Date: 01 Nov 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 86
I have a feeling that "Paul Keller" would be James and he was upset with Victoria for getting it to where Bella could get that office space. I hope Edward and Bella talk and they can all the pieces of tjus puzzle together. Oh Bella is going to feel so quilty about this.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 86
And I bet it's tied to Bella so way
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 85
O.O is she in the fire!?
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 85
Glad Bella is becoming more open to Edward. Loving her new confidence.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 85
Hmmmm...I am thinking that some sort of set up is happening right now! I can't wait for more and I hope that Edward and Emmett stay safe!*biting nails*
I love this! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 85
Did James get to Victoria?
Was the fire set to distract everyone from being around Bella as her layer of protection?
Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 85
I miss being able to hit the next button! Haha, loved Alice!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 85
Alice is so good she knows what she is doing you need a variety of people to come to be a success.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 85
Hmmm I think James might have struck again... It's too big a coincidence. Plus more publicity also means that Bella will be attracting attention from the bad people as well as the good people.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 85
No angst yet but I feel it coming.
nice opening, thanks Alice.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 84
Hot, steamy and very sweet!!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 85
I thought there was going to be drama this chapter? Not very dramatic.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 85
Hm... Is the missing Victoria another pointer?!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 85
Sounds like Alice did a wonderful job
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 85
why would they look for victoria? what building is on fire....sorry i guess i spaced out...
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 85
Oh.. no!! Is Victoria caught in the fire??
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 85
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 85
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 85
I loved it how wonderful they had a great vacation and the grand opening went great now will the boys stay safe and where is Victoria
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 85
I wish these chapters were longer. That is truly my only complaint. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 84
A grand chapter, yes indeed, the setting for their first time was awesome.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 84
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 24 Oct 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 84
I liked this and the previous chapters! Yes, Bella could have included Edward in the discussion of not using protection, but she is absolutely right and I really hope that the two of them will be blessed later on!
It is a perfect weekend for the two of them and I'm curious for the opening!
Date: 24 Oct 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 84
I thought it was appropriate for their first time, especially given Bella's issues. Since there was so much buildup to it, I'm a little surprised they didn't talk about it before hand but maybe they both felt awkward about it. Overall they had a great weekend. Hopefully this will help carry them through what is to come.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 84
Yay! Finally! And I love the longer chapter :)
Date: 23 Oct 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
thanks! i did that before and it still wouldnt, i think because i was in the same tab as the "link" for the chapter.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 84
chapter 83 and 84 are both empty for me. i cant see anything
Author's Response:
There was a snafu with the email links. Go to the story itself then click on the chapter link.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 83
this chapter is empty for me. do you know why?
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 84
Sweet date and after time. 
Date: 23 Oct 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 84
This is so fantastic!! I love it!! :)
Date: 23 Oct 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 84
Nothing was posted for this chapter or the last!
Author's Response:
There was a snafu with the links in the email...they are posted. Manually click on Caught in the Flames and go the chapter that way
Date: 23 Oct 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 84
The pics are very beautiful once again;) and I think a more graphic lemon wasn't needed here, as anyone could get the picture how amazing they are together....
time to get "home" soon...
Date: 23 Oct 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 84
Perfect! !!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 84
Thanks for clarifying Bella's actions of throwing the condom to the floor. It raised questions in my mind.
Will you allow Bella to get pregnant again?
Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 84
I always love bella and edward as parents (hint, hint)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 84
Wow! Absolutely wonderful and very hot and sweet!
Date: 23 Oct 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 84
Good lemon. Fit the storyline so far. You can always ramo it up later!
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 84
It was just the right amount of lemon for these two..Bella just getting back in the saddle so to speak...glad Edward took the reason Bella didn't want to use protection well...but then we already know if it were up to him they'd get married tomorrow...See you next time :)
Date: 23 Oct 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 84
Loved it! :)
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 84
at long last, they express their love physically! I'm so glad they are becoming closer.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 84
Oh I loved it so sweet and beautiful he is so romantic I wish he was mine update soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 84
I'm putting in my pre-order now for the fireman's calendar!
Date: 23 Oct 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 84
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Oct 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 84
I think it was absolutely perfect!
Date: 22 Oct 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 82
Good chapter!!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 83
Ummmmm is it supposed to. Be blank?
Author's Response:
There were bad links sent in the email. Click on the title and go to chapter 83 manually.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 83
Aw, please let them be able to have a baby. They deserve that. ;)
Date: 22 Oct 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 83
I'm sad! No chapter :(
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 83
where's the story???? :(
Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 83
Nothing like a romantic bubble bath. This Edward is so great, very patient. And it sounds like Bella is finally listening.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 83
what is going on with this story cant read it
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 83
I read this over on ffn because I could not open it here what is going on with this site anyone know??? I loved the chapter he is the perfect man and knows how to makes his women relax
Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 83
He has so much power with his words! It's really beautiful to watch them grow together so much more with each chapter:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 83
He's so wonderful! Can I have one of him to take home?
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 83
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 83
Love that they are moving forward.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 83
Is it just me, or is anyone else unable to read the chapter?
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 83
He's so loving with her. It's wonderful.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 82
Oh man, I was so thinking Bella's business should be called Black Swan. BUUUT She's nice and sweet so White swan is Perfect. I'm excited to see her business bout to pick up yeah!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 37
leaving you some love :)
Date: 20 Oct 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
I just want to tell you how much I am enjoying your story. I started it earlier tonight and it is a hard one to put down. Since it is almost 2:30 in the morning I really need to sleep. Sorry I didn't review before this but I just really couldn't stop and take the time away from reading. thank you for your words and please please please say you are going to complete this story. I usually don't start stories that are WIP but I took a chance on you :) Have a happy day! ~~kathy
Date: 20 Oct 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 82
Thank you for the update.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 81
Loved it! Leah is hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 82
Oh Bella, that saw a bold move!
I can't imagine Edward could refuse an offer like that. ;)
Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 44
That must be nice to be able to do!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 82
Conserving water?? Great ideal Bella! ;)
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 18 Oct 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 82
I'm sorry, for Rose, but agree with Edward, she did it to herself...
And the beginning of their vacay soubds more than promising
Date: 18 Oct 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 82
Ooh.....naughty for leaving us hanging. Next one, long & lemony, right?
Date: 18 Oct 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 82
Hmm..tough choice Edward. I could see him wanting to say yes but then also wanting to make their first time together romantic. Can't wait to see what he decides...
Date: 18 Oct 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 82
Sounds like fun to me.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 82
Awww you just had to stop there...lol...looking forward to the answer to that question :)
Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 82
Traffic can kill all plans. At least they enjoyed the ride by talking.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 82
Agreed Rose brought it all on herself. Glad Em is not taking her back. Naughty cliffy women
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 82
Oh so their weekend begins and even with the traffic it's a good start
Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 82
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 82
Oooh, shower time!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 82
Oh no she didn't! ;)So excited for more! :)
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 82
Whaaaaaaa! Really? soo soo mean.