Reviews by 2mpix
Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I LOVED this chapter!  Thank goodness the boys ran into the woods!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

She is already warming up.  I'm so excited!  On top of that he is going to bring Seth with him because he owes him.  I wonder if seeing her father & Alice will help?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh this is a wonderful twist!  I hope she is still wise enough to be on guard even if she doesn't remember the traitor.  I'm so looking forward to Edward having to woo her all over again. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It was best not to tell Alice.  I wonder though if Emmet is really in on it.  Rose never confirmed anything to her father.  Rose beheaded will be a glorious thing!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm so glad he howled her the passages.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What will the king do this time to woo her?  The butterflies sounded amazing!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think this story is great!  It doesn't matter if the location is correct that is why this is fanfiction!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I just want to shake her & make her say "YES"

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That his release even gets put on a pillow is hilarious! Their wedding night is going to be crazy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

There is nothing better than a madly in love Edward! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I would have to say you are evil!  Although that means the next chapter shall be extra juicy!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So cute! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

She is pregnant yeah!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am going to amazon right now to get my copy!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I am so happy to see this update!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just love love love this story!!! Thank you for updating!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I bet Emmet doesn't know.  Rosalie & her father planned this whole thing & is setting Emmett up. 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Maybe now she can start forgiving Edward & that stupid idiot can stop doing coke!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope she dreams of all the good things she will have if she stays.  I'm guessing she is having a boy.  I can't see her wanting to leave a little girl motherless in this family. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

They have finally reconnected!  Now what does Jane have up her sleeve?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I could just scream! I so want her to have a good reaction to him, but I'm figuring it is going to only cause a bad one. Bummer!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nothing like adding just a little more drama to the house!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The anonymous must be Eddie.  What crap is he starting now? E/B are finally trying to reconnect.  I'm sure everything isn't going to be fixed with just a little romp but at least Bella is letting him touch her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was such fantastic closure for Victoria.  I thought Felix punishing him was so perfect!  I hope Bella doesn't get kidnapped.  I also have hope since Bella has been sleeping in his bed.  That baby is beginning to soften her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update!  I'm so glad she is letting him touch her & be a little closer to her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So is Little Eddie working with him?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I feel so sad for Edward!  Bella, is wanting the baby now too.   I don't think Edward even realized that. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So now that HUGE bomb has been dropped!  I'm so glad Bella told him she loved him.  Thanks so much for the quick update!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor Bella, now Nonna is against her.  I hope she gives Nonna a good tongue lashing!  I also really really hope that Edward & Bella have some lemony goodness so they can reconnect. ;) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm so glad Bella confronted Nonna. She is getting ballsy in her last trimester! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was a cliffie!  I was super excited to see this update! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm guessing dimitri & his wacka doo son!  I really hope Ronny isn't dead!  Bella just starts nesting & now she is kidnapped.  CRAP!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank you for not ending his w/o Edward!  I was worried!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I shouldn't be surprised by another cliffie but once again I am.  I hope Sam doesn't take him to lock up. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Is the baby going to be named Reilly?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Did Sam just save his own life or what?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for that last scene with them.  It wouldn't have been complete w/o it. 

Midnight Dark by lovehymn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

Two years. That's all I had. Two years to leave, explore the human world without the confines of Voltera's walls constantly reminding me of my impending doom. Two years were what I was given, two years to explore what's out there for me, before having to make the most life altering decision I would ever be faced with. Or so I thought.    

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8440 Read Count: 980
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope you add to this story!  I love it that Bella is wanting human Blood & Edward has Jessica Stanley as a girlfriend.  Yikes!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Complications

I'm so happy you updated!  I love this!  It makes me laugh that she let Edward hear all the ways she would kill Jessica.  I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Summary:

 

Banner TWCS TST

 

My name is Bella Swan and this is the most awkward moment in my life, so far. Actually, skip the 'so far': I don't think things can be more awkward than the way things are now. I'm lying in bed with Edward Cullen. I know a lot of girls would kill to be in my place, but me? Not so excited. We can hear LOUD sex noises, problem is: It's not us.. - AU/AH E/B J/A


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 635 Read Count: 429
[Report This] Published: 15 Jan 2014 Updated: 15 Jan 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I want to know what noises do J & A have to make that will break the ice between B & E?

Summary: Past Featured Story

concealed

 

 

 

 

 

Oscar night in Tinseltown and Bella Swan is all dressed up with nowhere to go. What happens when her uptight coworker isn't as buttoned up as she thought?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11460 Read Count: 4649
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2014 Updated: 25 Feb 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

I enjoyed this very much!

Summary:

OOC. AH. Charlie was one of the few things that connected Edward and Bella. She loathed him while he worshipped the ground he walked on. It was this connection that would turn their lives upside down.

The Anthem of the Swan

Banner by Vivi En

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16898 Read Count: 4692
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Apr 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Thy Will be done

Is Charlie making them move with each other?  There is so much good stuff to discover, I can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Life Unexpected

Are Edward & Alice adopted by Charlie? Since He wants them to Marry they must not be related by blood.



Author's Response:

You'll know as we go along. Thanks.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Naked Truth

He is completely lusting after her.  Them living together is going to be interesting!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Poison

The cat & mouse game with Edward & Bella is going to be soooooo good! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Glitches

So excited about this update!  I love seeing that he has a soft side.  Poor young Bree! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Spring of lies

I hope Edward is sweet to her when he gets home.  What a huge transition for her.  I can only imagine that Charlie while he was alive thought that the two of them would make a wonderful family and would be perfect for each other.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I'm so glad this epi had such a happy ending!  Hopefully, Edward got his baby boy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

And he is till alive!  More torture to come!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I think Charlie has began his attack! CRAP!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

The letter he wrote was absolutely beautiful & full of love!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Our Edward has a very romatic side with his hard mafia side.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I hope Bella gets to do a little torturing of Charlie!

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I do hope Edward gets his boy!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

This is some serious stuff! Will they make it to the wedding before Charlie gets to her?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Yes I enjoyed this!  So cute that he kept reading to her.  I was hoping they brought him a cot or something to sleep on. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I bet she wakes up soon!  The poor girl needs less drama. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Wow!  That was intense!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I really think that Charlie should have suffered more.  I loved Bella's reaction about the ice cream!



Author's Response:

I needed to add a comical eliment every chance. Bella loves fun and adventures if you look at all the flash backs their about Bella having fun with Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I have a feeling Edward is going to be very delighted with mistress Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I am so excited to see the punishment & torture they put Charlie thru. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Holy cow!  I didn't expect this.  Will the babies make it?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

It is so funny that he is adamant that there is a boy in there.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Every chapter makes me want to kill Charlie over & over again!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I ope Amun doesn't know where Bella is.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Bella now will have a ton of people on her side of the wedding. 

Summary:

Isabella Swan has her eyes on the prize. Unfortunately that means she has to steal from the most feared Mobster around, Edward Cullen. Isabella is about to find out just how possessive Edward is over his things. Mobward, Possessiveward, and a little bit of Domward. Lemons AH.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11652 Read Count: 12648
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2014 Updated: 19 Aug 2018
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting

Yes yes yes!  I'm so excited!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 2: The Hit

So what is she going to have to do i wonder? I do love that she burns stuff up! I feel like her nickname could be bondella.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Finding

Wow!  She is much more of a killer than i could have guessed. Love it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was my review for chapter 4: ( it won't let me review) Crap james is alive!! Edward is such a DOUCHEBAG!! He & bella are going to go toe to toe! they are both attracted to each other but their egos are both so huge!!

chapter 5:  what is bella going to wear to the party i wonder?? Now i also see how alice & jasper are perfect a match!! If james is at the party bella is going to lose it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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To Edward Masen, Bella Swan was nothing more than his daughter's best friend. That all changed when they both applied for the same weekly writing course. She didn't appear to be the young girl who had played with his daughter since her family moved in next door. What will Edward do when he realizes that he's developing a very forbidden attraction for a woman twenty-five years his junior


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58 Read Count: 18206
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2014 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Forbidden Attraction

I finally got to finish this. You did them justice! I like the ending!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Forbidden Attraction

Thanks for the update!!

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I forgot to mention in my last review that the gorilla song is so so so perfect for this story!  Now for this chapter.... I enjoyed the pictures being added it only adds to the story.   I loved that he spoke to her on the train.  It is actually a perfect start to a relationship for her.  It seems non- committal in her brain but she is already so addicted to it.  I'm very excited about this story.  The subway idea is pure genius!  I have never ridden a subway but if I ever do I'm sure this story will come to mind. 



Author's Response:

I love the Gorilla song!!! I listened to it while writing too. I'm glad you liked the pictures and hope to be better at posting them next week!!! I'm glad you like it!!! xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

All I can do is smile!  Cocky Edward is the best! 



Author's Response:

I love a cocky Edward too! Cocky, possessive, controlling, sweet, sexy, and smells good. All wrapped up in one. xoxxoxo

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't believe Emmet rushing in like that and blurting out stuff about Edward's past.  

I love how cozy & confident Bella is with him at the club.  I want him to really kiss her and just throw caution to the wind! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm so glad they worked everything out!  All I can think is too all the stupid people who didn't think this would be worth reading they completely missed out on a fantastic story!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes he is waking up!  I can't believe there ar only 2 more haters left!  I really, really, REALLY hope we get to see her experience Anthony and be able to look at him.  Please!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh thank goodness he is always up to the challenge of a rival.  I really didn't mean to quote the "I of the tiger" song.   I would like to put a bluet in Phil's head.  He probably called the paps.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I LOVE how they are crazy for each other!  Leaving her scent all over her that has to be the kinkiest!  If Alice is in the office she is going to smell her.  Edward will be needing to stop off at home & change ;)!  I'm glad they met & got along, it will make it better in the long run. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Tee hee. I'm so glad you are enjoying it!!!! xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see what he does when he gets her alone.  Will he intercept her dinner date? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Saturday in this story can not come fast enough.  The control he has over her is delicious!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy cow Edward aka "Anthony" is very HOT!  He is going to have to carry her to a cab when he is done with her.  There is no way that her legs are not going to be jelly! 



Author's Response:

LOL...I know!!!! He turns her to mush many times .... stay tuned! xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You just get better & better!  Or should I say you make them get hotter & hotter! I can't believe anyone in their right mind would stop reading this story.  It too delicious to walk away from!  It is their loss!  You are AMAZING!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I needed to hear that! I love this story and it's so difficult not to give it all away when the story is being questioned!!! I'll see you next week. xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You made me laugh when Edward spit out his beer when looking at the lake.  I also loved it when he was walking away from her & he turned around and was smiling at her.  He is starting show some real interest in her.  I can't wait for your next update to see how Edward starts giving her attention & how she has to keep choosing Anthony.  I'm interested to see how long it takes for her to wish that Edward was Anthony. Also, it's a given your next update will be steamy & mouth watering so I'm excited about that too!  ;)



Author's Response:

You guys know it's getting close to the Edward and Bella show! I think you'll like it!!!! Thanks so much for reading!!!  

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You definately did not disappoint in the hot & steamy department! On top of a garage parking lot might just be even better than the subway! What is going o happen at Alice's party?  I can wait to read chapter 10!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow!  I love the pics! ESPECIALLY the shower shot of Edward! That picture could be it's own chapter and we could all just look & drool. ;)

Great planning on your part on how they could continue on.  I couldn't even try to guess.  It was smart of Anthony to end it.  I really thought that when Edward said good girl after she took the shot she would have gotten an inkling of who he is.  Granted she did take cues from him when he signaled her to step away from Stephen.  

I am wondering if the party was a set up between alice & Rose to purposely push Edward & Bella together?  I'm happy Bella turned Stephen down & was bold enough to make up a coffee date with Edward.  

I'm looking forward to Bella's bought a next chapter.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That kiss was super steamy! 



Author's Response:

Thanks 2mpix ... I need a lemon here soon, don't you???

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm so glad you are sticking with this story!  That guest commentor must be a complete idiot to think this story Isn't worth reading!  

I am giddy at seeing how close these two are getting but still have so far Away!  The tantra chair conversation was very funny!  I also love that she admitted the painting was him right before he left.  

I have no idea what you have in store for another Anthony visit.  Will it be Edward or will it be Anthony? I can barely stand the wait!  :D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

The subway sex was great!  It was a perfect ending to Anthony!  I love how steamy Edward & Bella are already getting.  The cabin stay will be hot & heavy.  The one thing I'm pondering..... does she end up pregnant from Anthony & is that how Edward has to come clean about who he is?  Since Edward knows she just had sex with someone it would make sense that if they have sex in the cabin he would use a condom. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This was such a sweet surprise.  I hope he took some of Bella sleeping.  I'm a photographer & I know that would be my most favorite pictures.  Bella's dream was funny!



Author's Response:

He did take some of her sleeping ... ;)  See you next week!!!! xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I know it was the right thing to do him behaving himself at the hotel but I so didn't want him to.  Phil is going to be an issue. I look Forward to seeing how Edward deals him. Victoria has me stumped!  If he wasn't in love with her why was he engaged to her? Bella no doubt will put her in her place! 

The photographer that Rosalie wants to talk about, I'm wondering if it's Anthony/Edwards work?

i'm not sure if I have mentioned this before or not but I LOVE when you show us pictures of what the characters are wearing! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This was so great!  I loved the interaction with Vicky!  What Bella says about not being introduced was priceless!!  

I wish after their love fest she reconsiders going to meet his parents but I'm guessing she will still be a bit gun shy & won't go. 

The love scene was fantastic! I loved how he was able to experience more things with her visually.  And always my favorite where he tells her she is his & that he wanted her from the very beginning.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it 2mpix!!! See you Saturday!! xox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aro is completely disgusting!  I am so looking forward to next weeks chapter!  I have a feeling it is going to start of with a very Big Bang! ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Grrrr!  I didn't expect her to find out like that.  Is his art going to bring them back together.  Hopefully she will only are a dy to realize he can have the bet of both worlds or should I say both side of yummy Edward!



Author's Response:

LOL ... that's what my pre-reader wants too ... the best of both worlds! See you Saturday. xox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh this doesn't look good for Edward right now.  I love that Alice pointed out that Bella fell for both of them.  Hopefully Bella can have another dream realizing she have the best of both worlds with Edward! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Esme will help her see the light!  I'm glad that Rosalie was truthful with her about what her opinion with Edward & how she reacted.  I also loved Bella's reaction to hearing he went to the Catskills!  She is on her way to forgiving him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This update was great & I 100% agree Seth needs to be fired!  He is an idiot with his diarrhea of the mouth.  Loose lips sink ships Seth.  Grrrrr!  Poor Edward, Alice really laid into him but thank goodness she laid down the law to jasper not to send him away.  

I hope Esme is able to get thru to Bella.  She is needing a mom's perspective.  Kudos to Edward for thinking about calling Esme!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Pure genius on your part for her still being on the phone.  I can't stop smiling!  Phil is such a pig & I'm glad that Edward reprimanded Seth. Now how will things go when he picks her up?  When he drops her off will he be invited up to her apartment so they can have some freaky Edward/ Anthony make up sex?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Cliffie's suck, but this chapter didn't!  Finally Bella pulls her head out of her behind!  So I guess Edward won't be able to leave for Ireland for a while nor will he be able to have Anthony make an appearance for a while either since he probably can't overly excerpt himself after two gun shots.  Bummer!  Hopefully, Bella will be his nurse!


 

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This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478798
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm so glad that they finally hit the lemonade full blast!  Thank you so much to the reviewer that made you want to give us a bonus chapter!  I'm happy that his family knows all about her.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see how they meet.  I have about a thousand questions going through my head.  Way to keep us captivated and yearning for more!