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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625277
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

umm nothing

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

uh not fair

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

no dont let go

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was awesome. you should totally go for it.

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

great story

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20819
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

lol he squished her

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh Dickward is out

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ohhh she is getting under his skin already

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

equal opportunity hater lol

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bastward lol

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mike the ass bandit

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Funshine Crack Fairy. too funny

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward to the rescue

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

lol Edcicle

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

kiss the poor girl

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

good job on this chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

poor Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

goEdward

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awe

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

lol assmagnet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

awe so sweet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

yuk Jessica blech

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awe

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow sexy

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

gotta love it

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

go Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

nc 17 probabaly but great job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so sad

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oh shit

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

awe how sad dickhead Charlie

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

omg too sad

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

wow awesome

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

uh oh

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

yay

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

awesome

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Epilogue

wow awesome ending

Author's Response:

EEEKK

 

thank you for ALL your reviews. 

so glad you liked the story! 

thanks again!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken

reading on

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home

;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice

poor Jasper

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out

awe he likes her

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee

clothing emergency lol

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts

yay second date

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Normal Girl

lol new and improved with a cat

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Flashbacks

poor Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks

nice bday

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella's Story

I feel her pain

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed

yay happy day

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer

wow sexy

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay

sweet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble

that was sweet of him

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Girl Talk

funny friends

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella's Song

go Alice

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!

good chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide

lol great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother

hot foreplay

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother

hot foreplay

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is

nice family

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Longest Night

about time someone didnt write that she had an orgasm her first time reality sucks

Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't either my first time.

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Our Holiday

yay great chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Making Plans

awe

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Surprises

wow deep

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Nightmare

i know what you mean i lived through that shit too

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Two Years Later...

this was a great story you did wonderfully

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

fs

Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

awesome job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Freedom

great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

wonder what it says hmmm

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

yay

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Daddy

fantastic

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tequila

right wow just wow

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Okhotnichya

stupid Tanya kill her off please

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Threshold

Bella needs to kick her ass

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Justice

yay *claps feverishly*

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Infatuation

woo hoo

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Velvet

great time all around

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Breathing

so exciting

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mockingbird

awesome job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

lol it was just a dream

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sailing

sweet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Decompensate

cant wait

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Redeemed

awesome

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Superstar

yay *claps

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Sacrifice

so mean

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

wow

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Lucky

great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Goodbye

sad ending

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Confrontation

hmm who could it be

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Conundrum

poor Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Unstoppable

cool beans

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Proposition

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Sanctuary

I hate lawyers

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Change

you are just evil

Reviewer: pixdog Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Elphaba

wow sexy