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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 67

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 67

Hot damn that was sexy and sensual now I hope she goes for the blow job but I think it will be the hand job more please and fast

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 67

Blow!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 67

Blow but I think that maybe too much for her right now

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 67

that was sweet and sexy....hand job, maybe, because they're going slowly?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 67

good

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 67

Sweeeeeeet.  That was awesome. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 67

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 67

Excellent chapter!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 67

Can't wait for next chapt.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 67

You go girl! Good for you Bella. As for the return favor, I bet it is a hand job because I could see Bella wanting to take it one step at a time. But she might surprise us..

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 67

Woot woot!  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 67

I am loving that Bella is trusting Edward.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 67

Whaaa, come on give me some more.

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 67

Le sigh;)

 

decisions, decisions...

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 67

ONG! This is so great!! Decisions, decisions! lol I can't wait to see what you come up with! ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 66

His sister is rude.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 66

LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 66

Lemonade is always much more palatable than drama!
Nice to see that Bella's keeping Alice in check.

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 66

Can't wait for the next updates.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 66

I loved it poor Edward but Bella will help him feel better update soon

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 66

(Raises hand) but given Edward's condition, maybe he should lay there and Bella can do the work. Hopefully the drama doesn't ruin the barbeque.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 66

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 66

I love the idea of the BBQ and prepare myself for the drama... Raises BOTH hands for some lemonade;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 66

Alice is def hyper and annoying but I guess you gotta love family.  LOL

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 66

Me, I do!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 66

I love this and I can't wait for drama and lemonade! ;)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 66

Lemon!  Lemon!  Edward and Bella are made for each other. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 66

Alice is a little pushy lol

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 66

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 66

=)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 66

Yes, spicy lemonade please.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 66

*raises hand*  Alice sure can be a pain sometimes.....

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 66

*hands raised here*  please let them be ok from all the drama!!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 66

Bam 'both hands in the air'  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 66

I want lemonade! !!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with sugar on top. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 66

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

Great chapter!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 65

Bella seems to make a good progress, she's content in her new life and can work over her past - and Charlie is a good help, since he's got the chance to get to know her and I'm really looking forward to his trip down to her :-) Plus he will be a good backup once James finds her (because I'm sure he will, unfortunately) and then he and Renee will feel the wrath of Charles Swan for hurting is baby  girl ;-)

But let's see what happens at the BBQ and which drama you exactly plan on releasing to us ;-)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 65

:) ilu bella

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 65

Maybe I can stay up-to-date with the updates, and I really appreciate you keeping us informed!

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 65

Happy labor day weekend!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 65

:)

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 65

Honestly keep waiting for James or/Renee to make an appearance. .....

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 65

Yeah, ready for some drama.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 65

 like a good girl i'll wait!!!( lol ) read you soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 65

Alice is to funny she is a good friend to Bella

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 65

I am very excited for more and I can not wait for EPOV!!! :)=)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 65

Cant wait for Charlie's visit.

glad bella getting better

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 65

I see Alice is still a manipulative busybody....some things never change....

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 65

Alice may be as subtle as a Mac truck but at least she doesn't push Bella for information or feelings she isn't ready to share.
Labor day bbq, WooHoo. Let the grilling begin

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 65

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 65

I'm with Alice here;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 65

Glad things are moving forward.  Glad that Bella can talk to Alice about things.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 65

Glad to see that bella is expanding her business. It will help her get some balance. Also, I am sure that edward will wait for as long as it takes. And I am sure it wont be forever.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 65

=)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 65

loving this

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 65

Glad her and Charlie are talking.  Renee needs to pay dearly.   Witch.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 65

Wow well everything is coming along her business is growing Edward is getting better and going back to work in the field now what will happen next will the bar b q be a hit update soon

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 65

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 64

Oh yeah, she will say ILY, very soon. I am ready for drama, where is James, I need to see him get what he deserves for doing so much damage to Bella. And where is Charlie?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 64

Bella has made such progress. Edward is so patient. They are so cute and they will have a stronger relationship because it isn't based on just physical attraction. They are learning to love the whole person.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 64

Awwwwwww! Be still my heart!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 64

Wow, he is sooo freaking sweet!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 64

I can't imagine the fear in trying to start over; the idea of being vulnerable in another persons arms after the terror she experienced must be so overwhelming.
I understand Edward's reason for saying I Love You, but I'm wondering if Bella can put her faith in that statement at this point of their relationship.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 64

I want one of him OMG what better hands to be in ;)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 64

Not enough men out there like him!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 64

Oh I think she will say it back soon, it won't take too long, he's just the perfect man for Bella and she knows that :-) She will regain confidence, because he makes her stronger and gives her the self-confidence that she needs :-)

Looking forward to the next part!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 64

:):)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 64

I want a man like him too....so I know what you mean.  This was an awesome beginning for their shared intimacy.  Very lovely! She might take a while to say it back

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wow he is so sweet and caring and soft just what she needs more please

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 64

Awww so sweet. Lol he loves candles too. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 64

=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 64

Ah so sweet! Good one Edward. Hang in there. Bella will get there eventually.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 64

Why did you stop there? Really you are kidding me!!?? Love ;this story, keep posting.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 64

Darn, wish the chapter was longer. :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 64

I love it! I can't wait for more!! :)=)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 64

So glad that she is able to start moving forward with him.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 64

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 64

Just swooning around here... ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 64

Woo Hoo for the ILY!!!

ily

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 63

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 63

I loved it wow they needed to talk but damn Edward just knows what to say he is perfect for her

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 63

So sweet:)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 63

I love that he is willing to be so open and honest with her about his past.  I love even more that he is patient with her. and loving.

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 63

just what every woman wants to hear they are georgous but you have a good heart and are a great person.... 

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 63

I'm glad she listened and didn't run.  Now to the good stuff!

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 63

You leave us hanging!!!   No!!!  Good chapter love this story!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 63

Irina and Tanya may be pretty from all the aesthetic enhancements but the only surgery to remove a vindictive bitter condescending approach to life, is a lobotomy!
Let the feel good times begin. ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 63

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 63

She is so unsure of herself but he will help ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 63

Hehe, they will manage and Bella will overcome her fear! Edward is just great and they talk it out - this is important for Bella's healing process! So just go on like this, I LOVE this story :)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 63

can't wait!!!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 63

YESSSS...I'm ready for the citrus..Bring it on !!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 63

Just a word of advice Bella, stop running. I know it's your instinct to protect yourself, especially when you think you are in "trouble". But you need to learn over time that Edward is not James. However it is good to seeing you taking more small steps forward.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 63

*squee* *happy dance* !!!LOL!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 63

I LOVE IT!!! :)=)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 63

:)

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