Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 63
I'm ready...bring on the lemonade!
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 63
Bring on the citrus!!
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 63
so glad they had this talk!!
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 63
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 63
Glad they had their talk. yey for upcoming limes.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 63
More more more. Soon soon soon!!!!! Please please please! !!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 62
Bella needs better timing. She just needs to kiss the man. What is wrong with her? Irina is just a bug that needs to be squashed.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 62
All caught up! Love love love!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 62
Bella's timing may stink but it is a topic that Edward needs to purge from their relationship.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
Back rubs can lead to deep confessions!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 60
When will you the connection between Irina and Tanya? It must have been one of the two tramps that followed Edward to Alice's store.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 59
Has Tanya reared her ugly head again?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 58
I wonder if Victoria is at all involved with James at this point?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 57
James must have put a tail on Edward's movements.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 56
That was a massive emotional breakdown. It's a good thing Edward was present to assist her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 55
It's difficult to read Bella's progress towards a self-sustained life then abruptly struggle with huge set backs.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 54
How much longer can they hold themselves in check when the flames of passion overwhelm them so quickly?
Looking forward to the father daughter bonding.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 53
Edward meeting Charlie will be a treat.
Bella needs to help Edward relax with a deep message.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 52
Thanks for not making Charlie a bad dad. Maybe he can help influence someone about James' abhorrent abusive tendencies. Jail time would be nice.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 51
Another obstacle for Bella to push past. I hope her father sees things in his daughter's life differently than her mother seemed to.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
Alice interfered!
Bella will not ask questions but she will get defensive if she is backed into a corner.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 49
Tanya will only become an issue if Edward continues to act in that manner.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 48
The death and destruction will eventually wear a soul down.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 47
Always being pulled away from family events, friends and special moments to play hero. Will it become too much for Bella to handle?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 46
Well, it would appear that dad has already figured out his son's feelings for the girl that baked the awesome cookies.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 45
A very affectionate greeting from Edward's parents.
Does dad arm wrestle Edward for desert?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
Sticker shock, wow I can only dream of ever spending that volume of cash on anything, let alone a SUV.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 43
As gross as the results feel after dry humping, you made the ride fun while it lasted. Next Edward's patents. I wonder how much, if anything has been shared with them by Alice talking?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 42
Edward's sweet tooth has found it's perfect supplier of contraband.
Bella's baking because that's her way of loving Edward? Maybe a fraction of the reason. More likely a way to stave off thoughts of being consumed by her past.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 41
The older generations will always refer to the building as the Sears Tower!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 40
Why would even think about Irina while he's out with Bella?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
Alice is the ever doting sister! At least she isn't too terribly annoying.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 38
Fireworks are so dangerous. I worked in the ophthalmology department of a hospital; the Residents really hated pulling call over the Fourth of July. Inevitable an eye was severely damaged or even lost.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 37
There is no comparison between Isabella and Rose!
Bella will soon believe that she is worth the effort her new friends put into their relationships.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
Team Bella has another booster, defender and life long friend. Bella may even have to ask Emmett to back off the protective vine in the near future.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, Emmett's now part of Bella's inner circle. Whether he wants to be there or not. I hope his life changes for the better as well.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
I appreciate the timeline that had been chosen for them to explore this budding romance.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
I'm finally back in the saddle, riding through way to many updates. I've missed so much in the last six weeks.
I'm happy to pick this story up once again.
Glad Edward and Bella are opening up a bit more.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 62
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 62
Ouch! Way to kill the romance! But I don't think Edward will be mad, it's just his now natural reaction to this name... but Bella is really brave and talke honestly with him and this is the most important thing! She tells him that she's not ready for him to see her and asks about Irina, this is the right direction :)
And BTW: What bomb shall Edward drop?! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 62
While the timing was not the best, it is something they need to talk about. I do notice that Bella comments a lot about Edward making her feel safe and loved. I guess she is still getting used to that after James...
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 62
What a way to ruin a mood Bella. Lol. As always, you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 62
Oh man! I can't wait for more!! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 62
I loved it wow so sweet Bella is and yumm Edward is all man now how will he answer
Date: 25 Aug 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 62
I'm glad that Bella feels safe enough with Edward to tell him openly about her feelings and wants! With her past I think it's great that she's able to be that open with him... And she might not have the best timing for her question, but I get that sometimes things don't come out when and how you want them to;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 62
Smart move Bella, kiss quickly and make it better.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 62
oops. way to put foot in mouth! is she insecure about Irina? she shouldn't be...
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 62
Oh bella. So not the thing to say.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 62
I hope he doesn't take that question the wrong way
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 62
Doh, that comment burns as much as wiping icy hot in the eyes.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 62
Oh my word, really right then? Talk about blocking
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 62
Bella, Bella, Bella. Edward was nice ana relaxed until you opened your mouth with that stupid question.
I am all for him keeping his virgin skin.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 62
She cooled him down but they need to talk about it.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 62
That is why this Bella is so awesome! She has a right to ask. Should she have waited until they were somewhere else, yes. But it's out and I too want to know. Lol
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 61
How about dropping the towel!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 61
I love what he told Bella about her body. Can't wait for more.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 61
I can't wait for more of this story!!! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 61
I get that Bella doesn't feel comfortable with her body, but I hope that time, Pam and Edward will be able to show her, there's no reason for that...
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 61
Longer chapter please, you are killing new.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 61
She is amazing and when she figures that out all will be good.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 61
I loved it poor Bella but the Edward there she will believe home one day soon I hope he tells Bella
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 61
Forget about dropping a bomb, and drop a towel instead!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 61
It will take some time but they will get there she just needs to see that he's evolved and he needs to talk to her about irina to share that he's matured
Love your work big fan
Please keep it up
Xox
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 61
He should talk about Irina, that fool is crazy, Bella does not need her ass beat again.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 61
I think he should talk about it. I also think that Bella needs to let Edward help her with her self esteem. I know she has a ways to go but when she starts showing him more of herself and he doesn't run away, it might help. She could start small.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 61
loooking forward to more
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 61
Hope E trust her enought to tell her about his past soon. Poor B. She def needs more therapy to work on the self esteem issues.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 60
Where are you? I need an update.
Author's Response:
This week has been CRAZY...I've been barely home. I'm hoping to write a lot this weekend and regular updates should resume this coming week. I didn't have any updates ready...Work ~ BLAH. *Snorts*
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 60
I would be worrying if I was Edward. That chic is crazy. If the three sluts get together, it could be trouble.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 52
I don't think even Satan would want Renee.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 48
This chapter is heartbreaking.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
There is nothing like a sexy firefighter. Emmett needs to tell his sisters story and beg for forgiveness
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
I feel so bad for Bella. I hope she has a good security system.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oh I cant wait!!! :)
Date: 19 Aug 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 60
looking fdorweard to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 60
Love this story! Hope your well!
Date: 18 Aug 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 60
hmmm I'm with E. I think Irina and Skankya are related somehow.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 60
So now I have another drug from your side... :-D This story is amazing and I love the characters! Alice and Edward are real jewels, and with Emmett being his usual adorable ass-cracking self, it's a lot of fun!
It is really disturbing that Renee is such a bitch and that she really doesn't seem to be interested in her daughter's well-being. Probably she's paid by James or something... Plus I'm a bit scared that James and Irina/ Tanya will get together at some point and will make Edward's and Bella's life a hell... I only hope that I'm so NOT right with this ;-)
What I wonder about is this thing with Charlie: I understand that Renee told him lies and all, but this is old shit and she has done this for years - why did Charlie never ask Bella earlier? I mean they talked from time to time and only because she sounded a bit different this time he asks and gets the whole story? Don't get me wrong, I find it awesome for the two to get to know each other better now, but this seemed a bit strange to me.
However, I'm curious what Charlie will say about Edward and whether he approves of him ;-)
I hope that Bella and Edward will not have to suffer from James and Irinas crazy plans and that they will be caught before they can do real harm again.
Read you soon!
Bella89
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 60
Wow it was one of the names I picked boy oh boy it's drama crazy town going on hehehe
Date: 18 Aug 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 60
I dont like Irina or Tanya they all freak me out lol
Date: 18 Aug 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 59
I dont think I am going to like who it is and it is going to upset Bella.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 60
Ewww. Irina is such a skank.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 60
I did not even think about Irina. How does she know about Bella? ??? Interesting! !!!
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 60
Maybe Bella can give Edward a massage to help him with his back. ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 60
Damn, I don't know this story seem to be taking a turn toward more drama, I only hope Bella's ready to kick ass and that Edward and the crew will help, bring it on, Tanya Irina, James, Mommie dearest and whoever else wants a beat ass.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 60
So it was someone "new"... Irina was, interesting, but I don't need to see more of her;)
Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 60
Lemon, lemon!