didn't pick her up bc it would make her have to call Edward or she had an accident & now Bella will come home early from Christmas Break.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is SOOOOO addicting! All I want to say is "post more, more, more, PLEASE!"

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Is it too soon to ask when are they going to get frisky with each other?  Just kidding!  The slow burn is good and keeps me hooked! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Two updates in one day!  WHOO Hoo! You are too good!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was a cliffie! I'm grinning from ear to ear! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

thank you so much for not letting them go to a bad place.  I am glad the "benefits" chapter is next! I can't wait!  I'm hoping for a celebration with lemons when they come to a mutual decision. ;)