Reviews by 2mpix
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I love that Edward is slow to jump into this situation!  Granted I want him to rule out number one.  Bella wants friends with benefits badly she would let rule number one go w/o. Fight I think. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Bella brought out the big guns!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

He is just so smitten with her! There denial for each other is so good!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

And kudos to you bc you are one of the best writers, when giving us readers, smut at it's finest!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Edward is never going to let her go! It will be so interesting when jealousy comes into play.  Who will admit their feelings first?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That was FAN-flipping-TASTIC!  I so want her to kiss him in the moment. I can tell it's coming. She is already having to remind herself. Maybe there needs to be another work function, so the kissing will be forced. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I can't even get words into my brain to describe how amazing that was and then Edward turning into his super sweet self at the end is the perfect whip cream & cherry atop a lemon tart!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

He wants to be in something or someone even deeper!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Edward is already giving into the idea of Bella being his girlfriend!  That is SUPER exciting! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Best & worst cliffie EVER!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I think I should dance the jig right now or scream from the roof tops; THEY KISSED, THEY KISSED, THEY FINALLY FREAKING KISSED! I'm so happy! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I hope he has some really good wooing techniques because she really isn't budging.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I hope Edward makes her jealous. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Please please please let them get freaky with each other or at least let Bella realize what she is going to lose if she doesn't get it together!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I'm so HAPPY! Thank you for letting them have some snuggling!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

HOLY COW!  Edward should go after her if he was sober but he isn't so I hope he sits & waits for her & that she doesn't do anything to get into trouble.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

I could dance a jig & kiss you right now!  Finally they are going to try for real! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

You are giving us a line that is super exciting!  And next chapter possesiveward, hip hip hooray!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

And the happy ending I hope!;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

No complaints here on the longer chapter!  Dirty talking Edward is SOOO SUPER FANTASTIC! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I'm so glad Alice knows!  I wasn't sure if they would hold off telling her.  I like the way she told her by showing her the phone picture! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

That was very very very funny!  I'm so ready for some love bird action!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Hip hip hooray!  Pictures means hopefully LEMONS galore! :D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I normally like your short chapters but I'm hating this one.  I'm soooo looking forward to chapter 108!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

WOW!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

I have a witch of a mother in law too!  My father in law isn't much better!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Douchebag is going down!  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The man in Bella's bed was second in command of the largest Italian Mafia family in Chicago, and she was the cop that had sworn to take them down.  Follow her as she puts her life and her heart on the line.

 

Completely uploaded today. 

 

Almost at 1,000 reviews!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100675 Read Count: 38876
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And here we goooo!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He is the one that disappeared into the club.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Holy crap she shot him!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh wow! Now we have some problems!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward mason is the missing son of the Cullen's.  I think they gave him a different last name so they could get him into politics.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella is moving to the dark side.  Or the yummy side.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He is making her into a cop that he has total control of.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So Bella & edward might know each other.  I am wondering if Edward was kidnapped as a child and that's why maybe e was in foster care,

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Staying with Edward already! Here we go!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

They are flirting & she likes the view!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Something is just a pawn.  I wasn't sure.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

He left his mark on her!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Was that a dream?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So she got the holding she wanted!  Aro is dead!  She is becoming the perfect mob wife. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jacob is a part of this too.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

He does want to marry her!!!! That does make me very very happy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

He really wants to be with her but she neeeeds so much softening!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Please say yes Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yes I wanted a yes but I understand that I can't have it yet.  I did enjoy the morning wake up!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

She is getting so much great training with all she is learning from Edward!  I love that Edward put Emmett in his place about Rosalie!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What a way to answer him! Nothing like giving him something to live & kill for!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I didn't catch any signs of her being preggers. I normally do so that was really good writing!

The new kids by sinister thing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Isabella Swan is one of 8 children belonging to Millionare Charlie Swan and Brazilian super model, hotel heiress, and billionaire investor Renee Silva. Living in Rio, Brazil these kids are not accustom to the word no, they party, have sex, fight, and get what ever they want. When her and 3 of her sisters are sent over to live in America with their father, they find out that their father has been keeping a huge secret from them. The girls are told to accept it and deal with it... well they have a certain way of dealing with things, and it's not pretty. 

Warning: violence, blood, graphic sex scenes, under age sex, and lots and lots of cussing. 

Ps. These kids are super spoiled.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21070 Read Count: 7795
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2014 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

There are so many kids to keep up with! I love all of them already, Especially the twins!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: rough housing

Thank you for this yummy yummy update!  I needed something to get my mind off your last update of your other story.  ;). This will help me have fantastic dreams & no nightmares!  I love how Isabella & Edward had a knock down drag out! Now what does Alejandro & Edward have going on?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't even imagine how they are ever going to get along?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: The new kids

I found it!! I copied the link and pasted it. I can see why i was typing it wrong. It is Capital I lowercase L THEN iaADAMS. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: The new kids

I found it!! I copied the link and pasted it. I can see why i was typing it wrong. It is Capital I lowercase L THEN iaADAMS. 

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185509
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Relentless

This was such a great ending!  I didn't eect him to runaway with her!  I love it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait for Bella to be ravished either ! ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Way to step up your game Edward! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

He really is such a jerk but that makes for the best story! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Edward is definately not used to a good girl.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Bella consistently looks for trouble. I wonder how Edward is going to react?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Thank goodness she thought to call Edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Someone is going to die again for this escape.  Edward is going to hit the roof!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

This actually makes me laugh because after all that has happened in this day she will try & run again.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

If only Edward would have wooed her.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Holy cow Alice just saved her butt literally!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

One crazy uncle coming right up.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

You continue to amaze me with your creativity!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

It really is shocking that no matter how big of a jerk Edward is you make it so that we actually feel bad for him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Thank goodness for the promise of a HEA!  Things are heating up & the pressure is on! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Let all the killing begin!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Bella can't seem to catch a break.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

This is how he will win her love!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Once you have killed once, what harm is it to start adding to your list?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

I'm can't wait to see how Bella is at the police station.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Welcome to married life Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

She already has such a bond with him.  I love it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

I'm so glad they finally talked!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

The lady in the street worries me.  Is that Heidi?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Bella being naughty and Edward liking it!



Author's Response:

OKay I am just gonna thank you for all your wonderful reviews here instead of bugging you by replying to each one.

 

So thank you :D x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Finally Bella got wht she wanted!  I'm hoping garret made it but I'm guessing he didn't. 



Author's Response:

She did indeed. Poor Garrett :(

 

Thanks for the review x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

These two just can't seem to catch a break.   Every time she finally starts to feel safe another incident occurs.  I'm looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. The next chapter is with my beta.

 

I know. Lets hope they catch a break soon x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Relentless

Hopefully this will be a wake up call to him & he will spend more time with her.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! The next chapter of Relentless is with my beta and should be back soon.

I def think this will be a wake up call for him x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Relentless

I hate dr. Donna!  No no no Edward doesn't need to stay away.  Grr I feel more angst coming.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. The next chapter is with my beta x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Relentless

Oh my goodness!  Just when they make a little headway.  I wonder if the doctor was working with Jake?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Relentless

Thanks for this update!!! What is Jasper not telling her?  I have missed this possesive Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Relentless

Now can they finally be together. I just want them to be solid.



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the review. :) The next chapter is written and has just been sent to my beta and pre-readers. Thank you for your continued patience x x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2015 Title: Relentless

Romance is going to bloom in Rome!



Author's Response:

HEY!! Thank you for your review. Sorry for the slow update. March was a super busy month and I am still struggling with tiredness. Chapter 33 is now written and with my betas xx

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Relentless

The comments about all the rocks were too funny!  I'm so glad jake will be dead!  

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

devil

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The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Devilward is sooo yummy!  What did he mean that Victoria won't put up with her smart mouth?  Would he allow Victoria to hurt her? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story only gets better & better! I would have to say the Devilward is the hotter than vampward! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh crap! I'm guessing Roselie has once again snuck into the castle.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thank you for this awesome chapter!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I'm hooked!  Not that I would expect anything less from one of your stories.  I was so excited to get an alert that you had a written something new!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I LOVE his powers! Bell is in sooo much yummy trouble! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You are always keeping us on the edge of our seats! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a beautiful scene you ended this chapter with.  The whole time I really thought Edward was going to make her more like him.  Now I'm thinking she is going to soften his devilish ways.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is that how Rosalie keeps her beauty by swimming in pure blood?  How does Edward not know what she is planning. Maybe bc he trusts her? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Will Bella get pregnant with a devil spawn?  Roselie is just asking to be brutally killed by him. 

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Get to bowing Rosalie! This chapter made me so HAPPY!  I thought it would be a while longer before he told court about her.  I'm so glad everyone knows. Now I'm guessing the backstabbing will begin. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm so excited to tell Lady Rosalie!  She will have to bow to the queen!